My Cartoonist Girl

I feel like it would be better to just write about Yuchan and Hua. The other two are a bit redundant and not vivid and beautiful, which actually lowers the level of emotional writing.

I watched it for a long time, thinking about it while watching it. In today's impetuous society, this book uses plain language to describe a wonderful person, a person who I want to be but cannot be. This simple book review is just to record the thoughts of a real loser.

The squad leader is not the heroine. I really can't understand why you do the laundry 🤔

So well written! Is there any management permission for me to join the group?

The benevolent sees benevolence and the wise see wisdom. This is a very good and detailed book!

I quite like it. The author must be a gentle person. I envy his carefree youth life.

The author's writing is really good. I even doubt whether you are an old author I knew before. I really like this kind of quiet content, just like a pool of water deep in the forest. No matter what, it is there. It is not as majestic as a waterfall or as grand as the sea, but I like its tranquility and elegance. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง! ! !

It's good-looking, really good-looking. Even though it's not my usual taste, I can still watch it. The author should have opened a small account. I have collected it and will come back when I am short of books.

Big boost for the author 55555 Song Yi

Your writing on this book is really good. I have never written a review except for cursing. It's really good. Come on, write more. It's a bit unreadable.

Pursuing new books is very important, it is related to recommendation promotion. If the new books are adopted, there is a high probability that they will be sold out.ಥ_ಥ

My original intention was to make Mu's image more three-dimensional. A character should not be flat and one-sided. It is possible that the people you know have two completely opposite images in the eyes of two people. For example, some people think I am full of lies, while others think I am very sincere. In fact, I tell half-truths and half-falsehoods, and occasionally even lie to myself. I will tell the truth to people I don't know well, tell a lot of secrets that I have never told anyone, and I will also make up a lot of lies to people I know well. People are so contradictory. I know everyone doesn't like Mu Junlan. From Su Songyi's perspective, Mu is a bad person. But from Tan Min's perspective, Mu is a good person. Why? Because neither Su nor Tan saw her entire appearance. How can there be any black and white people in this world? When you hate someone, you will naturally ignore their good qualities. For example, those people in life who give you a bad first impression. No matter how good he or she is later, you will still lose points for them. Your first impression of Mu Junlan in the book is bad. So even if she has a good side, you will always think she is disgusting. On the other hand, when you like someone, you will forget their shortcomings. For example, readers who like Zhi Hua will ignore her willfulness and temper, and even like her tsundere. Readers who like Tan Min, you will ignore her perverse dress, ignore her smoking, ignore her swearing, ignore that she is a bad girl, you will ignore a lot. In addition, I have said before about whether Su will be relieved. It doesn't matter if he doesn't know the truth. It's easier to hate someone than to feel longing and guilt. Mu had no intention of telling him the truth. Later, in order to allow Tan Mineng and Su to be together without any burden, he would even withdraw from their lives and leave alone. Perhaps, when the book was finished, Su didn't know the truth. Or, many years later, Mu Junlan will die in a foreign country. Before she died, Su Songyi met her, and only then did he know the truth of the matter. As he grows older, he no longer clings to the past and finally unties the knot in his heart. This fulfills what Min Yuchan said to him earlier, "Only when your parents are buried in peace can you be happy." Of course, there are others. I have drafted several endings. The plot direction of previous stories would occasionally deviate, so I needed to spend time revising it. The above are my personal thoughts. I know that some readers will abandon the book simply because they don't like the previous plot, and I can understand that. Thank you for your previous support.

I have finished reading the book, and this is my first time to comment. The literary youth is terrible, and the emotions are fake and disgusting. I basically skipped the next hundred or so pictures. Even if the novel is illusory or fantasy, it is best to retain a trace of reality. I don't know if anyone will criticize me, but this is my personal opinion. At least if I watch it once, I won't have to watch it a second time or have any aftertaste. Maybe you will be unhappy with my comment, but I still want to say it.

Zheng is because some people don't like it, so he can only put it in the extra chapter. Tan Min's relationship was confirmed in the chapter Paper Rose, but there is a chapter later that I can't upload, so if you want to see the specific plot, just join the group. It cannot be posted in the text.

This name scared me😿😿

Some readers responded that the plot of this book had no conflicts and ups and downs and was too bland. Indeed, there are not many fierce conflicts ahead. The most intense conflict seems to have started with Liu Xuan. He stole the class fee because of his greed for vanity, causing the class leader to suffer injustice. In the end, Su Songyi broke up with him. The conflicts mainly focus on the issue of family reorganization, between Lu Yiyi and Zhi Hua, Su Songyi and Mu Junlan, Mu Junlan and Qin Min, and Su Songyi's father, who has not been mentioned before. Although the front is dull, the plot has always been buried, including the contradictions and conflicts in the emotional line. The pace of this book is relatively slow, which may be a problem with my personal personality. My style of writing books is relatively slow, and what I yearn for is the love of millet porridge, which may affect the reading experience of some readers. Of course, I will try to make some changes, try to speed up the pace and increase the conflict. But you also have to find a balance between the character's personality and the plot. The intensification of contradictions and conflicts requires a fuse. Finally, I would like to thank the readers who have always supported this book. It is expected to be released on the 1st of next month. I hope everyone can support and subscribe. This is very important to me. Like all migrant workers, I need it to make a living. This is also the biggest motivation for me to write a book. My dream is to have 500 average subscriptions for this book, so that I can get perfect attendance. Well, it's that simple. I never thought that this book would reach Sanjiang and become a fine product, and I also knew that there were very few readers who liked millet porridge-style love. Finally, I would like to thank the readers who rewarded this book again. I did not post my thanks in the chapters because of obsessive-compulsive disorder. I always felt that the main text should only be the main text, so I posted it here.

You're not going to write a story about becoming a single heroine, are you? Anyone can give it up, but Zhi Huan cannot. After all, he has sacrificed so much for the male protagonist.

There may be a few more emotional scenes for the supporting characters later in college. By college, when Su and several female protagonists have completed their emotional lines and confirmed their relationships, the book should be finished. After all, so much has been laid out for the emotions of the previous characters. When finishing later, the progress may be faster. The book is expected to be about 1 million words long. A love story with about this number is good. Any more would be counterproductive and make readers tired. If the next book is about daily love affairs, it will probably have a single heroine. The female protagonist is Zheng Yuting's type. A girl from an ordinary family, the male protagonist will also be an ordinary person. I will write the next book in the same way as a memoir, just as a record of my youth. Of course, it is also possible that I will write a book about urban supernatural beings or fantasy. This is what I have always wanted to write. I have written tens of thousands of words in drafts about urban supernatural beings, and I have written a hundred or hundreds of thousands of words in the fantasy genre before. Thank you again to all readers who support genuine subscriptions, thank you!

After watching half of it, I can only say that it is tasteless and a pity to abandon. The male protagonist is too disconnected, but the other characters are well portrayed.

Let's not clear up the male protagonist's biological mother. . . Although I can't see anything now, but... . Anyway, I would probably give up the book if I could clear my mother's name. . . Cheers, author

The writing is delicate. But tmd I have to complain, the previous one was a bit too much, but Chapter 173 is too outrageous, the male protagonist is exactly the same as a shou, it reminds me of the classic video (Honey, please say something), I think some fujoshi will like this kind of soft character male protagonist. Normally, most boys like the heroine's slow-paced night terrors. The captain and regimental leader of the giants, a real man like Huangtian Emperor Shi Hao. The male protagonist's character is too feminine and weak, which greatly affects the viewing experience. I have reason to doubt whether the author is really inspired. . . . . I feel like a real man can't write a male protagonist with this kind of character.

EDG3 won 2-2 without adding more points to celebrate.

Build an idiom solitaire building. Baidu is not allowed. If you can't think of it, please give it a thumbs up! Let me start by saying it~ Lifelike

After so many years, I suddenly recalled this novel today. I still couldn't relate to it. I searched for it for a long time before I found it. I came here specifically to comment. I'm afraid I'll die of pain if I don't comment. At first I only saw the uncomfortable abandonment of the book by the main character's mother. As for why the boss in the comment section analyzed it better than me, it made me a thousand times more disgusting than another book "Classmate Li Zhuangsheng Doesn't Want to Be Reborn" which is more famous in the light novel circle. Even though the male protagonist's emotional mysophobia was just as twisted in that book, I could forget it only after a few months. , Your book has left an impression on me for several years. The male protagonist's mother is simply unworthy of being a mother, abandoning her own children. What do you want the children who were abducted by human traffickers to think? I'm really afraid that those children will have a shadow of their childhood after reading it, and will they feel that they were deliberately abandoned. You really shouldn't have published this book at the beginning. There are still too few people scolding you. I should have said this a few years ago, but I feel much more comfortable saying it now.

Oh my god, this protagonist's biological mother is so vicious

Automatically subscribe, I don't know if it counts as follow-up. I'm afraid that sometimes I forget to follow up If I don't want to say more, sister Yuchan is here! ! !

Has anyone passed the full subscription group?

By the way, does anyone know why the lazy book is gone 🤔

I feel that the author's name may be taken from Lingxi (guess) she was also a kidnapped deer

Why, why? It's obviously a very sweet love story. Why is the plot in the middle so bloody? As long as the plot is less bloody, the results will definitely be better at this time. This bloody plot is just like the Korean dramas from decades ago. 😢