Starting from the Xiangjiang Martial Arts Training in the 1970S

It's the first time I've seen the protagonist getting slapped at the beginning. I'm impressed. Goodbye.

When I read Chapter 8, I felt that the protagonist had no golden fingers in terms of military power. Not only did he not have any golden fingers, but he also created so many enemies to fuck him. This seemed too cruel to the protagonist. No wonder no one commented.

This is completely wrong. Are you going to say that you have traveled through time in a film or television drama? It is also linked to real society. It looks very confusing. Lei Luo is played by Andy Lau. There are no people like Lei Luo in real society.

The sadist doesn't have any special skills, so can he still be considered the protagonist? How chaotic was Hong Kong at that time? Don't you understand that a young and Dangerous boy will be a fool? Don't you understand that a gentleman won't stand behind a dangerous wall?

The writing is mediocre, the sense of immersion is very poor, the protagonist is witty, and it's very tiring to read. Let's summarize the reasons for this!

After seeing Zhao Yazhi, I lost interest in watching it.

Writing more insider information is better than pretending to be a slap in the face, really. 73 Looks like a stock market crash!

Here's a suggestion: don't make the chapter a long one! Break it into more paragraphs to make it more comfortable. 🙂

After reading your comments, I didn't even dare to click in and read them.

This time is too early, and it is difficult to write well. The book Dragon Tiger Xiangjiang was okay, but the subsequent writing about Hollywood was not good, and it became more and more exaggerated.

I saw three pictures. The author's writing style is relatively realistic. The writing is good. Give the author some advice. First, change the title of the book. Secondly, each paragraph is too long. I'm a little tired after watching it. You can write it in sections and don't make it too coherent.

It feels like you haven't thought about what to write at all. If you want to write an entertainment novel, don't write about the content in the movie. If you want to write about the content in the movie, don't write about the content in reality. It feels nondescript.

Ann Margaret

It's too early, there aren't many female stars

He was a loser before his rebirth, and he is still a loser after his rebirth.

Are there Xia Meng, Jing Li, Ouyang Peishan and Shi Si? They were all very beautiful when they were young and they are all popular now.

It's disgusting. When I see the protagonist's name, I have no desire to continue reading

If you have the opportunity to time travel and turn around, you have to become a dragon and tiger martial artist. This time travel opportunity should be given to those who are motivated. Not to mention becoming a tycoon like Li Ka-shing, at least he must be better than a martial artist.

I have never seen so many enemies of the protagonist in several chapters.

There are also Jin Fei, Jing Li, Ouyang Peishan, Wang Ping, Ling Bo, Shi Si and the three Great Wall Princesses Xia Meng and Shi Hui in the 1970s, all of whom have their own beauty and can create their own private Twelve Golden Hairpins 😎