Rise from Fantasy Westward Journey

I really want to write a novel →_→ Don't write Fantasy Westward Journey. It's really boring. No one really reads it. It's purely a personal favorite. I have nothing to say.

You should play Dragon Palace, and later switch to Dragon Palace to practice techniques. The protagonist has the power of the candle dragon and is somehow related to the dragon clan.

It was fine at first, until he spent 30 years of his life to fulfill his dream of marrying a hibiscus baby. Then he knew that the author started to get excited about writing. The more he wrote, the more climax he got. Yes, a total of more than 70 years of life. He spent 30 years to marry the baby to fulfill the dream of the previous life. I couldn't understand this operation, but I was shocked!

When I saw the forced apprenticeship, I withdrew. A Xingyiquan practitioner forced a cultivator to become a disciple. Then the cultivator practiced for a while and said that martial arts is to develop the inner body of the human body. The author forcibly exaggerated the effect of martial arts. Can martial arts and cultivating immortals be compared...

The idea is good, but I feel like the author's writing is too low.

I can't stand the latest chapter. You are all reborn masters and you still don't know how to practice? I just have to arrange for someone to be the master from nowhere. If this master were a saint, he would think I was farting. If it were Jinxian, an incompetent little guy like Da Luo would be too lousy.

What are you writing about? If you don't know how to write, don't write blindly. It seems that the author has never played before and is just following the trend.

When the character dies, the level is reset. I feel that this setting is almost unplayable for the ancient version of Fantasy. It is easy to die in ordinary tasks. If you have a high level, you can open a strong P and fuck whoever you want. Is everyone in Chang'an City in a daze? The protagonist is still playing the Tang Dynasty. A sleep kill by Fang Cun can make the protagonist clean up and practice again in minutes. In the old version, Fang Cun single-handedly sleep kill is unsolvable. I don't know how the author set it up like this.

No matter how ancient the dream is, it is still a virtual setting, and it is outrageous if it cannot make voices. And then clear the setting, what the hell, who dares to open up wasteland? How can players develop without opening up wasteland? In addition, there is a big family in Blue Star. It is strange that everyone is not starting from the same starting line. Under such circumstances, guns are banned. After knowing that guns are banned, they still go out to buy guns before rebirth. There is no need to write in the mode of population explosion, it is easy to control, and all kinds of flowers, birds and spirits can be included. My imagination is wide open, but the settings are not in place. Please think carefully.

The idea is good and the writing is pretty good, but it's just a bit watery. If you haven't played a game like Fantasy, it's useless to write down some detailed procedures. If you have played it, it's completely watery. Also, is it really good for your protagonist to be so dark? ? It's fun to be dark sometimes, but why not be so dark all the time? ? ?

From your introduction and plug-ins, it is clear that reality is the main world, and then when you enter it, it is all about games. Your settings are very problematic. It's okay if you want to be the main writer of the game. Then you should write it more clearly, right? What is the function of your golden finger? You should write it more clearly. Do you still want us to guess? My guess is that by using the golden years, you can get the profits from the previous period? The consumption is half the life span of the time you selected? Is that so? Thinking about it, it's a bit wrong. You spent 4 hours upgrading and caught a BY sea caterpillar. Then you used a cheat to select the 4 hours of income and turned it into an ordinary sea caterpillar. In other words, the function of the cheat is to replicate the operations within the selected time and the income is completely random. Is this true? For example, you spent half an hour doing two rounds of master missions and gained experience and money, and then used Golden Finger to spend 15 minutes of your life to replicate the half-hour operation. You also completed two rounds of master missions and gained experience and money. But the specific amount is not exactly the same but fluctuates according to the rules of the game? Is that right?

I invested. Although I know that writing about fantasy will probably make my investment fail, but I invested just because you wrote about fantasy. I am convinced that fantasy is awesome.

Come on, bro! I just like things that are imaginative and not outrageous.

Seriously, if you can get a skill for free, wouldn't Wuzhuang be the best solution? Hunyuan Daoguo, plus the protagonist's golden finger, wouldn't it just take off?

I haven't watched it since Chapter 7 when I started to build a gang. As for the benefits of running Shang Qinglong, it was obviously copied and pasted from "Fantasy Westward Journey: Return to 2005", and almost no words were changed, which is also a good review!

Find a black factory and work honestly! A monthly salary of 2,000 yuan, isn't it delicious?

If the hang-up is too big, you have a lifespan of four to five hundred years. If you spend a hundred years on five accounts, each account will earn 20 years of business experience, and you will gain ten years of business experience, tribute, and money. It has long been possible to reach full levels, full skills, full training, and full gang skills. It's outrageous to write about normal grinding game plots and normal upgrades. Forced intelligence? Wouldn't it be nice to have this time to return to reality and practice cultivation? After playing a shitty game, you can improve your cultivation. Go back to the game to make more money, and then bring back the game skills to strengthen yourself, right? There is nothing wrong with writing a game, but the problem is that this lag is too big. The protagonist is forced to lose his intelligence while playing the game normally. With this kind of lag, normal people will be at full level, even if they don't upgrade and stop leveling to make money, there are twelve sects and other activities. It's useless. Open more business, build equipment, combine babies, combine gems, and other businesses to earn fantasy coins. Realistically, if you When Krypton reaches the Mahayana stage or the Tribulation stage, you can open tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands of alt accounts in the game, make money, bring back equipment, and bring skills back to reality. With this plug-in experience, skills are not a thing at all. The main thing is to open more and make money. Of course, you can also show off and stand aside for other things. If you have this cheat, but you still follow the same rhythm as ordinary people, then what is the point? To be honest, I was embarrassed watching it.

I went in and took a quick look and left. I wish the author a happy update.

, The last few chapters are too watery, give it another try

Why is there suddenly an extra master?

How do you recommend this writing style?