Origin of Mars

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What is your relationship with Mars Mining (ノ๑`ȏ´๑)ノ⌨

Just, how should I put it, it involves some aerospace knowledge. The author is not a practitioner, so it is normal to make mistakes. After all, there are some things you don't understand and you don't know where to look. But can you give me some tips on common sense? The researchers who were the main participants in the top-secret incident were not subject to any jurisdiction. They went home directly after the holidays and were interviewed by foreign reporters. Has the author never heard of that group of people in the Northwest? Don't you know how mushrooms are grown? Don't sue your parents, don't sue your wife and children. Once the documents are signed, there will be no such person in the world. Contact with extraterrestrial civilizations is no less important than growing mushrooms, right? Just as loose as the waistband of cotton pants?

I have just read the first few chapters, and the biggest question is, if we encounter an alien civilization, do the teachers and students have full authority to decide on the space base? ? The sense of participation of the upper-level national power in the country is almost gone!

What should I say about this book? It suffers from the same common problem as the other Mars mining novels. The protagonist does not have a clear goal at the beginning. Why would you want to mine on Mars? Is it to survive? Or to explore the truth of the world? Or simply just want to farm. The author has an outline in his mind and knows why he is doing this, but the reader does not have it in his mind. So far, it is very baffling. He suddenly traveled through time, took the system and started farming directly. The protagonist did not think about why he traveled through time at all? Why do you want to mine here? Why do I have to go to work? Because I want to make money, why should I make money? Because I want to eat, why should I eat? Because if you don't eat, you will starve to death. This is the most basic logic. The protagonist has no driving force at all, just like a robot.

The writing was a bit unexpected, and I felt a little bit put off by the title. When I first read it, I was already prepared to be poisoned, but I didn't expect it to be unexpectedly good.

When I read this kind of book, I always have an idea, which is to set up a parallel world without us Asians, and directly avoid 404. Moreover, if foreigners with Asian faces have never seen them, they are basically no different from aliens. Without the fetters of the original world, it will be much easier to write, and there will not be so many taboos.

The book is still good, but there are many small details, like the clams are not spit out clean sand. The taste is good, but the sand is really harsh in the mouth.

These are two brothers, right?

Advantages: The writing is good and careful Disadvantages: ◈ There is no conflict in the character creation, which makes the characters very weak → It does not mean that there must be a plot of forcibly slapping the villain in the face → But all the character conflicts in this book are basically resolved in meetings, and it is also clear that the protagonist cannot fight → But this shows that there is a lack of a character who can confront the protagonist and bring plot tension → Even the Three-Body Problem is used ETO, instead of just throwing a sword and finishing it → There is obviously an element of alien threat in the plot, why not establish a character ◈What is the significance of the Blue Star plot →Now the protagonist's enemy is an alien civilization, Blue Star cannot help, but the text still focuses on Blue Star, which is very unbalanced →The author once said that he did not want to write about live broadcasts, but the vast universe, but now the plot weight of Blue Star>The weight of the universe plot

Everything else is good, but in terms of weapons, I don't understand. Why are you so obsessed with melee weapons? Is it so difficult to use long-range weapons? Both types of combat robots are melee. The first type of combat robot is equipped with long-range weapons and has to be recycled later. It must be divided into a melee weapon. And long-range, shouldn't it be possible to have both? Shouldn't a robot be armed to the teeth? Comprehensive development from long-range to close combat is the way to go. Interstellar civilization should develop towards giant ships and cannons instead of close combat. Don't write it down as two interstellar battleships engaging in a board battle, with men and horses from both sides fighting in close combat. That would be funny

Are you going to remain single for hundreds of years without revealing your human identity? It feels so boring, not looking for a girlfriend or anything.

It is inconsistent with normal people's thinking. The rules of the jungle apply no matter what. Normal people who have reached this level of technology cannot be so friendly.

This Mars article is not obtrusive and is very comfortable to read. You can see that the author is very careful in some parts. It is much better than some mindless slaps in the face. I suggest changing the introduction. Come on 🙂🙂

Is this a complete runaway? 11 Days

Are you and the author of Mining on Mars I Was Exposed together?

A two-hundred-meter interstellar battleship? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Does it matter?

I didn't realize what Pandora was at first, but later on, from the description of its appearance at night, I realized it was Avatar's planet, and that creature also looked like Avatar.

I present 5 monthly passes, I wonder if I can py one and add it (doge)

Be tolerant and patient with new authors! Give me more support and attention, and the author must work hard to improve his skills! There is much room for improvement in this work. The layout of the book is large and the scenes are big, but the author does not have deep experience of the big scenes! And the lack of tension among some of the characters in the book! Weird isn't it? Lack of extreme tension in things! All in all, the book is pretty good! But the fate of the country is not a child's play! What if my motherland enters level one alert! I will write my last words! Always be prepared to sacrifice!

This month has drained me dry. . Seven monthly passes. . Can you py an additional update? (Doge)

It's very good. I hope it keeps up. Although not many people read it, there are more words in the back. I believe it will definitely become a hit.

I have read the latest chapter. It is really good. I have tried this book. It is non-toxic and even a little sweet.

Fast update

The author writes this book well, it's quite attractive.

Has the protagonist transformed himself into a machine in the latest plot? If there is no preparation, when will it be renovated?

Not bad, I read it in one go, I'll give you 2 votes