I'm Really Not a Bad Person

I almost got deceived by the trolls in the comment section. This is a bastard. The author still needs to take good care of the comment section. Such misleading comments will be deleted directly. Let me tell you, this book has a supporting character named Duan Ping, who is written in the style of traditional martial arts Wei Xiaobao. He is a complete buffoon, disgusting but quite interesting.

After reading the first six chapters, I have three major highlights of this book. The person captured by the original owner was fucked first by the boy next to him and became the boy's beautiful master. The female supporting character tried to kill the protagonist but was spared by the protagonist. Duan Ping is the real protagonist. Don't change it.

I can see the main line a little bit clearly. Now I am afraid that I will not return to the background of the story of Dark Souls. Uncle Ge, the witch, and the dead man overturned the ancient dragon and created the age of gods. In the end, success is also an abyss, and failure is also an abyss. Waiting for an abyss energy to go wild.

This is the most speechless book I have read this year, and that Duan Ping is as disgusting as maggots. . .

The core of Black Soul is combined with the earthy flavor of domestic online articles And the author's own concepts are mixed in to get this book My evaluation is What are the advantages? The author tells you what the salary king is, the one who inherits the flame, the one who brings the light Each volume completely explains a story to you At least I didn't read it in vain What are the shortcomings As mentioned elsewhere in the comment area, the author seems to have directly thrown out the outline But it is exactly like this, the author can tell you a story clearly and thoroughly But it is also too dry, resulting in imitation It's like reading Yilin. It lacks some storytelling for the sake of plot and plot development But the shortcomings are not concealed. In terms of telling a story completely, the author is already better than most people The next step is just to polish it a little and increase the plot of the article The author can expect platinum gold It can be expected But I still don't understand what the main line of this book is The ashes have been passing through, and then what? What is the purpose of his time travel? What is he looking for?

1. Women have emotional tribulations, and their skills can be greatly increased only after surviving the tribulations. He met the male protagonist with Duan Ping, but was kidnapped by the former male protagonist. He was also amused by the flirtatious Duan Ping, thinking that Qing Jie was Duan Ping. In order to make up for the ending of the love break in the future, he taught him martial arts. 2. Duan Ping's character is similar to the male protagonists of some novels. He is of low status, a philistine, has no bottom line, is lustful and selfish. After being rescued by the male protagonist, he still used the excuse that the male protagonist was a devil to persuade women not to be deceived by the male protagonist. He also stole the male protagonist's money and said that he was doing chivalry. The woman was dissatisfied, saw his true nature clearly, and refused Duan Ping to call her master again. Duan Ping followed him with a stern look on his face. 3. The male protagonist's goal is to reach the peak of martial arts. He has no interest in women and is not affected by the previous protagonist. There aren't many shortcomings, just a bit silly... I owed money for a meal, so I could be flexible, but I insisted on not borrowing the money, and was deceived by the unscrupulous shopkeeper into giving me two thousand kilograms of firewood to chop. —— After seeing this, I still have a good impression of the male protagonist's personality. Kind-hearted, clear goals, bottom line and principles. Just in contrast to Duan Ping who was saved by him. The female character is like a tool. She was fooled by the scumbag in the early stage and taught him a few tricks. Later, she discovered that the male protagonist is the real treasure. She provided some help from time to time along the way, and then praised the male protagonist's behavior as an observer. Completely in line with Toolman's settings. —— Well, yes, this fable tells us that boys should look within (no)

I am afraid that some people in the book club were not paid to hack this book. If I hadn't been curious and came in to read it, I might have been misled by them. I didn't read much of the book and just said it without thinking, right?

Everyone who thought they were coming to see Lord Ashes abandoned their books! This is not a Dark Souls fanfic!

I saw the sixth chapter. The beauty master started to lick the protagonist, which was super mentally retarded, and then I was poisoned. I came out to read the book review and said that the beauty master was in love, but I no longer wanted to read it. I don't know what the author thought, but I thought it would be best to reveal it a few chapters in advance. It's not appropriate in the article. It's okay to say it directly in this chapter.

Don't look, don't look, that Shi Yihan was so disgusting by the author. I was so disgusted. This author can't write female characters.

Everyone said there was no sense of immersion, which I think is pretty good. By the way, who did you bring in? I brought Duan Ping in

Good book, I voted for it monthly, please give it a try

Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was Dark Souls. But it doesn't matter😡

I read seven chapters. The writing of this book is very confusing, and the level of combat power is also ridiculous. Let's talk about the levels first (third rate, first rate, super first rate, master, grand master) The supporting character, the young man, who has been practicing swordsmanship for a few days, is much stronger than the villain young master who has been blessed with natural resources and good skills since he was a child (super first rate, close to the master). The protagonist upgrades from first-class to grandmaster in three days. He is called the youngest grandmaster by his opponents, and he directly crushes two other grandmasters one against two, which is simply outrageous. . . In short, there are a lot of flaws, and the writing is very messy. It feels like a self-pleasure article.... If so, it doesn't really matter, as long as the author is happy writing it.

I thought it was a Dark Souls fic when I read the introduction.

It feels very awkward. I finally understand why this book seems to be written quite well, but there is always a subtle unpleasant feeling in it! The author always ends the novel inexplicably at the interesting point! Some places feel like putting out an outline! Moreover, the protagonist's relationship has always been mediocre. As far as the plot is concerned, it is clear that he does not kill some people who should be killed, and he does not do what he should do!

Simply put, three chapters were poisoned. Reading the book review, it seemed like the rest of the book was exciting, but I just couldn't stand it anymore. Let's just talk about one plot: a boss who was at the peak of mortal power in an instant when he raised his hand was injured by a sword with a sword by a young man who had only been practicing for a short period of time? This is similar to the inner strength setting of infuriating energy. Master, you don't feel it? No internal body protection? Does a new practitioner have the concealment and power speed to successfully attack? This setting is outrageous. Goodbye. Goodbye.

Is this the end? My beloved Dark Souls 2 didn't even appear

I really hope to see a side story where the protagonist and the heroines are together

The author writes very well. Although there are many unreasonable things, it can be read as a comedy. But the most unacceptable thing is that the story is written without beginning or end. Traveling around the world, but not knowing what he wants to express most.

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Good guy. All chapters are free. I saw chapter 85 and I'm still thinking about it. Why haven't you subscribed yet?

Chapter 200 is over and flowers are scattered, but I am poor, so I celebrate with 500 points

Although but. There is no evidence that Wuming and Weinstein have a master-disciple relationship, and there is no evidence that Youershika and Gwendelin are the children of Gwen and Heath. In fact, based on the amount of evidence, Aviya and Youershika may be the same person, but as a novel, Tu Yile.

Is this rhythm going to finish the next book?

It's good to read, and the Military God chapter made me know what a hero is.

What does salary king mean? The king of back wages?

Do you like the Luozhi people in my backyard

It doesn't work anymore, it doesn't work anymore. I saw the God of Medicine in one breath, which made me feel a little heavy. I quickly looked at Shuangwen to regain my blood.

When I read the comments, I felt like I was shopping on Taobao. Is it my imagination?