Myriad Worlds: Seeking Immortality Across Three Thousand Worlds

How can I put it, the writing of Taoism and magical powers is good, but the plot development and the protagonist's outlook on life are really not that good.

It's very strange that the protagonist returns to the main world and actually works as a thug in the underworld. I didn't expect that the protagonist's training is actually used to gain territory. A bit downgraded.

It seems that writing about Uncle Nine is not popular.

There are a lot of flaws that I don't know how to describe.

This book should be changed to Uncle Jiu: The Storyteller Legend. There are too many storyteller dramas in this book.

The character of the protagonist changes so much that it's quite speechless. When I see him snatching flying corpses, he will be upright and arrogant for a while, he will be a thief, a gangster thug, and human nature is greedy. After all, you are responsible for the disaster of flying corpses, and Sandaodaomen will wipe your ass for you. , Countless casualties are ignored, and no credit is given to you at all. Your so-called skills and secrets were all taught to you by others, and you have never repaid others in the slightest. If you follow the path of selfishness, you will go your own way. Don't let the whole world revolve around you.

I finally met a master, and my muscles flowed so much that I vomited.

When I paused for breath, I felt like I was being fed a mouthful of poison.

With the name Wen Fei, I subconsciously thought it was the little guy who was familiar with the author.

After reading two chapters, is there something wrong with my reading or something? It feels like the whole article is just a narrative, and I can't find a sense of immersion.