Mysterious Recovery: Become Wang Xiaoqiang at the Beginning

Damn, this system only selects idiots as hosts.

I can only say that I have no desire to continue reading. After reaching Chapter 49, the protagonist's strength and plot have not made much progress. He has not experienced a supernatural incident yet. The protagonist's character is not pleasant. He has the mentality of a nouveau riche and cannot control his mouth. He talks about everything like human skin, detailed information about ghosts and ghost babies. Do you want to show your superiority as a time traveler? Anyway, I can't stand it. . .

Actually, it's quite good. It's a story that doesn't stand out too much about Golden Finger and maintains the original settings and characters as much as possible. It's mainly about Wang Xiaoqiang. The strength setting part is also okay, there is no strange situation where you can become invincible just by picking up a puzzle piece. The only question is whether you can accept Wang Xiaoqiang. At least this is the last book I clicked on after traveling around the mysterious fan world.

Author, your new book has not done well. Among the three new resuscitation fan books in the same period, yours has the worst performance. The protagonist in one of the other two books starts with the same skeleton ghost as Wang Xiaoqiang in your book. The other two books are as strong as the starving ghosts. The protagonist in your book is the only one. You still can't beat Yang Jian before the Ghost Shadow's death. It doesn't mean that there is anything wrong with the protagonist's slower upgrade. The premise of a slower upgrade is that it is interesting, has new ideas, and has good writing skills. But your writing skills are not as good as those of the other two authors. If your writing skills are not good, you can only survive by writing cool articles. The paths of the other two books are similar for the time being. They are both different in themselves and then complete the puzzle. Every time a piece is added, it will be strengthened in all directions, and three or four puzzle pieces have been completed. But in your book, the protagonist is too weak. Even if the two ghosts are fully revived, they are still weak. They can all be suppressed by Yang Jian's ghost. Even if there is a system, it can only be copied. The castrated version with 60% of the ghost power has to be exchanged for points. To be honest, if you didn't have those two books before, you can still read this one. Although it is not that satisfying, but after reading those two books, I will read yours. I am not saying this purely to belittle your book. If you feel that this new book still wants to be read by no one like the last one, then pretend that I have not said it. But if you want this book to do better, then find a way to adjust it. Really, with your current writing style, it is really only suitable for writing cool stories. When writing cool stories, don't overpower the protagonist. It does not require how strong the protagonist is. At least he will always be better than Yang Jian. Level, unless you are not in contact with Yang Jian, if you are watching a Mao fan, you can level up a little faster in the early stage. After the protagonist has enough strength to protect himself, you can slow down the pace. In the early stage, you can just follow the plot. When the protagonist becomes stronger, you can open an original copy and then follow it with an original copy. This way, the writing will not exceed the original plot too fast, and the interaction with the original characters will not be lost due to too many original plots. When does it count as powerful? In the original book, when Yang Jian truly becomes an alien, he starts to become strong. In the past, many supernatural events were dealt with by chance and coincidence, and he was restrained at every turn. In the previous fight with Ye Zhen, he relied on a coffin nail sneak attack to win a near-death victory. Otherwise, even if Yang Jian became an alien, he would not be able to defeat Ye Zhen. In fact, it would be good to have a Ye Zhen-style protagonist. He would deal with supernatural events without any scruples and just rush forward, punching to the flesh, which should be very attractive.

Do you think that with Wang Xiaoming's IQ, he would be suspicious if he found out that his brother was so abnormal? I feel like Wang Xiaoming is at least half of Chu Xuan

The name of the author is not good. I have passed by it several times. If it were not for the lack of books, I might not be able to click on it

The writing is "too good", you're a jerk for licking the main character, and you're helping an outsider beat up your own brother. You're sorry for your own brother for doing this, Yang Jian doesn't look down on you, you're almost kneeling on the ground and kowtow to him.

Answer your questions. I saw some people say that the protagonist is not strong enough and does not look cool enough. The author is also very aggrieved. The protagonist is an alien from the beginning. With the ability to resurrect, he is already considered a little invincible. Suspense novels can only advance slowly and become stronger step by step. Why do you say that? Because in the last book I wrote a Mysterious Resurrection fanfic. The plot progresses quickly and the protagonist is strong enough. But because the protagonist is so strong, I had to forcibly reduce my wits in the later stages of writing, which made me feel embarrassed. In fact, the overall writing style of this novel is quite good. Of course, this is good, compared to the previous level. The writing style has only reached an average level now. The writing style of the previous book is difficult to describe in one sentence. But after comparing it, I found that although I was satisfied with this one, the results were not as good as the previous one. Compare the two books. It seems that readers still like the plot to advance faster. When reading novels, just look at the plot and the writing style is acceptable. ………… So, I have decided. The plot in the later period will be more closely connected and advance quickly. Also, I just want to tell you something. Because my grades are so bad, I won't post updates, but I will finish the novel on time with two chapters a day. No need to tip, just subscribe if you like it! Although the first few dozen chapters are a bit slow, I am still honing my writing skills. But the plot behind it is quite good, and the writing is also readable. I strongly recommend that you take a look at the following plot, because this is my last supernatural novel. After I pour all my imagination and ideas into this novel, I will no longer write this kind of supernatural novel. It is too wasteful and thankless. The reason why I say it is thankless is because the author has also worked on other websites. Generally speaking, supernatural novels are not very easy to sell, and they are more brain-consuming. The best-selling ones are some brainless pretentious articles, just use a template and change the character name. So I strongly recommend that you take a look at the subsequent chapters, which are really good. This is my last brainstorming and hard work. Readers, please don't laugh at me. In order to make a living, I can only switch to urban novels in the future. It has a wide audience, and the plot is simple, and readers have a strong sense of involvement. It's not even remotely better than supernatural novels. Let me say one last thing. I also read several other fanfics, and the same situation happened with my last one. The protagonist is too strong and often tries to force his wits. The plot has no connection and no coherence at all. For the sake of having fun, I don't know why the protagonist does this. The fighting power is broken, the protagonist has just become invincible, and the back corner is beaten by a minor character again, which is inconsistent. These are the problems with my last book and some new authors. Although the performance of this book is worse than the previous one, from the author's point of view, it has actually improved a lot. The last one. No need to tip, just subscribe if you like it. Not a dime more. I will update it twice a day. Moreover, the quality and quantity are guaranteed, absolutely above average. Please feel free to subscribe, because not only have I finished writing the outline and details, but I have even finished writing the chapters. The current chapter has just written more than 200 chapters. If you like it, please subscribe and the author will make progress together with you. (∩՞ټ՞∩) Meow~~ In addition, I recommend my last novel. Mysterious Resurrection: A Series of Tricks The plot seems quite enjoyable, but the writing is too poor. The protagonist is still very powerful and invincible at the beginning. The left hand can erase, the right hand can create, and it can also be used as a ghost. It's so strong that I just can't control the plot and can't continue writing.

What a garbage novel. The first three chapters only let me see that the protagonist is arrogant, not smart enough, cowardly and incompetent, and a non-human person.

After reading ten chapters, I feel that there is something wrong with the protagonist's mentality. I don't mind if he is cruel and cold, but there is something wrong with the chicken belly...

After looking at 45 cheat sheets, it didn't work, so I ran away!

After reading dozens of chapters, this book is really rubbish. The previous protagonist is cowardly and licky, and has some issues with his IQ. He is soft when he should be hard, and hard when he should be soft. He wants to do good things but is considered uneasy and has no good intentions. He has no action other than losing his temper. He wants to hug someone's thigh but pretends to be cool, which makes people even more wary. And there is no need to use the system. The protagonist is also a real loser. He has such a strong ability to save life, and he is afraid of death. He can find more people. The system does not say that only one person can do it.

Find a bald guy. Become a real strong brother

I found that the author made a mistake in the novel. Wang Xiaoqiang is not a ghost controller, nor is he an alien. To use ghosts, Wang Xiaoqiang must release the ghost skeleton. He is just a human skin. And every time he uses the ghost skeleton, it will consume flesh and blood. After consuming the ghost skeleton, it will walk away. He cannot use the ghost rope by himself at all, but the ghost skeleton. He can only watch from the side.

After reading the comments, save them first, waiting for when the strength will surpass Yang Jian. The protagonists in the resurgence fanfics I read are almost all weaklings. First, they describe how powerful they are, and then the more powerful ones can still compete with ordinary ghost masters at 64, while the weak ones are chased and beaten. I can't stand this kind of forced suppression of the protagonist. I don't know much about the protagonist's strength, but if he is stronger than Yang Jian, he won't continue to be killed easily.

I read book reviews saying that the author put in a lot of effort, but because it wasn't white enough, it didn't reach enough audiences. Isn't this white enough? I don't like fanfics. Is this the upper limit of fanfics? The author claims that his last book was whiter, so how cool does it need to be to attract readers?

The original work was persecuted by editors and deleted too many things.

If this book were placed on the light novel channel, it would be on the sales list. It should not be placed on the paranormal channel, which is a category that is declining.

Goldfinger is lonely? After reading forty chapters, I still didn't see the role of the golden finger. It made me laugh.

Anyway, as soon as I see a systematic book, I will run away! No matter how beautiful the writing is!

Collect ghost buildings and collect supernatural items. 1 Supernatural Item Format: 1. Name 2. Function 3. Origin (can be mentioned briefly) 4. Price 5. Associated ghost (optional) 2 ghosts Format: 1. Code name 2. Level 3. Killing rules 4. Killing methods (associated with killing rules) 5. Form and appearance 6. Origin (can be briefly mentioned) 7. Ability after being controlled (relevant to the law of killing) 8. Price 9. Associated supernatural items (optional) 3 Ghost Controller Format 1. Name 2. Codename Friends who contribute here are not necessarily guaranteed to use it, and may also be modified. I hope everyone knows, thank you all

This book ranks among the top three among mysterious fics. The author should quickly add an outline and continue writing!

Real garbage

I can't stand it at all after watching a few pictures, hugging my thighs? When you write a novel, don't write yourself into it in reality. Not everyone is a factory security guard.

What was the last one? Recommend it.

In the first few chapters, I thought it was a really awesome system, but it turned out that I had to copy the system two or three times, and it was just a joke. After reading dozens of chapters, I came into contact with so many ghosts and supernatural objects. What about the system? Being eaten by the author, I thought the protagonist would really become a wholesaler, but the result... That's it