Isn't the Mission of a Hero to Overthrow the Demon King?

I feel like this book will definitely become popular if the author is more knowledgeable.

It took me an hour to read a dozen chapters of the second volume... Let me say a few words. What should I say, it's too boring. Daily life is not impossible, and slow pace is not impossible, but it cannot make people feel that there is no rhythm... Hmm... In short, the author, come on, try your best to lay out the main line. You can't always look like there is no main line.

The writing is okay, I personally think the plot is good, don't be a eunuch, there is no success that will not stand the test of time, I hope more aunts will laugh and evil will be rewarded (yes, I mean you are sweet and delicious, I hope you pass away)

The author must have updated it at least two hundred times since it was published.

I feel like this book is going to be a eunuch (T_T)

The key point is half-elf, beautiful So, Men's and women's versions (there is actually another picture, but I couldn't find it, it's a picture of a white-haired elf dressed as a knight) Don't be a fool, plant a tree here and you can get tens of millions of fruits

It is very well written In addition to the narration being a little complicated in the first volume, the world view and story presented to the readers are very complete and the reading is very smooth In the second volume, the author has indeed streamlined and optimized the expression methods and methods. Maybe this work is lacking in some aspects, but I am looking forward to its next story and the huge world view that the author wants to express 👍

Because the author is new and inexperienced, he does not control the rhythm well, and there are too many settings. If you feel that there are too many settings in the first volume, you can jump directly to the second volume and start reading, and then look at the settings in the first volume later.

Knights and Magic

How about this?

Brave... Probably

The first volume is quite confusing. The complex world view is revealed in one go. When I read it, I felt it was quite interesting, very sophisticated, and very logical and self-consistent. However, the description was a bit blurry. Then the author made a complete plan and opened the second volume, saying that he would start from the beginning, that is, continue the water world view in a different order, and describe it more ink. As for the plot, the introduction of the characters in the first volume is barely enough to read, but the daily life in the second volume is too boring. After reading 60 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. Cyberpunk, DND and Gundam worlds are integrated so well. The protagonist is killing slimes and goblins to upgrade, and there are still a lot of female protagonists left to criticize, ah. What a shame, a beautiful stage was built with people made of paper.

Cat Cat

Silver hair, male, seems to be fine

Blue cat-eared girl

Why does this protagonist have to be related to the Duke's daughter? Where is the church standing behind the brave men, but relationships don't work? The relationship between the city lord's daughter cannot be used, and this is not the way to advance the plot. Did you forget that you were almost killed just now? It's really hard to bear

If the protagonist really accepts Xiankelai in the later part of the story, which is a bit difficult to accept, would you forgive someone who wants to kill you?

🤔This setting is good, this golden finger. . . . There are hundreds of millions of bits of waste.

This rabbit is too poisonous. Some characters cannot be whitewashed. You see, other villains who can be whitewashed are essentially fake evil and really kind. But this rabbit is a villain when he is released. He pretends to be a boyfriend and has to be cleansed. Even if Accelerator is whitewashed, it still describes Accelerator as being kind in nature and living the rest of his life to atone for his sins You have to know that you are writing a protagonist. It is okay if you write it as the experience of a supporting character, but writing the protagonist like this is too cheating.

Isn't it the mission of the brave to overthrow the monarch and establish a republic?

When your character list only has female characters besides the male protagonist, this novel will be eliminated by me.

I hope there will be a new one out.

It's a pity for the author. I think this book is very interesting. If I can keep writing it, at least the western fantasy aspect will be a masterpiece. I just don't know if the author has an outline. I want to see the subsequent development.

What can I say?

Can the author come back and continue writing when he becomes rich?