Tennis King of Tennis System

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt it was a bit weird and abrupt. Some words and tones were translated from Japanese to Chinese. If the setting were changed to Japan, it might not be so abrupt. Overall, it felt like a car accident imitating the novel of Internet King. In fact, it would be better to write a Net King fanfic from the beginning or go to the other extreme and be similar to another novel Match Point, which is more in line with the true portrayal, but I don't recommend learning it.

Hey, how could there be so much malice in playing tennis? I thought it was someone like the King of Tennis, but in the end it was just a show-off and a slap in the face, and there were too many sneers.

In three chapters, there were no less than ten sneers. I wondered if the protagonist had some mental problem, or if his face was made of ice. Sneer and make a fool of yourself! I am simply speechless.

Five points means world class. It turns out that a junior high school student has five points. Your world class is really worthless. Your writing is full of errors and omissions.

The beginning is okay, but the more I write, the worse it gets. If I'm ruthless enough, I can make a small fuss. I know that my writing is bad, so I will change to write more fun at this time. I don't even lose my desire for revenge. You also forcefully sensationalize, and you don't have to be smart. Previously, I wrote that grandma is a legendary boss. Although it is not very appropriate, but if it is to set up a foreshadowing for Tanaka Ken, it will be like this. But you are completely confusing things, and you are fooling the readers into thinking they are fools. That's enough.

I hope that my friends can collect and invest a little bit without being eunuchs!

It's too dark. I almost want to delete it. Why does a good tennis article have such messy things? Isn't it better to write about tennis and the game? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

I always feel that what the author wrote is a bit strange, that is, the skill, power, and speed are extremely high. Why is the ball speed so fast? Shouldn't the speed of the ball be at its peak? Extreme speed should be things like reaction speed, movement speed, etc. The three paths of different dimensions of power support the ball skills, the ultimate way supports itself, and the glorious way suppresses the opponent. I think this is the case. In this case, the most influencing factors of the ball speed should be the extreme power, then the extreme skill, and finally the extreme speed. I find it strange that he emphasizes extremely fast serve and return every time.

The fallen genius is back? Can't continue writing after a normal start?

.. Not to mention other aspects, I always write the names of some characters in the play, Xiao Yan and Feng Yuxiu. I don't know if they slipped away later.

It's really poisonous... And embarrassing... To be honest, I like the subject matter very much. I have forced myself to watch it three times. Newbies can understand it. The question is, can you change it? The description style and plot must have the style of 10 years ago.

Look at what stuff was updated today. The stinking creativity has been wandering around in the author's mind for half his life.

Come on, I'm quite comfortable with your update speed.

This is not the article, I just want to complain about it. Why is it that at the beginning of the system article, people are confused and have to figure out the system functions first? No matter when and where, just like in this article, the person who is talking to the protagonist just waits for the protagonist to understand the system? Although other people will not know that the protagonist has a plug-in like the system, and will not care. What is the protagonist doing there in a daze, but readers know that this is basically the case every time I read a system article. He does not care about the outside world he is in to figure out the system functions 😥. I just want to ask if you can deal with your own external situation first, and then study the system under a relatively reasonable situation?

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is childish! Playing tennis requires physical strength. You, a person who has been idle for a year, still have the physical strength to play through 20 courts? Moreover, the article as a whole is biased toward anecdotes. The protagonist keeps showing off, and a junior high school student beats up a club coach like a chopping block! If you are in good health and can accept it, then breaking your left hand and leaving it idle for a year is too much!

In fact, both anecdotes and short stories are acceptable, but you are too middle-class. There is a non-mainstream style in the world.

First place! ! 😁😁😁

Regardless of whether it is updated or not, let me express my opinion😳

The first few sessions were so frustrating, so timid

It feels like there is nothing new. Many nouns are copied. You use China as the background, but you write Japanese words.

I looked at the table of contents and didn't understand. Is this a fan of the Internet King or the author's original fantasy? ? ?

I have been working on a project recently and have been working overtime until 11 or 12 o'clock every day. I have no time to update. Brothers, see you soon! ! !

Your awesomeness is getting shorter and weaker.

It took me so long to raise it so little. Let's keep it for another half a year.

I clicked on the system recommendation, and the results were updated to show that it was 9 days ago. I want to know if I can still read this book, and has it been abandoned by the author? ? ?