I'm Really Not That Taoist

I feel like you wrote it a bit crookedly. In the beginning, it felt like a cultivating immortal invincible style, but then it turned into a time-traveling story about ordinary people.

After reading Chapter 6, I thought it was a fairy tale, but I didn't think so. . . Slip away, gone away

Reason for dismissal: The plot jumps a lot, I write this now and that now, the context is incoherent, the reading is not smooth at all, and I am inexplicably upset.

How many people would like the various Ming and Qing rules in the Red Mansion, as well as the world view, background and story, in the Tang Dynasty where both men and women were bold and unrestrained? And don't think that you can become popular just by writing a story book, such as Journey to the West, Three Kingdoms, Red Mansions and Gods, etc. How many of those authors are popular among scholars or the court?

So writing a book can bring out the characters in the book

I was originally attracted by the title and introduction of the book, and after reading a few pictures, I could barely get enough of it, but I was persuaded to leave by someone who came out of nowhere.

No matter how much you do it, it's still an ordinary product.

I saw the title of Chapter 10 "Liu Rushi". It was really baffling. A mess of characters from various dynasties traveled to the Tang Dynasty. Who is the protagonist?

To be fair, if Goldfinger was writing a book, he shouldn't be writing about Shushan Biography or Ancient Times. If not, it would be better to write a biography of a mortal cultivating immortality and write about Red Mansions. Is the author female?