I Can See the Hidden Descriptions on Cards

You're doing something a bit different here, selling production materials directly. If you sell one, you will have one more competitor. It won't take a few years for the low-end formula to become useless. Your synthesis route has no restrictions, no catalysts, and you don't even need skilled workers or equipment. You can just buy it and it's done. There is no way to prevent the spread.

No, the protagonist lives and dies together with an unfamiliar person. This is a bloody plot.

The third chapter started to eat the settings. In the first two chapters, it was said that ordinary people only know that cards exist, and becoming a Summoner can make you rich. However, I don't know why becoming a Summoner makes me rich, and I don't know what other meanings there are besides making money after becoming a Summoner. I thought the top management had implemented information control to prevent ordinary people from knowing the truth about the world, but in the third chapter, everyone knew about the existence of the secret realm!

The synthesis formula is given to people so casually. . . Unreasonable

The first three chapters can be deleted, they are basically nonsense, I want to see the cards in the first chapter, but you still don't have the cards in the fourth chapter! If you want to introduce the world view, it is best to introduce it slowly at the end. Please don't be afraid that readers will not understand it.

To be fair... The synthetic formula was sold so easily? How do I make sure this is correct? Then I can just make up one and sell it? Are there not many liars? Isn't there any guarantee? ? ?

Being persuaded to quit by my twin soul poisoned me to death

Discuss the poisonous points of this article 1. The twin souls played an important role in advancing the plot as a long-term soft meal, but the source was too abrupt. There was too little pen and ink on Li Hui in the early stage, and the character creation was not even as good as Feng Lai. Suddenly he became one with the protagonist and had two souls. Did the author change the outline? 2. The golden finger does not match the rhythm of the plot. The strength of this cheat is too high, comparable to a hundred-fold increase or something. This kind of intensity is usually good after three chapters, and explosive after ten chapters. However, the author seems to want to seriously advance the plot, so the result of the cheat being too strong is that readers will think that the protagonist is sitting idle, being criticized for wasting resources and not using them. This is the biggest flaw, and it is also an essential conflict. If there is no balance, a good book will not go far. 3. As a summoning text, the current summoned beasts seem to be promoted in different ways, without a system, and there is no interesting chemical reaction between summoned objects. Just look at the three Pokémon and Pikachu to see how important the initial summoned monster is. It would be too hurt if you change it midway. 4. The author has designed two battle systems, the secret realm and the real world, and they are very different. This means that two lineups need to be prepared in the middle and later stages, which will lead to the problem of too many summons and scattered writing. Too many characters mean that each character has no characteristics. 5. The emotional line is too blunt, and the buffs of the married couple are tied too tightly, basically destined to be a single female protagonist. Then the relationship should start from the ambiguity of youth, and constantly spread the dog food. As for the attitude of the protagonist, the straight male attribute of the harem novel is another conflict. Will the protagonist have to open a harem with telepathy in the future? I feel that there are still a lot of problems in this book, and I look forward to the author's follow-up play.

Live and die together? For such a powerful woman, you dragged her here to hold the protagonist back, right?

The protagonist is a time-travelling person with a soul strength of 180 and moving up. He actually believes that he is a remnant soul? What is it without soul strength? Zombies? Anyone with strength below 50 is a zombie? Those who are less than one hundred are probably in a vegetative state. If soul strength does not represent completeness. The protagonist, the time traveler, must be at least half a soul. It is impossible for twin souls to be twins who have traveled through time, right? I have to wonder if the protagonist believed in the so-called World Tree because his brain was squeezed by the door when he traveled through time. If the author is the setting of this twin soul. Then...