Xianwu: the Sun Rises in the East, I Am the Only One Who Is Undefeated

I was disgusted by reading it, so I gave up the book. You can either set up an orphan, set up a sister of a certain age, and still be so indifferent to others. The little girl is hungry herself, and gives you food, and you don't react at all. Are you still a human being? If you write a novel, you won't write about the human nature at all. People are Gu Zhenren. Although it is dark, it is for outsiders. Your biological sister is treated like this, why are you writing a stupid novel?

I hope the author treats the protagonist's sister better. She has already taken over her body, so she should accept this affection. Otherwise, many readers will abandon the book because of this matter. I don't like the protagonist's behavior, but I still give it a tip. I hope the author will take it seriously!

Dissuaded from quitting after three chapters. After reading Chapter 3, I really couldn't stand it anymore. Even if you are cold-faced and warm-hearted, just give him a little warmth. Don't call him a stranger. You have taken over someone else's brother. It is your duty and morality to take care of them. Especially when an adult treats a child like this. Strictness and cold-bloodedness are two different things. It is too demoralizing and too discouraging.

Is the protagonist practicing the Sunflower Book? I won't watch it if he doesn't practice 🤓

In order to post a reward, I read the first three chapters and removed them from the bookshelf. Of course, I just read it and I won't discuss the writing style. Let's just talk about this sister. You can just write that the protagonist is an only child, or that the sister died early... Forget it, the more I talk about this plot, the more uncomfortable it becomes, so I abandoned it anyway...

This time I want to write quietly. It's useless to pay attention to my grades or anything else. It affects my mood. Damn it. I will probably lock the comment area later. I don't want to be distracted. Writing is work. You should focus on what you need to do.

The reward is just for posting. It is really the author who forcefully feeds you poison. It's okay if you don't write about your sister. If you do, you feed poison. Don't talk about the dark wind or not. Don't say that your body is someone else's brother. Even if you are not a normal modern person, how can you bear to hurt a cutie in the world? Contact me, don't look, you will thank me

If you don't kill me, I can't understand it.

What kind of Eastern Invincible do you want to see, Brigitte Lin version, Hu Yifei version, Ximen Zhuixue version, Ye Gucheng version, or other versions. You can write it down and let the author refer to it. There is a high probability that you will use and write it. When you reach a high level, you will understand sometimes.

Why does Heimu Ya at the beginning of several books have the surname Dongfang? And there is also a younger sister 😥😥 Either a biological sister or an adopted sister

When the protagonist reaches modern times, he looks like a fool

Is there something missing between Chapter 16 and Chapter 17? Isn't it awkward?

Too much plot has been omitted between chapters 16 and 17! There is no feeling of growth,

No one who has traveled to the world of martial arts knows about it, nor does anyone from Jin Yong know about it, nor does anyone from the TV series know about it. Is this really what young people are wearing nowadays? Have you ever watched TV since you were a kid? Never read the novel? You might as well write about the indigenous people directly. What is the meaning of this time-travel identity? Wearing a loneliness!

Ever since I wrote about reality, I really can't watch it anymore

Either don't write about this sister, don't poison me if you do, and sincerely persuade people to quit.

Damn, is there someone else in the back? Playing the crooked-mouthed dragon Aotian for me?

This book is okay, but there are not many people reading martial arts nowadays. It is probably difficult to become a big hit, but not difficult to become a small hit.

I thought about it, the time traveler should treat the original sister as a stranger with a blood relationship, right? Why do some people feel that they have to be taken care of like a baby? The protagonist is not having a good life, so it's interesting that he doesn't abandon her, right?

A new book is out! Read my book list in Shuhuang 😁😁

It was okay at first, but then it gradually went away.