The Day I Checked in in the City

I just took a look and it feels good, keep up the good work 👍

The book is really a good book. The portrayal of the characters in the beginning and some of the character arrangements are good, and it is also a warm daily novel. However, after it was put on the shelves in the later period, it started to let itself go, and there were more and more bugs. And the author, if you don't understand some of the twists and turns in the upper level, don't touch it. You don't even know what it is written. Moreover, the protagonist is already rich, has an industry, and is influential. There is no need to have super powers when things happen, okay?

No

Talented people can't change their true nature as diaosi when they have money. They want to show off but are very blunt. One of them is a pyramid scheme written by a college classmate, another is betraying friends for profit, and a natural troublemaker is even looking for a girlfriend. There are not many normal ones. The plot feels very jumpy and lacks good coherence.

The author writes less politically related things to alert us to future security. As a result, you can't even connect the Chinese characters 918, and the Chinese characters have to be replaced with letters. Tell me who is threatening your security. How can the US imperialism prohibit you from typing the word "China" at the starting point?

The protagonist accepts so many women, but wants to get distracted. How long will it take for you to queue up a few in a day in the later stage? The cuckold is firmly hanging on your head. It is not a fantasy and you can do it separately 😎

After writing 300,000 words, a lot of women came out. This is extremely toxic. Who the hell is reading a lot of novels with female protagonists now? Two girls are enough

Gao Min

Is it okay to steal pictures? I think it's pretty good, a little red flower.

The author is a newcomer at first glance and cannot figure out the difference between reality and online articles. Some things are normal in reality and there is no problem. But when placed in online articles, it is a bad point. Especially when it comes to licking dogs. Although you lick very carefully, the brothers can't accept it.

What does a cadre of a township enterprise have to fear? Just pat your butt and walk away like a factory. What else is there to be afraid of? You are scared every day.

How about

The man he wrote was a bit tougher. If Gao Minchunchun, old B Green Tea, helped her, she would call the police. This meant that he didn't touch her. Otherwise, wouldn't the main character be destroyed directly? Don't give the protagonist a dick mentality. If you have a system, isn't it a genius? What kind of woman doesn't have that?

This book has been collected since 10 days. Originally, I thought that one thousand collections would be enough to complete the current achievement. I didn't expect it to reach 10,000. The results are not good, but I am satisfied if I can collect more than 10,000 yuan. When I first started writing, I didn't dare to think about it! So there is no need to leave messages of ridicule and contempt. You tell a street guy, what did you write, does it make sense? When a book friend asked me to write, I would write, at least with perfect attendance. This is perfect attendance, how dare you think about it! In order to write this novel, I stopped reading novels and watching TikTok. Staying up late and working hard, I found the feeling I had in the college entrance examination before. One word, cool! I had an outline at the beginning, but I underestimated the power of book friends, which can really affect your state of mind. I dislike those that are not exciting, I dislike those that are entertaining, and I dislike those that have a single female protagonist. I despise those who have multiple female protagonists, those who engage in ambiguities, those who rent cars, and even those who don't despise anything else, I despise the one who wrote your book! My mentality is broken! I became obsessed with revising the previous article, but all the ideas behind it were gone. How could there be a climax? The outline was shattered! As a result, I have changed it over and over again, and my whole body has been bruised and bruised. Writing this is not to shirk anything. The writing is not good, the control is not enough, the excitement is too little, and the plot is cliche. These are all present. I just want to warn latecomers, before writing, check the poisonous points, decide on the introduction, and then decide on an outline, don't change it, just for people who are used to your style. No matter how much you change, you will still see what should be seen, and what should not be seen will always go away. I changed it again and again, and finally the one I read was gone, but the new one couldn't stay. In the end there was nothing. A man with no skills - turns out to be public opinion!

Pastoral pin

If the protagonist wants to be a lot of losers, it will be outrageous and slip away.

It's basically useless after Chapter 581. It's a waste of time and money. To be honest, the author might as well just leave it alone, or end it directly. This kind of fooling is equivalent to cheating everyone's starting point. I'm writing a book, no matter how good it is, I won't read it.

It's so beautiful. Why write about the apocalypse? The wives have all run away, are you serious? Writing to death is better than running away and eating flies...

Good. After watching too many people, you start to pretend to be cool with unlimited money. This is Qingliu! Full booking waiting for the outbreak

Damn it, I suddenly fell in love with a divorced woman. It's so disgusting.

Xingba has you, the spring is warm and the flowers are blooming.

Why are you so submissive even if you have a system? Can't you be a little more confident?

Xiao Du continues. I hope I can check for typos before uploading.

The book is very good. I'll give you the monthly pass. Please help me improve it.

To be honest, I didn't feel poisonous...

A novel that was abandoned at the beginning without even using a single chapter, purely masochistic, written for the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles?

3 Monthly votes, vote tomorrow. Brother, do your best to canvass votes.

How about this

It took more than 30 years for the first legal female supporting role to appear at this pace

The subject matter is very life-like, but the protagonist, isn't it awkward for readers? Either you write about pure love, or you write about being domineering and scumbag. What are you writing? There is no main line. If it sounds good, it's easy to live with the situation, and if it doesn't sound, it's just a running account