Master, Something Is Wrong with You

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After seeing this, let me express my opinion. Aside from other things, I really like the creation of the characters of the master and the junior sister. The daily interactions are also interesting, and the writing style is daily and warm. But it's okay to write about daily life, and I like it very much, but it's just too bland until chapter 60 or even 70. The relationship with the master is all supported by the master. I don't even feel that the protagonist has the slightest thought about the master, and I can't see any thoughts about other women. The speed is quite fast, but it has no real use. I highly recommend the author's idea of ​​a gradual progression of relationships, but until the 80th chapter, the protagonist's relationship with the master was too ignorant, and the relationship between master and disciple did not progress at all. What I said is purely some feelings after seeing this place, and has no other meaning. Opinions expressed are personal only.

Is it the kind of daily love story that only sprinkles dog food, and can't push through hundreds of chapters?

It's really useless now, it's a waste of my points.

Damn, I was just about to read it. I took a look at the discussion forum and the chapter release date. This book is going to be cool. To be honest, as a new author, it is normal for the income to be poor at the beginning. If the writing is good and word spreads, the income will increase exponentially in the later period. And I think most people actually like to finish the novel. Maybe many new books just start with a good book and keep it. I hope the author will not be discouraged. Come on.

Don't be a eunuch, don't be a eunuch, I will read all the originals later, and I will make up for the previous ones 😭😭😭

Well, Master Xiao is pregnant. Wouldn't it be more exciting to go back and take the baby with him?

I read Chapter 200 and skipped through it. The Master's scenes became less and less, which was really boring.

I feel that the average quality of the monks in this book is quite good. Unlike the Mortals of Zhetian, almost everyone is cruel and ruthless. Even those in the same sect bully each other to kill and seize treasures. Just like the mortal Han Lao Mo has changed from an honest boy to a ruthless murderer.

After reading it, I feel that it focuses a bit on the life interaction between the master and the sisters, and it is a bit unlike the world of cultivating immortals!

The fan value requirement is too high. I don't know how to read the book, because those who meet the fan value standard basically like to read it. I believe that there are not many people like me who spend money just to say such a thing, so there are very few negative comments. I also didn't find the comments I wanted. In addition, it seems that the update is unstable, so I will not try and criticize.

A romantic drama in the garb of cultivating immortals, a harem story.

During the new book period, whether a book can survive depends greatly on the readers. The author of Pujie will update at least two times a day, and occasionally three times! After it is put on the shelves, we will do our best to update it. I beg you readers, please spend one minute every day to read the updated chapters. Thank you very much...

I want to watch the plot of bullying the master and destroying the ancestor! 😍😍😍

This book is so boring. It looked pretty good at first, but the ink marks were endless. The old bookworm can't stand such a slow pace. . And people's ideas.

The writing is quite good. According to this plot line, I feel that the excitement is at the back. Maybe it's just not recommended enough. Just don't be a eunuch.

I always feel that the chapters are a bit cracked and I am confused. It must be that it is blocked too much and it is difficult to change. Does the author have that kind of group that has vvvip chapters?

Damn it, I update it every four or five days. Are you in Qiansen?

Damn him, where is the author's address? The updates are so slow and the chapters are so fragmented. What's wrong with him?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The author is great 😭😭 I thought it was too cheap, but after half a year I finally read a few more chapters, keep at it 😢😢😢

I just want to see the scene when Ji Wanyue meets Su Ran😭

I suddenly searched for "Master, please don't come over" and found this book.