Naruto: Starting the Holy Grail War

You're seriously biased. In the first game, it's Jin Shining. In the second, it's average. In the third game, it's King Ha + Red A version of Sasuke + Shining's wife = Shining. It's obvious that you've already decided on this, and after a few games, it's a theorem that the protagonist team will win.

All I can say is that Kinpika has been strengthened at the epic level, and Nagato has been weakened at the epic level. Regardless of whether the Samsara Eye can absorb magic power, it is outrageous that the heretic golem cannot withstand the bombing of Kinpika's noble phantom. It can withstand Kyuubi's Void Dog Cannon without any damage. The Eight-Tailed Kyuubi's Tailed Beast Jade cannot hit it, even its own tail. Even the Beast Jade can be carried. If your Golden Pika doesn't explode the Noble Phantasm or Liberate the Noble Phantasm, I doubt it can have the power of the Nine-Tailed Void Dog Cannon. Even if the Heretic Demon Elephant is an empty shell, it just can't hold the Tailed Beast Jade. The defense is not necessarily much lower, otherwise the Six Paths wouldn't leave its body behind. If you want to break through its defense, you Jin Pika must use your EA no matter what, to be qualified, right?

After reading this book, I can only say that Xingyue has strengthened and Naruto has weakened.

I don't think you should write based on settings, just write based on expressiveness. Most of the comments in the comment area are about the settings of the moon. I really don't understand. Isn't Naruto strong enough to play the setting? At the beginning of Naruto, Naruto said he would rush to school at Mach 5 speed. Even if you think he is bragging, Shiro's setting is that in his ice crystal demon world, his speed is the speed of light. Doesn't this setting scorn a large number of heroic spirits? The sealing technique in Naruto is even more awesome. Kaguya said the seal has not been sealed yet I recommend writing in terms of expressiveness.

Jin Shanshan is just like Uzi, they are both cjb, they have a very strong reputation, and they smile when they see their results.

When Little Sun comes, Jin Pika should be more serious. After all, Jin Pika has been coveting Little Sun's armor and gun for a long time.

The book is well written. Everyone is reading the book. Don't add some settings, which will affect the mood of the book. After all, if you really want to say it, no fan novel can withstand scrutiny. It is not easy for the author to use two stories as a springboard, and the writing is also wonderful. Although everyone is discussing the level of the power system, don't forget that Naruto itself has a lot of things that cannot stand the test. When talking about these fan works, just read the book. If it is well written, subscribe. If it is not well written, there is no need to argue.

If you want to talk about the setting, then you have to talk about the setting. The other type of moon depends on the setting, the Naruto depends on the performance, and the performance does not even depend on the hard cloud. Shining is the father of Mushroom, and he relies on stacking two carbons to transform Tokyo's stacked explosion city. Can you not use it to make trouble? Have those of us never seen the moon or something? We don't see as much as you Yunchui? As for the concept, this thing and Che Wan were at odds with each other at the beginning. In the past, there were those who were boasting about the origin, against people, against armies, and against the world's Noble Phantasm. Why are they boasting about the settings now? Is it true that Naruto can't blow or something?

The incarnation of the mysterious system: (Priest)

After taking a look, the double standards are extremely serious. I also wanted the Heavenly Lock feature to take effect and cut out the functions of artifacts such as the Eight-foot Mirror. Just write it like this. Shining can just use EA to blow up the ninja world.