Quincy in Death

Haha, do you know what retribution is? You can become invisible, but your heart can't, so if you get retribution, is your heart really at ease? If it can't be installed, it won't change the vest. I wish you sixteen years of bad luck!

The most important thing about fan fiction is the author's changes to the plot compared to the original work. From this point of view, this novel has some arrangements that other Bleach fans do not have. It can even be said to be very bold and dares to touch the key points of the original plot. It's just a pity that when I saw that the author was planning to snatch Bengyu in this world, I thought that if I did, I would have to overwrite the original plot, but the author still didn't dare to do it. (The following contains spoilers) The reason for the failure also feels a bit self-inflicted. On the one hand, Ishida Uryū was described as too weak and suppressed Uryū every day. As a result, Uryū saw his brother and father fighting against everyone together, and actually chose to shoot his brother directly instead of trying to persuade him first. The plot of contacting the previous protagonist to pretend to be sexy and letting Yulong shoot him was not Chunchun's own doing. There are some bugs in the forced reversal to the rhythm of the original work later on. For example, Urahara Kisuke did not move the Bengyu when Rukia was almost robbed. What's the point of hiding the things if others know about them? The author is very inconsistent on this point. After entering the Soul Society, he also stood out and dared to write, and sealed Room 64. Although I feel that the hook is a bit big, the 13th Division is like a waste and no one can solve it. It will be explained later that the protagonist turns out to be an ordinary person who has lost his ability as a Quincy, and his output depends entirely on the stored spiritual liquid. This did create a small climax. But it was interrupted too quickly. And if you think about it carefully, there are many bugs. If you can't sense spiritual pressure, don't write about being able to detect Yin's arrival at the city gate in advance. Just write about the protagonist remembering the plot and saying that Yin is coming. Without being able to sense spiritual pressure, how can the protagonist rely on his judgment to attack Big Dog and Zombie Bee with different output strengths to make Zombie Bee think that the protagonist is not here for revenge? The author wants to write new things, which is good, but in terms of how to round out the plot, there is still room for improvement. Everyone can see something new.

It can be seen that the author has his own main line, and the writing style is very graphic, but there is a lot of inner drama. At the first turning point in the plot, I wanted to see the protagonist successfully complete his plan, but the author pushed him back and switched to the original plot. It was like being about to climax and suddenly stopping. It was really hard to hold back. I couldn't bear to continue reading, and I felt a little nauseous after reading it. For readers who can accept a slow-burning plot, it should be a good food. Readers who want to feel more refreshed quickly should consider it. Although I quite like the theme of death, I still can't accept this kind of writing, which is the lesser of two powers harming each other. The above are my personal thoughts, and there is no bad direction. I wish the author good luck with his writing!

It's not fun, it's not thoughtful, it's too childish! Protagonist is like a puppet

Ishida Uryu's talent is very good, but because Ryuuxian was afraid that he would be in danger, he deliberately did not teach him the systematic Quincy system, so that he could retreat in the face of difficulties (in the Invisible Empire, he was ranked among the top ten in the Three Realms in just three days).

This novel is the kind of novel where the protagonist's abilities are designed to be very buggy, but limited everywhere. The writing is good, but it's as bland as water, and it's just like tasteless. On average, there are introductions to the skills or abilities created by the protagonist in a few chapters, but most of them are either limited or not very useful. It also focuses on a character who can barely use it. In short, it's quite boring to summarize it simply.

How to say it? The problem with this book is that the author has made the protagonist so awesome, but the author's writing style cannot support him in creating his own original plot, so he can only be forced to follow the original plot exactly and become the protagonist. He looks awesome, but in fact it is useless at all.

The operation was as fierce as a tiger, but the result was useless... It is easy to lose your reputation when you write it like this. After all, what most people want to see is the wonderful process of achieving something, not the experience of working hard to start a business but ultimately failing, because most people have this similar experience.

This author purely ruined the reputation of his readers and did it all by himself.

After reading Chapter 68, the protagonist failed to accomplish anything he wanted to do and still wandered around.

Funny? The whole article about planning is written in great detail. How can I put it this way? The protagonist forgot before he was nine years old, then he was confused for two years, and spent the remaining four years preparing for his plan, and then it failed inexplicably at the last moment? Her mother was about to succeed, but then the protagonist's father was present, and after watching the show, he hesitated for a moment and killed the protagonist's plan with an arrow? It's really baffling!

I think the writing is very good. It's rare to have its own main plot. The protagonist who was sanctified regained his strength by seizing Bengyu, and many things were extended through the plot. There is no poisonous point yet.

It's not fun at all. Everything you do is no different than nothing you did. You get Bengyu, and then you die if you use it. It's great.

After four years of planning, the failure was so ridiculous and frustrating to watch. Maybe the author wanted to follow the plot, but there was a huge gap between what I imagined.

It's really hard for a newcomer to get ahead with a new book.

Love the latest chapter! Since you can control the method, power, etc. Through the spirit spirit, then you can transform the tricks you have heard and seen in other worlds into the spirit version, and you can even imitate the immortal cultivation system for training, just like the golden elixir is Bengyu who is completely self-controlled? If you can't take it, you can't take it. It's no big deal. You can cultivate a spiritual king by yourself.

Let me catch you, Wang Xiaojiao, hahahahahaha,