Wandering in the Heavens Begins with the Fake Silly Pillar

I have read no less than 200 Siheyuan books. It seems that you are the first to adopt a child with a big man. Can. . .

The God of War in the Siheyuan you wrote is not good at martial arts. He couldn't even defeat three second-rate guys, and was beaten into a pig's head by the opponent. The original fool could beat the second uncle and his family on their knees and beg for mercy. It's basically a 1v5 existence, and you can bluff Xu Damao. I guess whether you can beat Xu Damao in a head-to-head duel is a matter of two people. If you are blind, I will give you a golden finger.

Not a bad start

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I can't stand it anymore. When I saw that the identity card was required for mahua to become a regular employee, I felt like I was from the 1960s. Is it a good idea for the author to write a book and not treat the readers as fools? A minimum of social common sense is required. I suggest you go to the household registration department to find out how long ago the Chinese resident ID card was implemented? Don't be ridiculous

Seeing the strength of Ma Hua who introduced Liu Yifei to his apprentice, he persuaded her to quit

If Yi Zhonghai is willing to adopt a child, will he need your help? ? ? If someone's salary is so high, he should adopt him early! The key is that he is afraid that his children will not be filial when they grow up, and he does not want to pay! Still waiting for now, people just want it ready-made, so they can get something without paying any effort!

Why did the uncle give the widow money and secretly give her things at night? He must have slept with her before giving them.

What is the value of collecting things? By the time it becomes truly valuable, the protagonist will be buried in his 70s or 80s, which will take longer than pension insurance. Fortunately, Maotai is a consumable, and stamps are just paper if there are too many of them. The collection circle is so big! I have seen an author write about a protagonist who collects monkey tickets. In that era, he wholesaled tens of thousands of sets, and he dreamed of earning hundreds of billions from tens of thousands of sets! If you have that kind of energy, you might as well live until the 1980s and buy a few courtyard houses. In reality, even 10,000 units of monkey tickets cannot be exchanged for even one courtyard house in Beijing! The same thing, a unique one is definitely more valuable than a lot of them combined.

Why do you see that the courtyard is full of stupid pillars? If a person wishes to take turns, you can ask for justice for him. He is drunk.

💩The same later plot, the uncle inquires about the investigation situation. He asked the protagonist to accompany him to the countryside, but the protagonist didn't agree and didn't tell him what to investigate. Then he drank with him that night and didn't tell him. We went to the countryside with him the next day. It's not like the investigation team has left. Copying books is not easy!

Why would someone want to be a fool? I really can't match that good looks. He's old, ugly, and cheap.

I don't want to watch it just because of the name Silly Zhu, and I don't want to watch it even if it's a space cultivation. Personally, I prefer to watch movies that rely on one's own wisdom and hard work to change lives, rather than relying on plug-ins. In those days, things that came out of nowhere were reported, and people didn't know how to die.

Eight out of ten books are stupid, and the routines are basically the same.

This is too much of a waste. In the original work, Silly Zhu can fuck the second uncle's family of five, but you, Xu Damao, can't do it. Is there still room for a golden finger? No use

I am also convinced by the use of this punctuation mark. Even elementary school students' compositions are better than this.

The author comes in to see what kind of spirit this person has,

Sixteen yuan for two chickens. A first-level fitter can earn seventeen yuan a month. Just two chickens. That's not even starving to death. This was in the 1960s and 2000. Two chickens only cost twenty yuan. Don't keep writing nonsense. Let's do some research first.

It is considered very good among Siheyuan fan novels, and indeed, as some book friends said, it is not so sadistic. Goldfinger played a lot of role in the early stage, but in the later stage, Goldfinger was almost downplayed. It is not bad.

Almost, definitely almost, all the protagonists of Siheyuan fanfiction must lick the deaf old lady, whether they are dressed as characters from the original drama or original characters (they also lick He Yuzhu). It's okay to say that she is a family member of a soldier, but why are you licking the stupid pillar? Licking for no reason, even the reason is far-fetched.

The author has no basic common sense at all.

Chronicles are all about details. You didn't even check the information. What kind of mess did you write? The settings of the original work and the timeline have been changed beyond recognition. It's really terrible.

I haven't read the novel, but I was disgusted after reading the introduction. Among so many Siheyuan novels, this is the first time someone said that Yi Zhonghai was selfless in helping others.

The key to Yi Zhonghai's strong desire for control is that he likes to play tricks. In his eyes, Silly Zhu is a cow for plowing the land. From the beginning to the end, he has favored the Jia family to support the elderly. He uses routines to make Silly Zhu's biological son not as important as the Jia family. A man has no children in his middle and old age. Suddenly one day he hears that he has a son. A normal person will immediately give up everything to get this son. Moreover, in that era of particularly traditional thinking, being destitute means being stabbed in the back.

The timeline and the ages of the characters have been changed in such a mess that I really can't stand it.

Extremely poisonous, return to the Holy Mother. I would rather suffer a loss than say anything about it.

Law of the Courtyard: Almost all fanfics that are reborn into the main and supporting characters in the courtyard are crap.

Author, ah. Is your mark, point, too casual? Happy. Sui, are you happy? Don't do it when it's time to do it. No, I should point you, but you are blind.

How should I put it? I haven't even watched the TV series and read a few novels before I dare to write. If you want to be original, you can do whatever you want. Since the foreshadowing is Siheyuan, you should at least watch the TV series.

There were so many people escaping from famine in those years that it was easy to find an orphan or a child that they couldn't afford to support. You had to find someone who had parents and recognized them as relatives. What's wrong with having four parents to support your children when they grow up?