Burning Ember

Newbie, new book, currently working hard to conceive it, please recommend, discuss, and learn from it

Isn't it possible to sign a contract for such a book?

After reading a little bit, I feel that the author's writing is a bit of a running story. He did not highlight the key points at the beginning and did not explain the background. I thought it was a sequel to some book. The three golden chapters were very unsuccessful. Although he was very perseverant, it was inevitably the opposite of success.

A few simple suggestions: First, delete the part about the Second War at the beginning, which is more sensitive. Second, the names of these protagonists are a bit unrealistic. Third, the plot at the beginning is slow and not very interesting. Let's talk about this much first

Why is it so miserable, only three comments?

I have some suggestions, I don't know if the author wants to hear them... I gave suggestions to others before, but got scolded for dozens of times, which made me scared😨 If you want to hear them, please reply to me and I will explain in detail.

Good guy, you can actually see free books now

The author is very perseverant and can write well. Unfortunately, it is not very popular. I can let this book be seen by more readers. Wowei: yaayaa335