The Reckless Man Starts by Defeating Shawshank

To be honest, in Chapter 1 and 2, it would be better if you wrote that the protagonist has never seen these movies. You want to say that the protagonist comes from a world without these movies. There is really no need to get rid of a lot of people.

The character Asami Rei in the third world is really well created. When I read it, it felt like this person was standing in front of me. Her struggle with fate and her search for the stamen of hope in despair made people want to embrace her and give her the strength to live. I think if this chapter is made into a movie, I hope that when I say goodbye at the end, the BGM that is accompanied by Nana's voice is "Lemon". I don't think anyone can hold back tears. Live on, Asami Rei, and embrace this world for the sake of all those who love you and those you love.

When will prisons be able to sentence prisoners? Even if you go to Xingxing, you still have to go through court

Every time I see a weak introduction, I really want to complain. I can't write an introduction well. How can you write a novel 😅

Come on. I haven't seen such a book that appeals to my appetite for a long time. Keep going. Don't stop. If you don't move, this book has no soul. Support the original version.

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Is this the bench or the floor? It's the fifth one?

Jiangnan actually wrote about the Dragon Clan and collapsed... Jiangnan can only write about teenagers, but not about growth... So Lu Mingfei is like being pushed back and never grows up... Jiangnan is good at writing detailed plots, so he used a bunch of very real fragments to piece together a very fake character, Lu Mingfei. He is good at writing short stories, and the fragments he writes are very real, so Lu Mingfei has a high sense of substitution at the beginning, and the Dragon Clan has good reviews. However, he is not good at writing long stories, so in the later chapters, the environment for the character's growth needs to change. He cannot write, and if he writes fake, readers who have been substituted before will feel angry and aggrieved. The core problem of Lu Mingfei's character is actually not cowardice, but fakeness. Human beings are intelligent, and one of the basic attributes that intelligence brings to human beings is adaptation, which is change. Even if you can't analyze it rationally, your hippocampus will use your emotional instinct to help you remember. But Lu Mingfei has not changed. Either Xiao Lu Mingfei has no intelligence and memory, or Jiangnan's writing has collapsed So readers who had a sense of substitution before will have an angry and suffocating rush, feeling that there is something wrong that cannot be said.

It's a wonderful novel with a good plot. It's really fun to watch without being sloppy in killing enemies. There are no major errors in the writing style, and there are very few errors in details. The lack of popularity is probably because the author's introduction and book title are not well written, and it is easy for people to regard it as a passing commodity. My only concern is that I hope the protagonist is not a eunuch, OK? Of course, it is indeed a bit troublesome for Zhutianliu to think about eunuchs or stallions.

Many book friends have reported that the title of the book is not very attractive. Personally, I think it could be changed, but I can't think of anything better. What do book friends think? Do you want to change it? With what name?

The protagonist is a bit stupid and needs no brains

Sure enough... I still can't watch the protagonist who is too outrageous. The reckless woman setting is just an excuse. She is so intelligent that she doesn't look like a normal person. She is too lazy to use her brain to write a novel. If I just set the protagonist to be a pig, will anyone read it?

Free of charge, I finished it in one go. To be honest, the early writing was really good, including Shawshank, Draconis, The Grudge, One Piece, etc. It was very enjoyable to read in one go, but when it came to Lover's Ghost and White Snake and Green Snake, it was overrated. It felt like a ghostwriter, not like it was written by the same person!

To be honest, whether it's The Shawshank Redemption or Dragons, you can still watch the author's plot even though it's not very rigorous. After reaching the third world, I feel that the quality has dropped a lot. As for the dragon part, to be honest, I can't stand it. Firstly, I have never read this book, so I know nothing about the plot and characters. Secondly, the quality of the author's writing has dropped a lot. So it doesn't look good

Wang Yuyan turned into Nuwa, and she burst into pieces. Who is the real protagonist!

I don't know if Pirates is good or not, but the author's writing is too good. Let's check out Gai's Mark. The original anime's aunt chapter was quite compact before, that is, it was watery in the arena. But this time it was really rowing all over the place. I couldn't do anything unscrupulous, and I didn't understand the situation. I killed the Celestial Dragons. When the general came, it seemed like the climax was coming. In the end, they let each other go, and there was nothing they could do with the elemental ability users, so they just ignored it? ? ? Even if you are not interested in Devil Fruits, you should find someone to understand them. Okay, I have the idea of ​​the Death God Hokage, oh I want to save Rukia, why do you want to kill her, no matter what, fight with me, prove that you can speak in front of me, pangpangpang , as for whether the protagonist can see the God of Death, I don't know. After all, starting from Sadako's film, the abilities obtained by the protagonist begin to be unreasonable. I overdraw my consumption and cheat the system. You give me a hammer·jpg, With all due respect, the protagonist changes from attributes to mortals, and the combat power begins. He became idealistic. Whether he can beat him or not depends entirely on the author's words. These chapters have a sense of déjà vu as the Five Emperors fight against the Sixth Emperor. It looks like free will, but in fact it has no purpose. If someone teases him, he will just follow him. He is reckless. It does not mean he belongs to Luffy. Navy King→_→, Navy I'm stealing your rice and riding on others' heads Speaking of which, the protagonist doesn't aspire to fly or teleport. He relies on two legs to run in any fight. If I punch him, the sun can be extinguished, but the range of this punch is only a few dozen meters. Uh, I have to find a way to get to the sun first? In short, it's still too weak. I agreed to follow the system to travel around the world. In order to fight against the strong, Hong Kong Man's punches are as strong as the flesh. No, JOJO is full of wisdom and tricks. No, my bug is better than yours, God of Death. No, my version of Naruto is better than yours, no, As an individual, what do I want to see most? Is my style of painting better than yours? You can make all kinds of tricks, but I can destroy the country with one punch and borrow the east wind? Even if you borrow a Dongfeng missile, I can shave off the head of the earth with one punch →_→, what? King Crimson cuts away time? My punch blasted the air within a 5km radius! Oh, it's not cutting off time, but changing the world line? Have you ever considered how the world feels? It's about to explode. Bengyu heard that you can fulfill your wish. I want to go back to my hometown to see my wife. Oh, I can't do it. What's the use of you? Oh, it's broken. Aizen, I'm sorry. I was so excited just now. Stop it. Go back to that profiteer and make another one. When Kakuzu is in a desperate situation, he doesn't rely on muscles, he can only rely on plug-ins. Good guy, did you learn this from Suicune? You can trick yourself. Wait, it's too watery. I suggest you either not update it or update it with a big chapter. Okay, I'm just waiting for the Wano Country arc to be finished, or waiting for the manga to be finished before I watch One Piece. Oh, there's another question about the heroine... Isn't pure love bad? Is the background board bad? Bai Xing is good-looking, but can't she be a sister or a pet? If you have to write about sex, would Bai Xing have this kind of thought? Absolutely amazing, the setting of a reckless man opening a harem feels like the first time I've seen it It's the same as when I watched The Seven Deadly Sins. That laziness, when I saw him and Anger together for the first time, everyone went crazy? Is this a true record of successful dog licking? Ah, do you gods have to be like humans and fall in love? Is this written in both the laws of physics and the laws of magic? Of course, speaking of important things for the last time, the water is still too watery. You don't even know what you are doing in this plot!!! Kizaru is beaten with one punch, and his stinky face is flattened, letting him know that ambiguous justice is just fart, and it is better to stop in moderation Justice has arrived!!!

The book starts out okay, but only ends with the third story. Starting from the fourth story, there are various Japanese two-dimensional hydrology, which is completely separated from the previous positioning. In the beginning, you attracted readers who read about the invincible flow of killing and decisive and reckless men. Later, you attracted a lot of group portraits in the second dimension. If you don't attack, who will?

Good writing, bad outline, the world chosen by the author has no connection with the previous one. It is a martial arts, a Japanese ghost, a domestic youth fantasy literature, a Japanese animation, a cliché world with a mixture of various fairy tale settings. The most annoying thing is that the protagonist is a reckless man, and the author has to arrange a woman for him in every world. Some are even forced and offensive.

I don't like reading Japanese comics, so I quit.

What the hell is this part about "Destined Things"? It makes my balls hurt when I read it. Where is the recklessness? A Chinese Ghost Story, Legend of Sword and Fairy, White Snake, and Journey to the West are all mixed together. Tang Monk became Ning Caichen, Sun Wukong became Li Xiaoyao, the reincarnated Zhu Bajie and other secondary settings. The two green and white snakes fell in love with the protagonist inexplicably. The most outrageous thing is that Wang Yuyan was sent to such a great fusion world more than 5,000 years in advance by the protagonist's skills, and she slowly became Nuwa by virtue of her talent? ? ? Then wait for the protagonist? ? ? So touching ╮（╯＿╰）╭ Because you were afraid of forgetting the protagonist, you created Zhao Linger with Wang Yuyan's memory? ? ? My balls ached when I watched it. You said you could just keep being reckless. What kind of romantic drama were you playing? A good book was turned into poison by being played with it. I was drunk.

How to put it this way, this book was fine when I first read it, but in the following worlds, I have to be entangled with a woman in each world... Sure enough, it is still not suitable for people like me who like the ultimate devil. The writing is okay, and the writing style is also good, but it is not suitable for me. Let's go, don't disturb me 🤫

These chapters of Dragon Clan look inexplicably weird, and I can't tell what's wrong, but I don't feel like I want to pursue them. Maybe I'm a little tired seeing the protagonist like this?

Although the copy of Tianlong still has some space, the next copy needs time to read the original work and write an outline, so I'm starting to think about it now. 1. Monster type: Using human power to carry monsters head on, needless to say, just do it. (Mist, King Kong, etc.) 2. Type of ghost: Is there something under the bed when you sleep? Drag him out and beat him up! (Ghost movies or mysterious revivals, etc.) 3. Monster type: Nie Xiaoqian? Sorry, no such worldly desires. (A Chinese Ghost Story) 4. Japanese manga type: Kill Marie Joa with a long whip named Kaido! (Pirate) 5. Normal type: magic? Magic? All the bells and whistles! (Xianjian, Zhuxian and other copies of cultivating immortals) 6. Superhero type: Purple Sweet Potato Spirit? Unable to fight for the time being, he slipped away. (Marvel) 7. Martial arts type: ... I don't have any ideas for the moment (Feng Yun and the like) 8. Technology type: A man's romance is of course the mecha, and the ultimate romance is to physically defend the mecha (I don't have any information in my mind yet) Well, these are probably the directions, some of which are a bit reluctant based on Wu Xingzhi's combat power when he ended Tianlong (Kaido:???) Everyone can speak freely and use their imagination.

When I saw the second picture, the author said that he wanted to write a protagonist but didn't know the plot. The world is so big, and you might have been working on it for a long time, but you might not even see a supporting character. You feel that you have turned the world upside down, but the plot character is far away from you. What should other people do? So how can a protagonist who doesn't know the plot turn the original plot upside down? System tasks? But doesn't this amount to a spoiler for the protagonist? Then the setting of the plot is meaningless, or is it that the author just wants to borrow a world view, the plot does not matter, and sometimes he does not even participate in the original plot?

I am currently writing about Pirates, and I have no feelings about it. I hope it won't be Naruto next time. I really don't like Pirates and Naruto 🥺🥺

It's this kind of writing method for the heavens one by one, not to mention that the power system is easy to collapse. This kind of writing has no main line at all. Without a main line, people will easily give up once the novelty wears off. For example, "The main god died at the beginning" is also written in the way of heaven. If readers are tired of it, the work will be eunuch. Zhutian writing method is not very popular nowadays because it is too easy to write prose or short stories. Every time a world is discarded, readers need to re-understand the characters and world background. This is a boring learning process. Most readers come here for entertainment, not for class. This repetitive learning process challenges the readers' patience. Therefore, every time the world is changed, some readers will abandon the book (they feel that the main line has been broken), and over time the book will die. Today's readers may only read 4-6 books every day. Due to memory problems and laziness, they will not read every book (every book is a learning process, and reading novels also requires energy). Although some books are on the bookshelf, over time, they have completely forgotten the content, and they will not be in the mood to read them again. Therefore, readers will only be in the mood to follow a few of the most interesting books every day. If your novel is written as prose, it is equivalent to countless new books, and the amount of learning energy required by readers will increase exponentially (there are too many characters to remember, and the world is too numerous and confusing). Many readers instinctively hate this, so they are not in the mood to read it. "Infinite Horror" is the originator of infinite novels, but have you ever discovered that the world chosen by the author is a highly popular movie? Biochemical, Alien, Tomb Robbery, The Last Day, and will be reused. Because this will greatly reduce readers' study fatigue, you choose to focus on movies and have limited roles. We need to remember or recall the characters in your book before we can continue reading. As there are more and more worlds, there are more characters that need to be remembered (novel is not like comics, where a character can be remembered with a unique hair or clothes). What is even more frightening is that the world is disposable, and the characters are also disposable, which will cause a situation where I am so lucky to recall who this guy is. Soon he won't show up again, and everything I've done is in vain, which causes a lot of fatigue. This is why I can no longer pursue it. In my understanding, the main line of "Infinite Horror" is to sing about love and friendship under life and death.

The protagonist is a bastard, and his behavior and ability are simply appalling. Bye bye, removed from the market.

Wisdom should include intelligence, mental strength, and soul. This novel only increases the power, but the brain does not increase at all, and the increase is provided by the system. I don't learn at all, and I am a worker for the system.

The author really likes to write about fate, but it looks disgusting, and the wisdom seems useless. It's just to limit the protagonist, a reckless man who is treated as a puppet. Alas

Why do you feel that the protagonist is becoming more and more lawless? The perspective is a bit distorted.