Cultivating Immortality: Starting by Enhancing All Things

The first four chapters are pretty good, but why do I get so wordy as soon as I write about women? And I can't stop writing just these four chapters. It seems like there is still a lot of space to write in the future.

This kind of novel with a prefix, at first glance, looks like a mass production of a studio.

It's fine up front, but it's not good when I write about the village.

The author is a little speechless with this setting. The spiritual energy has revived, the beasts and plants have mutated, and they still protect animals? An invincible plug-in is written for you as a mentally retarded and weak chicken👎🏻I think the protagonist should hand himself over to the country.

The male protagonist's design changed again and again. At the beginning, he was still an LSP. Later, he lost all four and became six. In short, no one could get used to it. He obviously had a super golden finger, but he always made himself nervous. He was very anxious to do anything. He could obviously develop slowly, but he had to take risks to fight in the wild. The plot also changed, and he made himself follow. It's like a worldly expert, it's annoying to watch, and the plot of the latest chapter is even more poisonous. It looks like you reluctantly saved a beautiful woman, and then reluctantly took her in and gave her food, and you reluctantly gave her magical powers. If you look at it like this, Tiangang Disha only has 108 magical powers, and they were all given away before they could even be put on the shelves. I can only say that your plot design is really good!

When it was not strengthened, decades passed, and when it was strengthened, it could not even wait for the 100 points of physical strengthening. It was boring. The most important things kept being delayed, and the number of words was deliberately slowed down. In the end, he was still a eunuch

Abusing the mainstream, please watch with caution

I learned some magical powers again and again, one chapter at a time, for dozens of chapters, and even if I died, I would never break through, and I would still be able to practice my Qi at the first level.

Shui Wen, this novel has always been in the water. Not even one percent of the people who write about cultivation are bothered by worldly things. You are still a cultivator. Why don't you go to the neighborhood committee to be an aunt??

The setting has been eaten. Strengthening all things cannot strengthen one's own cultivation qualifications? I unlocked the information about my infinite bloodline and gradually strengthened myself to the level of super god