Dragon Clan: Start as Herrscher of the End

The description is not detailed enough at all. You can lengthen the description appropriately. The first few chapters were so rushed that I was immediately persuaded to quit. I didn't read much later, but author, don't be so impatient. For each piece of plot, you need to add a little more scene description. To put it simply, it's just a little watery. The plot rushes too fast and makes people feel like you are in a hurry. And you don't actually have much plot to talk about, let's say your first picture. It's about the heroine encountering an incident and being noticed by Kassel College. After he returned home, he shared it with Xia Mi. On the second day, I met a professor from Kassel College. There's a lot to write about in between. You can compress it into 2,000 words. If it were someone else, it would be at least 6,000 or more. This will not make readers feel comfortable. I just get a very fast aesthetic fatigue. There is no sense of immersion at all. You should add a little more scene description in the middle. For example, in the food delivery incident, when the heroine opens the door, you should add a little more scene description. It's like under the dim light, who is doing what, and then you see what the heroine is thinking. What is the position of the people inside? What does a villain look like? What is the executive officer of Kassel Academy doing again? What action? These things need to be illustrated with examples. Even if it is just a brush off, you are at least. To lay out a complete picture. Only in this way can the readers have a sense of involvement. And it can also write a lot of words. Finally, let me express my attitude. There is great potential as an author. I'm not trying to point out the author or what he means. . . It's just that the author writes about this subject particularly well. I hope to read this author's book better. Anyway, come on, author, I'm waiting for your next book. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

I have a dream I hope this herrist will do something that a herrist should do I hope this herrist will not be a lily I hope this herrist will not post everywhere I hope this herrist will be single forever I hope this herrist will be more mature I hope this herrist will have a higher IQ I hope...

Tianxuan, major events, this book leads to poison every day

Your book has less than 2,000 words. Will your book be updated?

One? Hundred? Marry? Just a reminder, let me see if I can watch it

I just hope that this person will eventually learn some physics 😂 Just a little bit will be fine, I never want to see an illiterate Herrscher again! !

Is the protagonist a serious Herrscher? Destroy the world?

I'm telling you a joke, this book won't hit the streets

Everything started off normally, but after the character from the collapsing world appeared, he started to stretch his hips.

It's Kassel College, not Kassel, brother, you can't be mistaken about this kind of thing, right?

Good guy, after reading this old book, I can find yours by randomly looking for books.

I will send a few pictures of Zhong Yanna and her skill list

The writing style is a bit too white, but the setting is still quite interesting, although I have never played Doge.

I can't understand it at all 😅

It is rare to write a novel with a final protagonist. 👍

This update is actually on the guide. From September 21 to now, I have only written 150,000 words.

The Herrscher of the End

I would like to ask, is this book guaranteed?

Are these two comparable? One can restart civilization The other can restart the world

Don't write whatever comes to mind, keep jumping here and there, you don't know what to do.

I read my daily guide twice a week. . . Then ask, is it Lily? . . Throw away the bookshelf first, confirm and then read

Ah, this, the update time is uncertain?

Herrscher, you are still the boss of Herrscher, so you can't carry a few big blades

And then you're done? ? ?

Integrating the world is boring😤

Dare I ask if the author has no money and comes back to make money?