Asura Emperor

Finally, the new book is here! I was in my first year of high school when I read *Shura Heavenly Venerable*, and now I'm a senior in college reading *Shura Emperor*. Of all the novels I've read, the one that left the deepest impression is the part in *Shura Heavenly Venerable* where Wutian is betrayed by the person he trusts most. It really made me cry; that kind of pain truly touched me.

Asura Heavenly Venerable is really good, but Immortality was too drawn out. I wonder how this one will be.

Old Meng, please, please don't make the common mistakes of cultivation novels. Do something worthy of your title.

I read *Shura* in fifth grade, and now I'm a freshman in college. I think Wutian is arguably the most intelligent character, while *The Undying War God* is somewhat underwhelming. The beginning of this book follows the same old formula. After seven or eight years of writing, I think Lao Meng (the author) should try to improve his writing style and the intelligence of the supporting characters.

Why are there only two chapters? Where are the previous chapters?

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Is that the end?

Three life souls are too many. Focusing on one would actually allow for a better writing experience. Having so many can easily feel tedious and lead to omissions. Authors shouldn't write about life souls becoming useless later on. I've read many novels where life souls and martial souls are very important in the early stages, but they never appear again in the later stages, and none of them are connected.

I read *The Immortal* in sixth grade, then *The Asura Heavenly Venerable*, and I'm still reading it now in my second year of high school. It feels increasingly padded, especially *The Immortal*, which feels like it's been constantly filled with filler.

Keep it up! Your novel, *Asura Heavenly Venerable*, was the first novel I ever read, and it was really good. You'll do even better in the future!