The Strongest Elf Friend

Jiangjiang is here, bringing army hot pot, Bobo chicken, dried tofu with egg, fried tofu and steamed bun soup, and snail and lion rice noodles to watch the big book and make a call while eating.

Hey, Jiangjiang has settled in this elf article.

I feel like the author can't always distinguish between priorities. Writing a heroine is about the same as writing about a harem stallion. He's ambiguous with multiple women. He's lying by saying he's just a friend! I wrote an article about a travel companion, but the article contained an entertainment plot, which gave people a very confusing feeling!

Since you are called a travel friend, write more about travel. You only write about one scenic spot in this month. You are not like a travel friend at all.

It's worthy of being a daily guide.

To be honest, you would be better off simply writing about travel. You should write less about battles. There will be many problems, such as not remembering skill effects well or losing characteristics. There are too many flaws. Simply traveling and eating and drinking with Pokémon is much more expensive than writing about battles.

Li Luna

Does the author have any misunderstanding about the King of Leave? Keep attacking first, and the snake bear can only hide or be beaten. Are you sure that its characteristics have not been taken away?

I thought about the equipment for outdoor travel in the Pokémon world. The first choice is the Coal Turtle. Inspired by the sun and the moon, the Coal Turtle is a mobile stove that can eat hot meals and hot dishes. Then it has three mounts, land, sea and air, milk from a big milk tank, and a super-type such as Goth, which can be used as a housekeeper.

Chapter 56 I posted four comments but only saw two? Also, author, the title of your book is there, so don't pay tribute. These chapters of your tribute to Beichuan's plot are just digging your own grave, to be honest, inappropriate and too blunt. The title of your book is there, but how much did you write about your travels? At the beginning, there was once for Neptune, once for catching the strange snow boy, and then the several trips in between were briefly mentioned. The main trip was not written well, and now there is a plot to pay tribute to Beichuan University and a wave of live broadcasts, games and high school leagues ( Regardless of the title of your book and the main line of your travels, this paragraph is really not very well written, and there is nothing interesting). Really, I can only say that a good tribute is the icing on the cake. You are loosening the foundation of your house, which is already loose, for fear that it will not collapse.

The plot is confusing. It's obviously a travel story but contains a lot of entertainment. The part where the poachers beat me also makes the protagonist feel stupid. I can't watch the rest of it.

Is there a female protagonist? I want to see a single female protagonist QAQ

Resolutely stick to a single heroine, there are too many heroines, Nazi, let's find another one.

Why do so many people not understand? What they want to read about elves must be stories about elves. Otherwise, why not read an urban novel where the protagonist has a pet?

If you write multiple female protagonists in elvish literature, you will definitely be shocked, I said so.

My evaluation: Not as good as the first blazing roaring tiger in the universe

The action against poachers is too strange.

Miaomiao

Pokémon is really suitable to be combined with travel articles. Unfortunately, the writing requirements are too high.

The new Pokémon game resets diamonds and comes with three teams, Team Hikaru, Team Crimson

Don't Miss Joy and Miss Junsha exist in the area where Pig's Feet is? ╰（‵□′）╯ As you said, I haven't seen the subscription section yet, but you are a bit wrong about the topic. You haven't written about travel yet.

The place names in the novel are so dramatic that they slip away

Are you a eunuch, or do you just like fishing?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

When you see Lu Lina, come in and post 🐶

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Mainly because I like the heroine