A Mobile Fortress Filled with Players

First of all, my understanding is that the author originally wanted to express the fourth natural disaster's entry into another world. The content was in a light-hearted and humorous direction, and the beginning was indeed very attractive. It can be said that it completely broke out of the bad routines in current online literature. I have to admit that it is indeed very good. But when others want to kill him and take actual actions, the protagonist actually uses the inherent fourth dimension to judge the matter itself, and the punishment he thinks of is to be driven away? Although the protagonist himself thinks that he should be invincible, the overall feeling of the protagonist to me is that he is decadent? There is no goal. Creating this game is not only to resist the invasion of abyssal materials, but also to fulfill a dream! But I think as a human being, we can't have no temper at all, right? You let him go when others are going to kill you? This is really incomprehensible. Personally, I feel a little holy? Anyway, it's that indescribable feeling that makes people feel uncomfortable! Perhaps the author intends to use them to create a copy for players? After reading Chapter 42, I suddenly felt that I had no interest. I feel that your word count is a bit low, but the chapter has not entered the paid chapter yet, so I think it is enough to introduce a person in one paragraph. There is no need to introduce a whole chapter at once, which makes it difficult to read. There is an obvious suspicion of low word count. Last point, since the protagonist is basically invincible at the beginning, he should do something worthy of his status level. Since he wants to understand the current world, he should not be afraid of wolves in the front and tigers in the back.

This book is the author's debut, but the story handles the origin of the players very well. There is also a more important point. The player's rebirth mechanism has no big logical loopholes. It is all rounded up by settings. It does not look like it is the first time to write a book, and there is no restriction on the player's rebirth, so that the player really becomes a player. The game planning also has a reasonable setting. Treat everything as a game, otherwise you will be swallowed by the abyss. This setting makes the novel more interesting. One of the unique features of this book is that the player's image is similar to that of a small black man in Conan. Players can adjust height, fatness and thinness, which is a good way to distinguish players from normal people. What I must mention is the player's decoration system. Players can place medals everywhere on their bodies. Pay attention to everywhere. Although it has not been described yet, it will definitely be an interesting point in the future. This book is definitely a good book. As long as you come in and read it, you will know that investing in this book is definitely not a loss.

Author, I wonder if you can come back or not. I have already touched two chapters. If you don't, don't blame me for writing it myself!

Open a building and put up the first incense …

When I first read it, I didn't expect to be so pleasantly surprised. I thought it was a more conventional gamer article. I didn't expect that the author's setting and writing style were very attractive to me. Especially when the player guided me, the slightly mean words of the artificial intelligence made me excited. There was also the description of the player's first kill, which showed the player's mentality very well. The kind of description of not caring about life and ripping off parts from a person's body. , It's really great. The world view that the story gradually unfolds, the description of the players, the characteristic little black system, and the unique decoration system. I can already think about how others will think of the players in the future. I am looking forward to the future stories. I have invested in it and look forward to it being put on the shelves. As long as the standard does not drop too low, it will be a sacred book. I hereby implore you not to supervise it. If the investment is gone, it will be gone. The book will be updated. I have already pinned it to the top.

I wrote about 10,000 words, and I accidentally signed a contract. I sent a post to commemorate it. The original intention of writing novels is to record the wild fantasies in my mind in my own writing. There are also some authors who write too harshly and make me read anxiously, so I push the author away. "That's it? Let me do it, you watch!" From junior high school to college, I wrote and read by myself. I also thought about learning the writing style of great masters and imitating world famous works, but then I wrote too much and wrote and wrote. Then when I looked at what they wrote, I thought: Forget it, they wrote well, but after all, it is not my own. So I started to explore my own things. Sometimes I thought, what is literary logic? And so on, I gradually accumulated ideas about writing, but having ideas is not enough. In the end, I still have to write. If I don't write millions of words, I won't be able to truly transform my ideas into a writing style. I started a novel on a whim, which is my favorite genre. Novels with similar routines have good results, but the results are not satisfactory (in my personal opinion). I have an idea in my mind: not only to write, but also to write in my own style. As long as there are people reading it, then I will finish it. It may be eloquent and eloquent with a million words, and the writing may be "mixed with personal information". What is written is not a masterpiece, but my expectations for it are not high. It is just: A good-looking story.

Give you a chance to turn over a new leaf. While everyone is still there, hurry back and post the saved manuscript and slowly continue writing 2 chapters without asking for daily updates. Can you still push yourself to death?

Regarding the setting of "country" It seems that many people are particularly concerned about this. Let me explain it here: I know some people will not like to read it, and I actually don't want to write about it. I am a newbie, and I get all kinds of 404s when it comes to countries. But I think the Fourth Natural Disaster routine cannot avoid involving the state apparatus. I am a person who likes to fill in all kinds of detailed settings. For a game that has not been censored but has become a hit, will the country really not pay attention to it? I don't want to avoid this BUG like other natural disaster stories. Then the question comes. If I really add the country, this will not be the fourth natural disaster story, but the country will develop a different world. The final ending of this routine work will be very bleak. So I think, in order to ensure the purity of the fourth natural disaster story and to make the setting as rigorous as possible, it is better to let the country notice it, but it can be blurred. Anyway, some kind of cooperation has been reached with the protagonist, the country is in the dark, and there will be no more plots about the country in the future.

This reason is really sufficient today, and the reason for the breakup has also been found.

No wonder they broke up, it turned out to be...🙂

Fortunately, I didn't blindly choose the most cute one, otherwise it would be a joke 😥

It can be seen that the author wrote it carefully, and it reads smoothly without any discomfort.

Someone come and copy this book and continue writing.

It's all my fault that I discovered it too early! ! ! Ah! ! ! What's even more outrageous is that I've finished reading it! ! ! This means that I have to catch up on the update! ! ! Ah! ! ! Ah! ! ! Ah! ! ! ! ! ! Holy shit! ! !

But why did the Doomsday Mecha, the weapon of the Rhine Empire, attack the fortress? The fortress and the doomsday mecha should be in a friendly position. In addition, when the doomsday mecha wakes up and cannot contact its superiors, it feels normal to obey the orders of the fortress according to the authority level. The fortress currently lacks everything, so why didn't it try to communicate to gain control of the mecha? There is also a spaceship at the back. Why do players have to dismantle it? Wouldn't a complete and usable spaceship be of greater use?

Damn it, I just realized that you stopped updating

This is the most reasonable game article that summons players that I have seen so far, and the writing is really good.

Even if you are a eunuch, you can still be recommended. This is the operation code of the starting point.

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I'll come back in a year and ask you where those three pieces went.

One thing I have to say is that what I write is not just a cool article, but also a niche group portrait. It is a simple and pure story. I have never written the commander as the protagonist. Just like "Water Margin", no one is the protagonist. If I have to choose a protagonist, it will be the players as a group, the heroes of Shuibo Liangshan. And different from the templated characters, every character in the book is changing. For example, Qiu Wen, his character, his views on the world, and his behavior patterns will all change. And will a person who refuses to time travel really accept the world in the early stage? Will he be decadent and have no purpose? If some people think that the protagonist must have an accurate role positioning and personality performance at the beginning, then go out and scan the rankings. There are so many cool novels that meet your requirements from the starting point. There is no need to read my novels and still get angry with me. I write the book from the perspective of the story, not the perspective of the book. Whether I am a big fan or not has nothing to do with the readers, and it has little to do with me. To put it bluntly, whether the book is popular or not will not affect my life, but if I can write a good story, for me, it will be a dream come true. Speaking of so much, it was mainly because I was dumbfounded by a person's message this morning. He wrote a long and lengthy article, and his main purpose was to criticize me from the perspective of the protagonist's decadence. He felt that if I wrote this book, he would definitely be criticized, so forget it. There are so many people in the comment area who are not optimistic about me, and I have not deleted their comments. Discussions are welcome. This is the source of my progress. This person is different. He has a gun and a stick at the end of his long speech, and there is no personal attack on me. The most important thing is that he also has this sentence: "You can say something if you feel it is wrong, but I won't read it anyway." Then why are you sending this approval document? Purely disgusting, right?