Lords of All People: Start a Dragon Kingdom

When I saw Chapter 18, there was too much nonsense. For a battle plot, most of it was about the comparison between the local arms and our dragons. The real battle only takes about 100 words. If you don't know how to write about battle, write more about farming and use data to replace battle.

In fact, it's just based on the troops written by Invincible Heroes. I know how to dislike you, but I haven't written any operations. If you don't understand, I can't even understand what you wrote. I've just touched on things in one go. Chapter 2 introduces a new troop type, and chapter 3 contains a bunch of outdated settings. It's really a waste; A novel does not want to promote the plot, and does not want to think about it To develop my own characteristics, I copied the content of game arms all day long, and I couldn't do it. Brother, I persisted until I was defeated in Chapter 48; If you can't do it, just copy other people's plots. There is nothing compact, and it doesn't look like writing to entertain yourself. The basic salary is probably not as good as working as a waiter and working part-time on Didi. What are you trying to do?

With the development of the times, the protagonist has become weaker and weaker. The protagonist in the novel 10 years ago was still messing around without a system or rebirth. The current protagonist is too embarrassed to go out without rebirth or rebirth.

The lizardman corpse is said to be a resource! I can't even pretend to say that I can't express it in my heart! ! How funny. The waste is reborn and comes back to make hair! It would be a waste not to seize every resource for development in the early stage. People who travel to other worlds can actually be resurrected. Game writing?

I don't know why, but the author has to explain something that should be vague, such as the meaning of data, and he doesn't have the corresponding knowledge reserves, which leads to a very awkward thing: he lists a bunch of data examples to try to show how awesome the legendary dragon is. However, after reading his description, it makes people feel that the six-meter-sized red dragon in the author's painting may not be able to defeat an earth elephant of similar size...

The plot is okay, but there is too much nonsense. One thing is always explained several times. It is obvious that explaining it once is enough. Isn't this an intentional attempt to make up the word count? The evidence is everywhere! In particular, the power of legendary creatures has been emphasized more than a dozen times, which is very annoying and tiring to watch. 😒Really tired.

This setting of yours is doomed to collapse. If you get scolded for improving the card, you won't be able to write any longer if it's not stuck.

Cut to rule forever🙂

A waste is reborn. If you cheat, you are still a waste. This is the book I am talking about, one of the wastes.

Are all novels so stupid nowadays? The first one is The Dragon and The Whole Rebirth. It's also a hit and I can't stand it after just one chapter. It's rubbish.

It's only tj since it was put on the shelves, but it's not bad.

A lot of nonsense, the corpse of the monster was buried after being killed 😅 and some nonsense about the factions, heroes with different looks are invincible, people who have traveled through time can be resurrected...

Don't talk nonsense so much. The low-level people in the previous life are still weak now that they are reborn.

The studio went bankrupt as long as it was maintained.

Dragon Girl

It looks like an invincible hero board

It took me dozens of chapters to recruit the second dragon🐲This is too clumsy

If you don't write anymore, just click through and finish it so that I can pay less.

This author writes very well, it can be called a masterpiece of heroic invincibility (this is five cents)

I think it's well written, at least to my taste.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Nice writing, why haven't I updated it in a few days?

Is this to make the persuader face himself?

Do you know where the biggest flaw of this type of book lies? It's just fucking health. This thing is the biggest failure.

I haven't read this book for a long time and I don't even remember it. I read the full book today and found out that it's actually a eunuch...

😁😁😁 Update

Why are there so many people on the shelves? Studio, or some other reason?

Another one cut himself off and entered the palace to serve the Empress Dowager. Although the palace is nice, you must know that once you enter the palace, it is as deep as the sea! ! ! ! !

The eunuch was released as soon as it was released. I almost dare not read the unfinished novel.