The Deep-Sea Wizard of Hogwarts

Has the author actually read Harry Potter? It's okay for the protagonist to keep studying after entering Gryffindor, but after the protagonist provokes Malfoy, he tells Malfoy not to go after the duel, and then allows Malfoy to publicize in the hall that the protagonist is a coward and a coward. What do you think will happen with the personality of the Gryffindor lion? There's a fucking problem, Gryffindor is a lion, you can be mischievous and naughty, but you can't be a coward.

The whole thing that I have treasured for many years is out! No more, none of them are gone. . .

I don't like people ordering me around

The novels are all the same, and the fans are all written badly. They don't have any characteristics of their own, and they dare to write about the deep sea mage. I feel a little disgusted when I read it. There are always so many novels written by writers these days, and they are selling dogs on their own. To be honest, the content is indeed very smooth, but it is a bit inexplicable, not interesting, and the same. You just treat it like this.

Basically, when reading Harry Potter fanfics, you just turn to the sorting page, and don't read it if you see Gryffindor or Hufflepuff... After all, in the starting orphanage, everyone subconsciously dislikes the weak fools and mediocre losers. Ravenclaw passed, and Slytherin got extra points

If you don't read it after reading less than ten chapters, don't you, the author, read the novel you wrote? One-third of each page is unnecessary nonsense, which greatly affects the reading experience. You are not famous yet and you are just trying to count the words...

Leave your name on the tongs

It's rubbish. The main character is a bitch who tries to pretend to be noble, and Jane is a lunatic heroine. My biggest impression is that Voldemort should kill them both quickly, so as not to be disgusting in school by pretending to be so cool.

Great, another book in which "I know exactly what the situation is, but I won't tell you everything, nor will I discuss it with the best people in the world. Are you angry? Hey, I'm just waiting for the situation to get worse step by step." The protagonist is determined not to have any intelligence.

The first few chapters were great, but! After entering the school, the style of painting changed. I felt that the protagonist was a real child instead of a time traveler. Especially the description of the mentality was inexplicably inconsistent.