The God of Conferment Gou Chen Chengdao

There are still recommendations here, the editor-in-chief must have collected a lot 😅

Chapter 16 of "Test the Poison to the End" feels like it is written like a running account, and it is thrown away! His brother Yu Er died somewhere, and the little monster pecking convention was gone! And what kind of mainland product are you thinking of as an innate spiritual treasure and a spiritual root? You are a little acquired demon who has been tossing around for decades and you are still Taiyi Jinxian. How can you let those saint disciples live? And are the officials in heaven appointed casually?

Prehistoric people probably don't need spiritual stones, right?

It's only chapter 45 and I'm going to establish martial arts? It would be great to establish eunuchs

I've been reading books for so many years, and I haven't seen such writing in a long time. Too noob.

That's rubbish, the dragon girl fell in love with you directly, holy shit (꒪ͧ⌓꒪ͧ)

I read a dozen chapters. I feel the logic is too poor; I was born as a fish and have two brothers. Where did the other brothers go? Common sense: Fish have hundreds or thousands of siblings. There are also emotional scenes; being imprisoned for a few days will be unforgettable. Isn't this too outrageous? Novel is about telling stories, and storytelling has a certain logic. No one listens to stories with poor logic. Everyone knows this, right?

Pure running account

Please author, please put quotation marks around their words, otherwise it will be very tiring to read.

What the hell, there are actually recommendations. I'm bored to death. It's a bunch of rubbish.

A novel that looks like a running account is still missing everything!

…. If he goes to heaven, his monster brother will be gone?

It really is a running account, at least the punctuation marks are correct!

This book is not good, it's not that I can't read it, it's almost like a novice novel, and the formula is too cliche, I'll get drunk

I don't know how to use punctuation marks, but I know commonly used words. This is at the level of an elementary school student.

That's too much. It's not as good as the running account I wrote.

This is written like a memoir, what about the details and the storyline? Everything is taken with one stroke

This book is very good, and it is very beautifully written. It is worthy of being a platinum author! ! ! ! ! If you have bad money, let's make it together!

Originally, there was a brother who had a very good setting. I just invited him to participate in the water pool competition. He promised well, then turned around and forgot about it. Then he became an immortal and went to heaven. He spent 100 years in heaven. I don't know if there is a setting of one day in the sky and one year in the earth. Then I didn't go to the next demon hunt to see if your brother had died of old age. At the beginning, your brother gave you a lot of resources. The little demon said that if he gave it to him, he would refine it and become a god. You might as well set a starting point orphanage.

Not interesting at all. It feels like a running account.

Script editors are more immersive than you. Are you writing a diary?

I've only read a few chapters and it started to get messy after that.

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How do you say it, like the author's name?

This novel gave me a lot of pain when I read it. I had no sense of immersion at all. It was as if I was narrating one thing.