The Deep Sea Wizard of Hogwarts

I'm curious, who are the first two? Earlier than me😰

Has the author actually read Harry Potter? It's okay for the protagonist to keep studying after entering Gryffindor, but after the protagonist provokes Malfoy, he tells Malfoy not to go after the duel, and then allows Malfoy to publicize in the hall that the protagonist is a coward and a coward. What do you think will happen with the personality of the Gryffindor lion? There's a fucking problem, Gryffindor is a lion, you can be mischievous and naughty, but you can't be a coward.

The whole thing that I have treasured for many years is out! No more, none of them are gone. . .

I don't like people ordering me around

The novels are all the same, and the fans are all written badly. They don't have any characteristics of their own, and they dare to write about the deep sea mage. I feel a little disgusted when I read it. There are always so many novels written by writers these days, and they are selling dogs on their own. To be honest, the content is indeed very smooth, but it is a bit inexplicable, not interesting, and the same. You just treat it like this.

Basically, when reading Harry Potter fanfics, you just turn to the sorting page, and don't read it if you see Gryffindor or Hufflepuff... After all, in the starting orphanage, everyone subconsciously dislikes the weak fools and mediocre losers. Ravenclaw passed, and Slytherin got extra points

If you don't read it after reading less than ten chapters, don't you, the author, read the novel you wrote? One-third of each page is unnecessary nonsense, which greatly affects the reading experience. You are not famous yet and you are just trying to count the words...

Leave your name on the tongs

It's rubbish. The main character is a bitch who tries to pretend to be noble, and Jane is a lunatic heroine. My biggest impression is that Voldemort should kill them both quickly, so as not to be disgusting in school by pretending to be so cool.

Great, another book in which "I know exactly what the situation is, but I won't tell you everything, nor will I discuss it with the best people in the world. Are you angry? Hey, I'm just waiting for the situation to get worse step by step." The protagonist is determined not to have any intelligence.

The first few chapters were great, but! After entering the school, the style of painting changed. I felt that the protagonist was a real child instead of a time traveler. Especially the description of the mentality was inexplicably inconsistent.

First is the introduction. What if you agreed not to participate? The second thing is Jane. I don't see how close she is to the protagonist. She is very arrogant and lets the crow deliver the letter, and then says a hasty thank you. Personally, I really hate asking others for help and being so arrogant. Maybe they are familiar to the author, but as a reader, I don't feel that, and even feel that Jane hates the protagonist, and her behavior makes people uncomfortable.

Did you give me such a shit if I subscribed? .

The author created a snake courtyard character design! Then let the protagonist go to the Lion Court. Goodbye

I've seen about chapter 70, the protagonist is beaten by Quirrell and is possessed by something unknown in his body 🤫 a time traveler, hehe 🤫 Introduction, hehe 🤫

What the hell did you write? It was a waste of my time.

The writing is okay, and the plot is reasonably advanced. The protagonist is not forced into the original plot, and there are no more inexplicable plots. The details are handled quite well. Personally, I was very tired of the scene where Lind went to great lengths to kill the unicorn. After reading it, I felt that the original good and lawful/neutral and lawful character of the protagonist collapsed directly and turned into a neutral and chaotic character. It would be better to enter the Snake Courtyard or the Eagle Courtyard directly at the beginning. In the Snake Courtyard, I can still understand that the protagonist has great ambitions and is always on the road to pursue strength; in the Eagle Courtyard, I can also understand that the protagonist pursues the truth and does not stick to trivial matters for the sake of the career of a singer. In the end, you gave me a Lion Courtyard, and the character design was handled very poorly.

I watched it all night, until I got to the part before it was released, but I couldn't stand it anymore. To be honest, the author's writing is good, but the plot made me a little uncomfortable. The further I read, the more unhappy I became. Not to mention the main character's development was emphasized throughout the whole process, and it was a rip-off for Harry Potter. It was too big, right? (Of course, it may be that the author has a backhand that I didn't see) The protagonist is obviously a time traveler, but his prophetic characteristics are not much different from useless. In a fan novel, it is normal for you to cheat the protagonist. It is okay to cheat the original protagonist or supporting characters of other characters, but the premise is not to cheat other characters so much, especially to cheat them with some adventures that can easily benefit them. Otherwise, it will give people a weird contrast between whether this character is the protagonist or the time traveler is the protagonist.

I received a dream from the author, there are only four words Don't read it.

The writing was quite normal at the beginning, but later it felt like the author was starting to enjoy himself. If it weren't for Hogwarts, who would want to watch something like this? I can't say that it has nothing to do with Hogwarts, I can only say that it has nothing to do with it. It's better to change the name to The Adventures of Fitz the Murloc. It's a typical piece of writing that sells itself like a sheep. It doesn't even want to criticize Hogwarts. The plot has neither Hogwarts nor the wizarding world. It's all about the author enjoying himself.

What's going on? Why hasn't it been updated in so many days?

Ordinary, Harry Potter fans all have a problem. How can the protagonist play with a group of children at his age before and after the time travel? Shouldn't normal people think that these children are childish?

Two or three hundred chapters, ended hastily, that's it

I'm crying, why don't you update it? It's very well written 😭😭😭😭😭

I persisted until I couldn't hold on until chapter 30. The simple character was so poisonous.

I really can't accept killing unicorns

I love your writing style so much, keep it up

It's a pleasure to spell together! Awesome

The author. . . I kind of want to give up the book. The key is that you can't learn from it if you can withstand Mr. Ke's coming.

Daily guide 171, thanks to Qidian