Fate: Choose One of Three Paths to Stardom

Around chapter ten, the common pitfall of entertainment novels resurfaced: a free song! It wasn't exactly free, but charging a dollar made it practically free. And the song was from a woman with whom they hadn't had much of a relationship so far; if they were having an affair, I wouldn't even bother mentioning it.

An animated movie, 20 chapters in total and it's still not over.

Not bad, I'll give a reward to encourage you, author, please update soon!

Sending songs as gifts is really a bad thing, a major problem in the entertainment industry. And it's not just one song; hopefully, this can be avoided.

Why do you always jump to long stretches of supporting character storylines mid-story? You need to balance the detail! Don't try to explain the entire backstory of every supporting character. You can fill in the details gradually after they interact with the main character.

I specifically bought two tickets; I've never seen anything so cold.

How can a proper book club not have a word chain game? I'll go first, let's play back and forth.

I'm so happy to see readers following along! I'll work hard to write more, and I hope everyone will leave comments in the comment section to liven things up!

The plot is good, but the slice-of-life scenes are too drawn out; they could be streamlined.