Reincarnators Don't Want to Get Rid of Spirits

No one? ! Then I will eat pigeons

This one is very much like a physical book. It would be much better to change some commas to dashes. You can also reverse the word order and break up the sentences to make it more like online writing.

It's okay, but I feel like the plot is a bit unclear.

I tried it, but it was a pity to throw it away and tasteless. There is no obvious poisonous point. But this routine is a bit boring. The protagonist is very powerful, and then he is recruited. I'm tired of watching it. However, the writing of this book is not attractive enough to attract people to read it. It's okay if you haven't watched this routine for a long time since it first came out. After a long routine, you have to rely on writing, and yours is more fluent. To sum up, there is nothing poisonous in one sentence, but it is also unattractive.

It's not poisonous, it's okay, come on. I have always been a giant in language, and I didn't even dare to write. You are already very powerful.

It's pretty smooth, but not very engaging, which means it's not interesting enough. The details are relatively dry, almost driven by dialogue, and the main line is not clear, or there is no sense of expectation for the follow-up. Personal opinion, for reference only.