Dragon Ball: The System Ran Away from the Start

Isn't the heroine Lan Qi good? There is no need to step on two boats, the boat will split by itself

The heroine android No. 21, I think it's okay

The heroine can be a size 18. Bulma is very beautiful and nice, but to be honest, her personality is not suitable for being a wife. The one she is most suitable for is indeed Vegeta.

The progress of the plot is inexplicable. Some things can be done in one go, but you insist on making accidents without thinking.

I really can't bring a name like Li Ming into the Dragon Ball world

Looking at the final development of Goku and Vegeta, it is actually the development of two paths. One is Goku's martial arts route, and the other is Vegeta's warrior route. No one is higher than the other. After Super Blue, both of them went their own way. First of all, regarding Super Saiyan, you also mentioned in the book that you need S-cells, high combat effectiveness and a calm and pure heart to ensure that S-cells continue to grow. After the protagonist went to the universe, he provoked a lot of enemies, killed everywhere, and was emotionally unstable. The protagonist's heart is not pure to begin with, and his state of mind is not calm. How can it be possible to increase S-cells? Moreover, the higher your combat effectiveness, the fewer S-cells you need. Vegeta also transformed at Bulma's house. He thought that Frieza was dead. He had no hatred and no killing. He only retained a warrior's heart and fell in love with Bulma again, so he could truly calm down. And the protagonist has followed Vegeta's old path. Logically, his S-cells will not increase, so how can he transform. Second, how could Myers teach the protagonist to be at ease. . Maybe the angel likes the protagonist? To put it bluntly, in Myers' eyes, the protagonist's actions are not much different from Frieza's. The only difference is that Frieza's combat power is higher and his ambition is greater. Goku has a sincere heart for martial arts, Vegeta has a sincere warrior heart, and Tianjin Fan is similar to Song Que, who has nothing else but a martial arts heart. The protagonist has an impure heart and is full of distracting thoughts, so it is impossible for Myers to look at him differently. Third, even if Myers gives the protagonist the ultimate freedom, he will not be able to learn it. There are prerequisites. It is a divine control skill. It requires the realm of a god. That is, only by comprehending the breath of god can you be qualified to learn it, not by learning it. With the breath of God, you can understand the breath of God. If you learn the breath of God, you will have the power of God, and you will truly reach the realm where you can fight against the God of Destruction. If you don't have the breath of God, how can you learn the power of God. Fourth, when it comes to the ultimate freedom of mind, we have to talk about earth martial arts. After practicing earth martial arts to a high level, and with the breath of God, you can perfectly connect to the ultimate freedom of mind. When you reach the realm of Kame Sennin, although there is no breath of god, there is a realm similar to freedom of ultimate intention. There are many warriors. The only thing lacking in martial arts practice is the earth. From the martial arts of Kame Sennin to Bobo's heart as still as water, they are all in line with the ultimate freedom of expression. Fifth, regarding the full power of the super match, the protagonist did not dare to fight Frieza in the super match before fighting Gula. The article said that it consumes physical strength, but you are in the full power state. Goku can use full power for 10 days without consuming it. Full power should be the most perfect state of a Saiyan, and it is similar to normal consumption. . How come it consumes so much energy? Sixth, Broly's question. Super's theatrical version has a new Broly chapter, so it can be considered the main chapter. Why did you write an old version of Broly? I can't understand Seventh, Broly is too violent and doesn't understand the ways of the world. The protagonist doesn't know how to teach Broly how to read and digit? In the enlightenment stage, Turtle Sennin will also teach Wukong to learn culture. It doesn't mean that he wants to be a scholar, but at least he can understand the world. The protagonist doesn't even know how to let Broly learn to read? Broly's current mental age is obviously that of a child. If you let Turtle Immortal educate you for a period of time, and let the gods educate you for a period of time, wouldn't it be better than what you taught him? I am nothing. . Some opinions

The plot jumps inexplicably, without any logic. I write whatever comes to mind. The author's own ideas are probably not complete (I mean all the relevant characters in one thing, the images of everyone's actions and thoughts, so detailed that I opened my eyes, propped up the upper body with my hands on the bed, and the quilt fell from the neck to the abdomen. I don't want to describe this paragraph in words, but I have to have this image in my mind when writing the book). Some places are skipped because I don't know how to connect them, and then I just don't write things that everyone should know. The novel is not like this, so why is there a large part of the novel full of nonsense? Just for connection. For example, I go out to play with friends in the morning. This is the author's way of writing. It is too lean and is also a normal way of speaking. But in the novel, you must write it as getting up in the morning, getting dressed, washing up, going out to buy breakfast, and after breakfast to find friends. There are many actions in life that are too repetitive, so we ignore them. If we don't write them down in the novel, they will seem out of touch.

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In the first few chapters, private goods are added. When did the original Super Saiyan work say anything about squeezing life force? At most, physical strength is exhausted quickly.

Are there too many private goods? This is the first time I heard that Super Saiyan consumes lifespan in exchange for power.