Douluo: Start as the Fourth Generation

It's said to be a role-playing system, but I didn't see the characters in Naruto, I just saw you using their power. Just using their power is not called role-playing. If you want to write a role-playing novel, I suggest you read the role-playing novels written by other authors. Although some of them are not good at writing, people also know what role-playing is. In your opinion, you The dozen or so chapters I wrote are embarrassing at best. From a reader's perspective, they are not only embarrassing, but also very unreasonable, such as being forced to become a disciple by Bibi Dong, and running to join Shrek after becoming a disciple, etc. If you really want to write a good novel, then read more about what other authors write (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

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