Fight to the Third Generation

After reading Chapter 13, the plot of these "Ten Golden Chapters" is very average and not very attractive. There are very few business parts, and they all focus on campus content.

If I want to change the theme next time, I will slap myself in the face 😭 and write about urban fragrance.

Investing 1 billion in Penguin in 1999, the protagonist's family will always be the richest man in Macao 😏

How can the family foundation be so poisonous? Can you be deprived of dividend inheritance if you are sentenced or have a major negative impact? How much does it cost for a rich person to make a bad person? Especially how easy it is to be aroused by the hatred of the wealthy class. Does the author really not understand? How come you always write something about cerebral hemorrhage? Can I delete something that exposes my experience? ? I've read more than 900 chapters and I'm really pissed off by you.

Nong Qingying

Nangong Tian

I also found someone with the surname Jiang.

Let's talk about some of my faults with this book I was really speechless when I saw the first few women. They are acting in a romantic drama. Who doesn't know that there must be other women outside the male protagonist? Then the author wrote that it felt like the male protagonist was enjoying himself The second is data. The money earned is always billions of Hong Kong dollars or two to three hundred million US dollars. From Yahoo, it is already 200 million, and later other stocks said that they have risen sharply several times, and the losses are only a fraction The third is that you asked Midea to make mahjong tables? I'm really convinced by this The fourth is entrepreneurship. In China, you can be big and complete. In Silicon Valley, I don't know what you will write in the future? I think you will share the profits but take the decision-making power, but will such a large Internet company let a Chinese national make decisions? The rhythm of the fifth chapter is really slow, and it's a hammer here and there. Although I can write a lot, the pace is too slow. It's almost 400 chapters and it's only been a year No more, let's leave it at that.

This book is not my cup of tea. The introduction is misleading. This is daily urban literature about picking up girls on campus.

After reading the latest chapter, the author doesn't understand yachts. Superyachts have a very long range, longer than warships and cruise ships. Because the displacement is smaller than that of serving a small number of people, there is less equipment, fewer warehouses, and a large supply space. A cruise ship of the same displacement has to serve many people, while a yacht only serves a few people. They are all super luxurious and large spaces with various enjoyments, and the remaining service staff take up very few resources. Excess displacement is accumulation of supplies and boat performance.

Everything else is good, but the protagonist's mentality has never changed. This development is too slow. She is a pure loser who knows that her family is rich in this life, but she always does some inexplicable and strange things for a little money. The small farmer mentality is deeply ingrained

I read several of the author's articles. Writing stories is no problem, but if you can make a breakthrough in writing characters, you will be like a great master. The characters lack soul, and the supporting characters are NPCs. If the characters in the book can be brought to life, it will definitely be a hit. I have read a few books and every time the male protagonist starts to make money, I feel the best when reading. Once your career is on track, it feels like drinking boiled water. For example, the rebirth of ordinary people returns to the file. There is a female singer in Beijing, but she only appears in a few chapters after millions of words. From going to the United States to survive to knowing that I would not survive. This character was brought to life in just one chapter. The author currently lacks characters and is not lively enough.

Tao, let's write the ranch pattern in the next book. I can also copy your first book.

To be honest, he is far from a big rancher. There are too many female characters. This one came out before I even remembered the next one. Now it's so bad that it's ambiguous enough to advance the plot?

I read it twice and read dozens of chapters. The character design of the previous books is much different from this one. As a person born in the 80s, I really can't watch it. The male protagonist's character talks to people and has inner narration. It feels like a very childish young man. I can't accept this style as I get older. Many of Qidian's books now have this kind of male protagonist setting. I can't even tell what his personality is. I was able to accept it when I was in my 20s, but when I was in my 30s, I felt it was quite childish. What kind of character is this?

There are already 7 heroines, that's enough Don't add any more, I'm afraid I won't remember them.

If virtue is not matched, disaster will happen; if wealth is not matched, disaster will happen.

It's a pity that America's big ranchers

After looking at it all the way, I think it's okay. I support all orders. Come on, come on, come on!

Good guy, all the four major campus beauties have been collected.

It's not easy. This is the first time since the ranch that I have written a novel with so many words.

The protagonist doesn't like to socialize, so why buy a super yacht? There was already a yacht

Why are America's great ranchers gone?

It's almost finished, one chapter a day 😅

I remember I ordered it all? Why is it gone when you come back to see it?

Well. Don't speed up the plot. If you write like this, you will finish the book immediately. Several of them could clearly be written in more detail. It's all abbreviated in later stages of acceleration.

The May holiday is over. Where is your book?

It is recommended that the next book be written after 2010. The future trend is the biggest golden finger. It doesn't have to go back to before 2000

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