Covering the Sky: Starting from the Sky-Swallowing Magic Jar

Later, I passed several imperial cities in Central Continent and robbed hundreds of women for no reason. It was of no use. They were not even worthy of a furnace. I was speechless. I didn't even have the B option to be a villain. It feels like the author himself has written it as if he were a little emperor. The protagonist is the same as Teddy, and it doesn't matter if she is a woman. What realm are they in? Appearance is of no use. Sendai monks can be either male or female, old or young. As long as they want to, they can adjust their appearance and form to become anyone. It's enough to only accept those who appeared in the original work or whose realm is close to the protagonist. If you accept the others, you will be left alive as a widow.

Is the author crazy about women? When writing about a stallion, I'm speechless or I'm forced to capture him. I don't know how to write emotional lines, so don't.

It can only be said that there is a lot of room for improvement, and the poisonous spots are also very accurate.

The beginning is a bit licking the original owner, are there any other women like Ji Ziyue and Ye Fan later?

The author's writing is not bad. There is just too much nonsense. Readers will easily get headaches and run away after reading Chapter 9.

Cao thief? It's been so long since I've seen anyone make money?

Make a group 😍

The Immortal Queen, Qin Yao, Yang Yi, Princess Shencan. This is more Mengde than Mengde! Oh my God!

Zhetianmi's impression flow: No matter what you do in Zhetian, you will be killed by ruthless people like Wu Shi from upstream. So I can only lick Ye Fan and the black dog. Since ruthless people and Wu Shi are so awesome, why don't they come from upstream to save their parents, save their friends, etc. This stuff is nonsense, let alone whether you can come or not. Even if he can come, can't his enemies come? We must know that their enemies are not weaker than them. Will there be new fans, Pig Knuckles, weaker than Ye Fan, Wu Shi and the others in the future? In the future, if Pig's Feet can also stop Wu Shi and the others from upstream, then it would be a joke to come from upstream to kill them. Are you still afraid of Ye Fan when fighting with this world? 🤮🤮

This is probably the only Zhetian fanfic with more than one female protagonist in Qidian. The other fanfictions are either pimping Ye Fan or working as monks. It's rare to see a Zhetian fanfiction with many female protagonists.

It feels like the protagonist has no shortage of resources now, and what he wants is to determine his own path in life. Zhan Dao is actually a clear path, making it clear what path one will take in the future. There are many people who practice the Heaven Swallowing Demon Technique and the Immortal Heaven Technique, but why only the ruthless emperor succeeds is mainly a matter of understanding and wisdom. The root of these two techniques is not swallowing, but digestion and fusion. After swallowing a Holy Body, it is impossible to completely obtain the Holy Body's origin. There will be losses. If you get 20% of the Holy Body's origin, it will be considered a higher ability. Why did Yaoguang fail in the original work? To a large extent, it was because he only practiced the Immortal Heaven Technique, but not the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique. This was too clever, which led to problems later. I suspect that the demon fetus that the ruthless emperor condensed for the first time might be a semi-finished or even incomplete chaotic body. Only after enlightenment and becoming emperor, the scriptures can be reorganized. With the help of the Tianxin mark, the understanding is transformed into a flawless wonton body after improvement. I feel that it is difficult for the protagonist to condense the body of chaos before becoming emperor. However, even the incomplete Chaos Body is not far away from becoming an emperor. But the protagonist is now 92% chaotic. Generally speaking, many ancient princes, sons and daughters are not as good as the protagonist. Even before becoming an emperor, the protagonist has almost no bottlenecks.

The ruthless person's lineage is divided into two lines. They are the descendants of two old people from the village where Henren grew up. One side got the Sky-Swallowing Magic Jar, and the other side got the Empress's Order. The two were originally a force. Subsequently, it was jointly besieged by many holy land religions, and its power was greatly reduced. The emperor's army lost the jar body, (this line has only one protagonist.) The emperor ordered the army to leave Yaoguang. Fifty thousand years ago, the emperor's lineage entered the ancient forbidden land with the emperor's order, and the empress took action to refine the dragon-patterned black gold cauldron. At this point, the empress' mortal fate is over. I made it up myself, brothers can tell me if they have any ideas.

The more you look at the back, the more disgusting you become. Every time you emphasize that the clone is stronger than the protagonist? What do you want to do by writing this? I also saw the doppelganger hooking up and flirting with the protagonist's wife! I just feel disgusting🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮No wonder most people hate harem clone novels... I don't even want to say that you, it's actually pretty good. I reported it more than 10 times, but unfortunately it was not blocked.

The more I write, the more messy it gets, and then it's all the same routine, building a trumpet and having sex with girls. . All the supporting characters from the original works have been found and used, including the female corpses from the old Yaochi land, and the taste is quite strong. . .

Someone tell me how the writing is, and whether it ruins the original work.

As the Emperor of Heaven, I should suppress all enemies in the world

Four hundred chapters have passed, but I have not become a saint. The map is still in Ziwei, the starry sky has not gone, the ancient stars have not gone, and Yinghuo has not gone. Can't you speed it up a little? It's really slow to subscribe. The key is that each chapter of yours seems to be long, but in fact half of it is written by turning the words over and over, which shows that you have a certain talent for writing a paper. In addition, a lot of energy is used to write completely meaningless things. People say that all scenery language is love language. Scenery is written for the purpose of expressing emotion. Many descriptions of external scenery are written purely for description. Things that are mentioned in one stroke will occupy one or even two pages. With so many subordinates, the only one that is really impressive is Chen Dong's Northern Emperor. He spent a lot of time describing his original subordinates, but he didn't have many characters. It's just about making money, don't shiver Maybe after I finished complaining, I will continue to jump in and subscribe. After all, I have fallen into the trap and I have voted before, but if this is still the case with the new book, I will never fall into your trap in the future Fan humanities should be like Beidi, Carp, Sea of ​​Bitterness, Tea Emperor, Eternal Life, there are flaws but not slow. After all, self-deception exists, but results and data will not deceive others.

If you are afraid of karma, why practice? Words were created by others, the world was opened up by others, and the system of exercises was created by others. Who has not learned and borrowed the exercises from others? Have you never experienced the shadow of your predecessors? Why didn't you see other people's karma? So if someone who has never watched Shetian accidentally takes something belonging to the protagonist in the original work, will he be dead? Why are you not afraid of the karma between the current Immortal Emperor and the Immortal Emperor? To put it bluntly, I still know that these two people died in the end, and I know that Ye Fan finally defeated Emperor Cheng Tian. I want to hug the empress and Mark's thighs. So when it comes to all kinds of causes and effects, they are afraid of offending, and others can do whatever they want? I can understand if you are afraid of the Empress, but is it necessary? Didn't even the Immortal Emperor and Emperor Zun allow Wu Shi and the Empress to grow up? So when they were practicing, they didn't look forward or backward because they were afraid of the first two? As for what you said about practicing the Empress's scriptures, did the Empress never practice other people's scriptures when she started? Have you ever learned from other people's scriptures? Just return the favor at the critical moment later, instead of acting as a nanny and looking forward and backward in the early stage. To be honest, you're just a kid, you know shit about cause and effect, just scare yourself based on your own understanding. The Nine Wonders of Elixir existed before, but was later obtained by the Empress, so it was not essentially hers. This is the first point. At the level of the empress, the nine wonderful elixirs were of no use to her. If an ant steals uneatable fruit from the fruit tree in front of your door, will you care? As long as it doesn't bore your trees or something else, you won't be too lazy to move. The funny thing is that this ant is still thinking that there is a cause and effect for me to eat the fruit from this family, and first let the stray dog ​​suspected of being the owner eat it first.

Ye Fan wouldn't let it go. Has the protagonist never seen a woman in his life? When I see a female, I want to fuck her

Personally, I feel that the protagonist currently has too many guas, including a bunch of imperial soldiers, emperor scriptures, immortal gold and divine materials, and too many followers. The supreme emperor has it. Most of the emperors are not as rich as you. As a result, you have to use all kinds of intrigues and tricks to farm the Ziwei star. In the end, you can't avoid dispatching. With 3 pieces of imperial weapons, it would be better to send out all the imperial soldiers from the beginning to suppress the dissatisfied. This is a typical example of you having too many problems and having to forcibly increase the villain's strength. To be honest, the protagonist's current situation can only take the invincible route. He obviously has the strength to push horizontally and still wastes time to kill every monster.

There is really no need to accept this Shencan Princess. Forget about Shenyin. The protagonist turns into a licking dog as soon as he meets the Shencan. He has no self-esteem. No matter how much he likes it, he has to have a bottom line. There are hundreds of pictures and he still thinks of the monkey. The protagonist even accepts it later and is disgusting. The licking is meaningless.

It's really become less and less interesting recently. As mentioned earlier, Zhentianxiang led the imperial soldiers to push Ziwei, but in the end they still engaged in a lot of conspiracy and conspiracy. What kind of emperor can you be with such a character? Just give all your resources to Ye Fan and then follow him straight to the immortal emperor. First suppress and then improve. Look back and see where you have improved? Although he is not depressed, he has been as dull as water since he got the clone. Someone suggested creating a clone and you accepted it, and then your writing smelled strange. Tell me how far the main plot has been advanced in these one hundred chapters? I don't even know where the main line is now. The foreshadowing was a catastrophe 200 years later. The protagonist started to rush for time, thinking that he was finally starting to feel happy, but the result was that he was still struggling here and there. I told you before that you can write 5 or 6 hundred chapters if you push forward normally and write it to perfection, even if you don't write about the Holy Ruins. Are you planning to write thousands of chapters now?

I'm really not optimistic about it, so I'm adding "infinite streaming and fan fiction" related to "Prehistoric" settings. First of all, "Honghuang" originally originated from the fact that Buddha is the Tao, and this is a secondary creation of "Fengshen"; The popular "Honghuang" is a mixture of countless secondary creations of countless authors about the Tao. There is no clear consensus. It sounds like "co-creation", but it sounds bad and is called mixed garbage. It is not easy to convince the audience of "Honghuang", let alone passers-by? (Your main audience should be the Zhetian and Mysterious audiences). Secondly, the audience of "Prehistoric" is mostly young book lovers. Some of them can't even tell the difference between Chinese mythology and Prehistoric. Many of them like cross-world war settings (I looked at your comment section and found quite a few). For them, it is difficult to accept the low combat power and low realm of "Prehistoric" (for some unknown reason 😒). However, if you belittle the Zhetian system, the mysterious system... Your other world systems, it will offend related book friends. . . It is really thankless to add the "prehistoric" setting, and there are some book friends like me who automatically persuade them to quit when they see the word "prehistoric", because too few authors can write well, and most of them write like shit. The reason is mostly because the author himself lacks relevant knowledge of mythology and literature, and the written prehistoric is as empty as a primary school student's composition, which is daunting. 😴 Also, you have too many settings at the beginning. I can't understand it at all, and there is no direction. You are also talking about the ancient world, the mystery, and the sky. You have not explained them clearly, so the mystery is more clear. I saw other readers asking what "the ancient world" is. Situation, you can only say one thing in this chapter: "This is a closed loop, I will explain it later." Ah this, ah this, the author, don't you find this very confusing, such a confusing background, do you want to screen out readers, many people are interested in reading 😠

I read a little bit of it during the limited exemption. I thought the author's style of writing was good, but I still couldn't stand it anymore. Here's a summary of the poisonous points: 1. Zhetian is pursuing enlightenment after all. Especially when time is so tight (dark turmoil after 200 years), Pig's Feet seems to have no pressure. In this way, it is a bit outrageous to swallow the sky and become a dual cultivator, especially since this kind of dual cultivator has almost no improvement on the pig's feet. The author also forcefully explains that it is for cultivation. It is understandable if you like beauties and have a harem. Zhetian himself is also a male-oriented article, but he pursues beauty and improves his strength. At present, it seems that there is not much correlation, or you should not practice swallowing the sky. It is really a bit outrageous. The pig's trotter is really not small. At present, the performance of the realm is not strong, not even as good as the original pig's trotter at the same time 2. Why do you always pay attention to Ye Fan? He has good grades None of my Zhetian colleagues revolve around Pig's Knuckle. With the current strength of Pig's Knuckle, Ye Fan can't catch up. I don't understand why you want to please him. I even want to lick him. I can't understand it at all. The empress will treat you differently because you treat Ye Fan well? 3. From the current point of view, pig's feet are easy to lick, with a giving personality, and the overriding tone is competition after all. The emperor has you but not me. Although the chaotic body can basically reserve the throne, but from the current point of view, if the cheats are not continued, the road of pig's feet becoming king will not go on at all, and it is not as good as other books 4. Harem The writing style has certain characteristics, and the author's writing style is okay, but really, pig's feet pursue strength and love beauty, or pig's feet can be directly given to half of the scriptures that rely on dual cultivation to improve, but dual cultivation to swallow innocence is a bit inadequate, and the pretentious expression in this book is not good. It all depends on the author's God's perspective, which is far inferior to that of Zhou Tong and Wang Teng next door.

447, Half-Saint, the original world, transformed into nine clones to accompany Fluttering Light, the Purple Mansion Saint and others played with them, and his own body played with Yan Ruyu, as well as the protagonist's Qilin clone and the Qilin Clan's great saint daughter who did it first and then with the protagonist 🙂

Sometimes you pretend to be this, sometimes you pretend to be that. Now this clone, now that clone. I vomited, what about you?

Finally Eunuch, this book is so messy. The harem novel doesn't write much about the heroine, but actually writes a lot about the clones. There are more plots about a group of clones than about the heroine.

Now Emperor Ye Tian and Emperor Wu Shi have a grudge against killing their father. In the dark turmoil, Ye Hei borrowed the sacred body of Daxian from Yaochi but never returned it, causing Wu Shi to scream in the sky and face his parents without the face to face the river of time. Resurrection of his parents became an empty talk, so that he turned his back on all living beings.

The author's writing style is not bad, and the flavor of covering the sky is conveyed, but the author's rhythm is not well controlled. The biggest advantage of being a fan is to use the features of the original work to create new plots on your own. The most important thing about innovative plots is the concept. The pattern must be big. There are many disasters in the background of Zhetian. As a fan of Zhetian, watching the fandom itself has the meaning of making up for regrets. For example, the part about inheriting the cause and effect is very good. Only when the protagonist takes over the cause and effect will there be a sense of urgency, instead of just killing people, grabbing treasures, upgrading, and showing off. Such small plots can be there, but they are too repetitive, and the characters have no height and taste. Regardless of the God-King, Wu Shi, or Empress in the original work, whether they are good or evil, what everyone has always remembered is their structure. No matter how awesome Emperor is, it has no conception and no plot. It is actually just a background board. Therefore, when I first watched Zhetian, I felt that it was unfinished. As a villain, Emperor had no layout and no moves in the early stage. It gave people the impression that he was a character that Chen Dong appeared for the ending. Generally speaking, I hope the author will follow his own pace and stick to it. As a Zhetian fan, it should be very good.

The author's new book: The Master of Time and Space that Covers the Sky