From the Divine Sculpture to the Heavens

To be honest, I don't know what the time travel to the Divine Eagle is for. Poison Points 1. The protagonist's nanny. 2. Don't collect the powerful martial arts in the Divine Eagle. Jiuyang and Yi Jing bone forging are so easy to get and don't even look for them. 3. The system gives and deducts points for no reason. 4. If you practice so hard and fight with others, you will still get 55 points. 5. Does not have its own martial arts system. 6. Yang Kang's character is entirely caused by Qiu Chuji. . 7. The Nine Yin Manual is an authentic Taoist method, not a Yin evil martial arts. Mei Chaofeng's Nine Yin White Bone Claws were caused by practicing indiscriminately without understanding Taoist terminology.

Is this system of yours used to deceive the protagonist or to help him? And it's actually a system with intelligent thoughts and emotions? ? ? Are you preparing for the final system to replace the protagonist? ? ? This is a system-type plug-in, not a grandfather-type plug-in.

Mu Nianci picked up a white-eyed wolf and got 50 taels of silver. However, in order not to affect Yang Guo's future, the protagonist made his adoptive mother work as a long-term worker in ancient times and became sick from overwork. This is really weird.

I haven't watched it yet. Isn't this the poisonous point of the system trapping the protagonist?

I rarely post things that directly attack the author, but in the second chapter, I directly persuaded him to quit, and he had 50 taels of silver to watch his adoptive mother die of illness. It's all nonsense to say that longing for him makes him sick. Yang Kang's body is so cold that Yang Guo is one of Mu Nianci's current spiritual pillars. Death from illness is definitely caused by illness. Thoughts may cause illness, but it is not the biggest factor. If you say that Mu Nianci recalled Yang Kang last before his death, I think it is reasonable. People say that it is unreasonable for a child to give out 50 taels. If a child has a hundred yuan in his hand, you may think he stole it, but he has a hundred thousand yuan in his hand, saying that he picked up medicinal materials and sold them. Do you believe it? Wouldn't it be okay to say that a traveling merchant bought it? Is it really just "the mother dies and the son laughs"? The first chapter had the protagonist freeze to death, so let's just go to the first chapter "The protagonist traveled through time, froze to death, and the whole book is over".

A group of people who pulled the strings forced the plot back to the original line. In order not to change the plot, Yang Guo was forced to live in a cave dwelling and live in a big house by himself. Wouldn't you be able to write without the plot? It is also said that it is afraid of delaying Yang Guo's future development. If Yang Guo's arm is not broken in the future, will the protagonist, his brother, have to cut it off himself?

The plot of Chapter 7 is really disgusting. The author might as well write Yang Guo and the protagonist to carry the mountain on their backs.

I quit after seeing Mu Nianci die. What's the point of the protagonist's existence? Just to see the protagonist show off later?

He opened the chapter to persuade him to quit, and the whole person looked like a wolf with blank eyes.

A batch of poisonous system files have no effect on them. . . Forget it, I'm too lazy to comment. Anyway, it's very toxic. I can get single digits out of 100.

This so-called system should be uninstalled. It was okay during the protagonist's pioneering period, but since the system can leave the protagonist and join the group of heavens, it has become a trap. The points accumulated by the protagonist through hard work all over the world are reserved for life-saving purposes. As a result, the system does everything possible to deduct points, including coaxing and cheating. The unit is calculated in tens of thousands, but the maximum points the protagonist can accumulate at a time is only 1,000. The funniest thing is that the protagonist has accumulated 70,000 points, and the system directly cleared them when the protagonist was seriously injured and unconscious. It would be okay if he really used so many points to save the host, but more than 90% of the points were stolen by this cheating system without telling the protagonist. It is really disgusting.

As a member of the rebirth time travel belt system, even Mu Nianci died. What are you doing with your life? Goodbye author. I guess you think there are too many people reading your book.

Alas, the more I read, the more... After the previous system problems, I skipped to the ending of the Condor In the world of Tianlong, everyone knows that he hates Wang Yuyan, "with resentful eyes..." I just want to say that your first two lives were in vain, you don't even know how to manage your emotions.

I am speechless watching the divine eagle, seeing that the system does not improve my life, and watching my adoptive mother work so hard. The unfilial son let his mother be killed in order to kill Li Qingluo.

After reading Chapter 18, I really can't stand it anymore. In the beginning, I practiced martial arts since I was a child and fought dozens of gangsters. But in the end, I can't do it anymore! I can only sing: You are so poisonous, you are so poisonous, you are so poisonous, woo woo woo 😰

It's quite impressive. The word count is very high throughout the article. Compared with some studio articles, it's even worse than studio articles.

I quite like the direction, but the progression of the plot is too rigid, and there are too many small bugs that cannot be explored in depth. Moreover, the further you go, the more the system leads you. What on earth is the protagonist going to do? What is his core goal? What difficulties does he have to solve? None can be seen. And you can't just write it all the way and leave bugs all the way. This kind of thing can be tolerated in the early stage, but it becomes unbearable the further it goes. It's almost chapter 30. What is the protagonist going to do in the world of the divine eagle? Don't know until now. In the longer term, Zhutianliu, what is the long-term direction of the protagonist? Let alone talk about it. If you do this, the more you write, the uglier it will become. It is recommended to organize it carefully. For example, in different world backgrounds, you can add a small tag to the protagonist, such as the divine eagle, or to support his younger brother, the demon. The protagonist's own wish, in addition to the goal of personal growth, is to help Yang Guo grow up, which is also very nice. At the next stage, you can change to another one based on the character of the protagonist. The purposeless wandering style of writing cannot keep up with the plot, so it can only be dragged back forcibly, and then the writing completely falls apart and cannot be brought together again.

Brother, go to work in the factory. The author's career is not suitable for you.

There are too many poisonous points, I can't stand it anymore

After reading the comments, a lot of people criticized me, and then I read the book. The author must be a eunuch. This book has become a dead book.

This book will definitely hit the street. If the author can persist to 500,000 words, he will be convinced. Welcome to slap him in the face.

After reading Chapter 24, the protagonist is completely Yang Guo's nanny. All she does is bring Yang Guo back to the main plot.

Anyone whose system intelligence can communicate is blocked. Who knows if it is some old immortal who is ready to seize his body.

Flip through the catalog, watch the nanny flow, and experience it for yourself

It is not a poisonous point at all when the system deceives the protagonist, for example, "I was hosted by the system". The fundamental reason is that it's too white, even when it's cool, it's quite pale. Anyway, please give up your mind before watching it.

Gee, the protagonist who is not worthy of being a tool, really has no emotions at all? We have been together with Yang Guo for so many years, but you can't help when you see him being beaten? Being left alone on the beach and feeling indifferent? Since you want to write according to the plot so much, what small reward can you give me? Just now you were trying to suffocate Yang Guo to death and you went to give him Xiao Huan Dan? Awesome!

I stopped watching it. I felt that the protagonist was just a tool man and boring.

The author of this book is destined to be a eunuch. What the hell?

This is awesome, the system has released a mission to bring Yang Guo, who has lived with the protagonist since childhood, back to the original world line! It is recommended to wear it back immediately, sit at home and turn on the computer to watch "The Legend of the Condor Heroes"

Author, you have a lot of typos and your commas and periods are confusing. You have written more than 600,000 words. Can you be more serious?