Master of Transfiguration at Hogwarts

A very interesting HP fanfic, and one with obvious advantages and disadvantages. Let's talk about the advantages first: The biggest advantage is that the author's setting is very interesting, with random local deformations every day, which has a bit of a Martin-like feel. What I like to watch the most is the protagonist's troubles and advantages after randomly arriving at strange parts every day. Spell upgrading and magic script programming are also quite interesting. I am now looking forward to what interesting things the author can DIY through ancient magic script programming. Disadvantages: The author is a newcomer, so the character creation was not very good in the early stage. However, the author made rapid progress and had a good attitude. Later, he gradually corrected some character creation problems. In addition, the update rate is 4,000 per day, which is a bit insufficient.

I have reached chapter 50 of this book. There must be something wrong with the character of the protagonist. He is always flustered, hesitant when faced with choices, and occasionally gets a surprise out of the blue. All in all, he does not look like a mature adult, but more like an underdeveloped child who cares about his head and not his butt. If you look closely, at least part of it is a problem with the writing. For example, when the author designed the plot of the protagonist going to ask Quirrell for advice, combined with the words, it can be barely seen that his main reason is because he is in a panic and is eager to master the power to face unknown dangers. However, the writing seems to be hesitant to persuade. For some weak reason (for example, other teachers are busy), I picked Quirrell with a slap on the forehead. It seems that the author is desperately trying to pull the plot. There is a kind of what to do if the plot I designed does not develop like this. How can I continue to write it, but I don't know how to reasonably let the protagonist go. I have no choice but to hold it in... This feeling. In fact, coincidence is a subtle means of advancing the plot. For example, the author can let the protagonist hold a piece of paper with a question written on it and be thrown in front of Quirrell by the castle staircase. Then Quirrell takes the initiative to ask questions after class. When the protagonist sees it, it is a good opportunity and he can ask the professor for advice. This is how it starts to develop. Instead of thinking about it for so long, it actually seemed like a head injury that was really not healing. There is also the problem of characters. Each person is like a puppet in the hands of the author, but the author can only see the lit protagonist. He can feel that after leaving the main plot line, the others basically seem to be motionless, waiting for the next wave of appearances. Others cannot see their own thoughts. Only the protagonist wants to develop the plot and they will act in this plot. For example, there is no plot where other people do something to find the protagonist to advance the plot. This deducts a lot of points for watchability. After all, it is not attractive at all to write a fanfic in which only the protagonist is attractive, not to mention that the protagonist is still the same.

The writing is actually quite good, but there are still some problems in some places. Personal opinions: 1. The protagonist's intelligence, temperament, emotional intelligence, way of thinking about problems, and way of doing things are not like those of a coder in his previous life. Since he is a coder, he must be at least 25 years old. The protagonist feels about the same age as Harry Potter and others, 11 or 2 years old. 2. Quirrell is very strange. When the protagonist knows that there are problems in the school every year, he naturally thinks that Quirrell has social phobia and has the air of a science student. Instead, he is very kind to him. Sitting in the first row behind him, he clearly feels that he is looking behind the protagonist (Harry), but he naturally thinks that Quirrell is not good at making eye contact. Later, he goes to ask Quirrell (Voldemort) for advice. Quirrell seduces him like that. He completely feels like a villain, but the protagonist naturally thinks that he has multiple personalities. Later, he naturally believes Quirrell (Voldemort) who said that he has a short lifespan and needs special materials. He promises Quirrell to tell him about every patrol in the Forbidden Forest (a work-study position provided by the school to the protagonist). It is... Very natural and taken for granted. This creates a huge sense of separation from the protagonist's identity as a reincarnation. 3. The protagonist randomly looks into the eyes of Thunderbird and sees the magic pattern on the curse. Why should he secretly hide it and study it himself? He would rather be known by Quirrell than make excuses. McGonagall is busy, Deng can't be found, Si doesn't like him, the herbal teacher is unavailable, and Fei is very busy in his private life (in fact, he didn't even look for it, he just took it for granted). In fact, isn't the advantage of adults that they are not as reluctant to ask adults for help as children? Don't adults just not find teachers scary, don't find asking questions embarrassing, etc... In short, the protagonist's taken-for-granted mentality and behavior are very inconsistent with the age of 30 in his previous life.

MARTIN MARTIN, every morning you wake up, MARTIN MARTIN, how many characters are waiting for you. It's so cute to turn into a dragon,,,,,,,

I actually thought of Martin's morning😜😜😜

The idea of ​​this book is very good. But the only thing is the protagonist's IQ, or the portrayal of the protagonist is not very successful. As a result, I kept jumping to watch it, and then I couldn't watch it anymore. I hope the next one will be better.

I feel that Jianzheng is really boring. Can't you just study magic? I've never seen anyone pretending to be political. The Wizarding World was originally a fairy tale. What I want to see is fantasy, not revolution. That's it.

Suppose the protagonist wakes up and becomes Lily and goes to Potions class 1: The protagonist wakes up one day and transforms into Lily and goes to Potions class... Snape: "Who allowed you to become like this?" The protagonist stares at the big watery eyes👀: "Professor Snape You know, what happens is beyond my control." Snape: "... A very honest good girl. 20 Points for Gryffindor" "Mr. Potter, please stay aside and don't lead our lovely and honest girl"... ...

It's very interesting. The protagonist gives me the feeling that he is as wise as a husky.

Personal opinion: The original work, whether it is a novel or a movie, is biased towards children. If the audience is children, it needs to be biased towards innocence, courage and so on! The main readers of fan fiction are mostly young people, mostly adults, so after the audience changes, human nature is something that needs to be considered! At this time, if you still imitate the original work, it will give people an uncomfortable feeling. After all, how can an adult enter the world of a teenager? You can refer to Conan!

To put it bluntly, the setting is great. So I think the focus should be on the advantages and troubles that different animal transformations bring you every day. Then as you learn, you will slowly and truly master this transformation, and you will gradually be able to send and receive it freely, and you will have enough knowledge of zoology and magical biology. Finally, you can change whatever you want, and change it whenever you want. You don't necessarily have to lean into the main line early. After all, a rural KB element battles wits and courage with a group of vocational high school students, and that's it.

No, I just can't stand it anymore. The protagonist doesn't know the plot. This setting makes me feel uncomfortable, and the protagonist really has no sense of crisis at all. He doesn't know whether Voldemort's notebook is dangerous, so he just talks about it. He just believes it after just a few words, and just relaxes and lets people invade. Come on, this is a magical world, and using it without confirming whether it is a black magic item is really too depressing.

The idea is very good. If you care about the performance, you need to make huge changes to the early chapters to improve the protagonist's character. The article describes that there are a lot of hot-blooded behaviors. Under the impact of a large amount of information in today's society, high school students can think rationally relatively well. The age group of hot-blooded behaviors is at least 2022, which should be young behaviors. Adult hot-blooded behaviors generally involve bottom-line issues such as being cheated, family members and parents being insulted, etc. Generally speaking, a programmer, a standard social animal, and a person who works overtime every day, the tolerance level is quite high. He is so passionate that adults fight for their friends. How good should this friend be? They must have known each other for at least several years, or even more. After only knowing Harry for a few days, can they become true friends? It feels like making friends with a child. Give you a piece of candy and we will be good friends Either change the character's personality to match the setting, or change the character's setting, such as being young and affected by hormone secretion, leading to childish and impulsive behavior. At least give a logical explanation, otherwise it will be too uncomfortable to watch.

Starting from the more in-depth contact with Voldemort, this book goes off the rails. Not learning the Unforgivable Curse, at least not learning the Unforgivable Curse until you can master it and mature enough, is something that most HP fans have in common. The lines are too messy, including one for deformation, one for coding, and one for black magic... I can only say that it is a bit nonsensical.

I feel like the protagonist is very naive and doesn't look like an experienced time traveler, but the rest is fine

I think you, the author, have put the cart before the horse a little. Instead of developing your own talents, you are learning black magic. Not to mention that learning magical beasts from Newt is useless. There are obviously many places that can be developed in terms of transformation, such as changing your body into various shapes. Animal parts, or turning the internal organs of your own body into the organs of other magical animals. Speaking of the author, have you played Monster Hunter? The magic in Harry Potter is idealistic. You can use your imagination to make the protagonist become various dragons in Monster Hunter, although the possibility is very small.

Author, I am currently reading Chapter 96, and I feel that there are some issues in this book that I would like to explain. I will not go into what others have mentioned. It is why the protagonist is so lone-wolf in developing his abilities. Earlier, he said that wizards should discuss with each other and make progress together. The next second, he developed it on his own. Isn't this a double standard? He also said that he was afraid of being a guinea pig, but after a year, you still can't trust the principal and dean. Isn't it better to study with a decent person who has the best strength than to do it by yourself? According to Dumbledore's character, he wouldn't do anything bad, and to be honest, apart from being of great research significance, the ability to see the essence of magic is not very valuable at all. In other words, few people would realize that in terms of combat, it is not as powerful as the spy skill of Disguise Magus. In addition, the protagonist is only 11 years old. Can you please stop taking such big steps? His strength has improved too quickly and there is nothing to write about later. Originally, academic novels should be gradual except for the invincible flow. You have too much work to do in the first grade. Furthermore, some of the funny scenes are really blunt, such as the Halloween scene, where the excrement gag has been outdated for so long that I really couldn't laugh when I watched it. For example, the random deformation to create contrast was a good laugh. What's more, the professor didn't look like a professor. McGonagall, a serious person who loved his students, would not laugh at him in front of the students, and Flitwick would not get angry with the students because of a mistake in casting a spell. Dumbledore would not speak to the protagonist in a serious and commanding tone, especially after teaching Voldemort. The character has always been a gentle educator and wise leader.

Will the outcome of this operation be like this: The so-called magic is actually the nanorobots developed by humanoids in the super ancient or last era The magic is said to be resonance, but in fact it is the behavior of the robot after receiving instructions.

If the protagonist were an indigenous child and the computer terminology was changed to the protagonist's own assumptions, the book would be much more pleasing to the eye.

Since the protagonist of this book is randomly transforming every day, I would like to collect some random transformation ideas and ideas from readers. Interested readers please feel free to comment on this book review! The specific form is to comment under this book review, the format is: The transformed part + a brief introduction of this part + the plot you want to see happen when this part is transformed into this part; The author of each comment will watch and study it carefully, and seriously consider the possibility of adding it to this book! This event is valid for a long time! Thank you for the month and a half!

What did you write at the end? It's so perfunctory.

The main character behaves like a child, isn't he a programmer?

Where did this Variety Martin come from?

It always makes me feel that later on, the protagonist will become a fusion monster, an ordinary fusion monster, an ordinary magical animal fusion monster, and a legendary magical animal fusion monster.

I was excited for a moment when I saw the title of the book. The one I was most excited about was Transfiguration! I was heartbroken when I saw the introduction!

The author has been updating very late recently. Is it because he is stuck or is he too busy at work (scratching his head)

I feel like there are very few good fics out there. Very nice to look at. The exploration of the power system makes me very interested in watching it. I hope I can become an Oriental dragon soon and have fun

By the way, the transformation of the talent given by the author to the protagonist looks like it has been upgraded, but it still feels like it has not been upgraded. It always feels so awkward (face covering)

Shouldn't Magical Creatures Materials be the inducement for transformation? Why has it become a necessary material? Even if it has characteristics, the fairy's mithril has been transformed, so characteristics should be a parameter. I hope it will be adopted.

Author, I think the protagonist doesn't have to worry about magic materials or magical animal materials. The protagonist first transforms into magical animals and then harvests them from his own body. Isn't this self-produced and sold (laughs)