I Can See the Hidden Descriptions on Cards

That's a bit odd; you're just selling production materials directly. Selling to one company means one more competitor, and within a few years, low-level formulas will practically become commonplace. Your synthetic route has no restrictions, no catalyst, and doesn't even require skilled workers or equipment. You can just buy it and click a button, so it's impossible to stop the diffusion.

Oh no, the protagonist is going through life and death with a complete stranger? What kind of melodramatic plot is this?

The third chapter starts to contradict the established lore. The first two chapters say that ordinary people only know that cards exist and that becoming a summoner can make them very rich, but they don't know why becoming a summoner makes them rich, or what other meaning becoming a summoner can have besides being rich.

The synthesis formula is just given out so casually... That doesn't make sense.

The first three chapters can be deleted; they're mostly filler. I wanted to see the cards in the first chapter, but you still haven't gotten them by the fourth! If you want to introduce the world-building, it's best to do so gradually later on. Don't worry about readers not understanding.

Honestly... The synthesis formula is just sold so easily? How can you be sure it's correct? Can't I just make up any formula and sell it? Aren't there many scammers? Isn't there any guarantee at all?

I was turned away by the twin souls, they poisoned me!

Let's discuss the flaws in this article. 1. The dual-soul concept, serving as a long-term "money bag," plays a crucial role in advancing the plot. However, its origin is too abrupt. Li Hui received too little attention in the early stages, her character development even falling short of Feng Lai's. Suddenly, she shares a soul with the protagonist—did the author revise the outline?

Sharing life and death? You're just using this power-hungry woman to drag the protagonist down, aren't you?

The protagonist is a transmigrator with a soul strength of 180 or higher. He actually believed he was a remnant soul? What is something without soul strength? A zombie? Are those with an intensity of 50 or lower zombies? Those who are less than 100 are probably in a vegetative state. If the strength of the soul does not represent its completeness.