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The routines are so old that I won't mention them, even the writing is not up to par, and the most basic plot cannot be explained clearly.

Why do people still do this kind of old school reunion thing now? Still harboring deep hatred?

The writing about this class reunion is really rubbish and very poisonous. The protagonist knows that someone is trying to plot against him, so there is nothing wrong with him still going. The gangster asked the protagonist to drink two bottles of Wuliangye before letting him go, and then the protagonist drank. I think something is wrong here. Shouldn't I turn the table over? "The protagonist can only leave after drinking", isn't this a threat? What the hell is it that the protagonist readily agrees to? After the protagonist drank, they wanted to ask others to toast, and the protagonist agreed again. . . In the end, the protagonist pretended to faint before being taken away by others. What kind of bullshit plot is this? It's really too outrageous and too difficult to explain in one sentence. . . . Maybe the author feels that the protagonist is very good at drinking, which is a good point. . . . .

Just this IQ is still 20%? This was also the case in urban novels ten years ago, either this young person or that gangster who was forced into marriage

I've seen a lot of alien civilizations, and the names are all Westernized, but none of the names are Chinese-style.

There are typos in the introduction. How disrespectful is this?

The book is good, don't write it again!

It's simply poisonous. The simplest class reunion, this cliché that all readers know, cannot be written clearly. . . I can't decide how cool it is, c

Could the author write less chapters about ordinary life and those who think big companies can do whatever they want? This is a science and technology article, not an urban life article! Life can be an embellishment rather than scientific and technological achievements becoming the embellishment of life chapters

I said you should stop writing books. You're not suitable. You haven't even finished a cliché plot about pretending to be a classmate at a class reunion. Why don't you know how to copy any books you write? The routine of 10 years ago was so many classmates pretending to be cool at reunions.

Young people have too little experience and the books they write are very childish.

Those who write science and technology articles should pay attention to Chinese language deviations, meanings in Chinese culture, etc. Otherwise, after writing for a long time, it will still be Western culture.

I'm depressed. I read a book written ten years ago that is better than yours. I pretend to be cool everywhere and pretend to be a show-off.

The writing style and plot are childish, but the layout is okay.

A small real estate company, a garbage-like existence, still has to write so much

The preparation was too long, and I never got into the main line. If you have the ability to build a company, how can there be so much nonsense in your hometown?

To be honest, considering the value of the protagonist to the country, it is too trivial to run a small real estate company. The main task is just a small number of words.

Your party drama is too discouraging.

Overall it's still pretty good. It's just that there are too many villains and things that are too brainless. It would be nice if the author could make some changes.