Black Technology: I Want to Start with Toys

I'm thinking about making Doraemon and those concept props. For example, if there is a telephone booth, any door, unlimited replication liquid, a devil's license with supreme power, a time shuttle, a zoom lamp, a translation potato (can translate the languages ​​​​of all species) Superpower training box (including teleportation, telekinesis and other superpowers) Lumberjack's Fountain (items dropped underwater will be copied into three by the river god, as long as you answer correctly and don't lie, you can get two gold and silver replicas and the original.)

Directly built a plasma spark tower Everyone evolved directly Because there is no light in the heart We all became crayfish planets In the end, the earth's environment was destroyed Build a spaceship for survival Traveled to a parallel universe Then we were killed by the Specium Ray

The male protagonist has the power of my imagination, the real Kamen Rider belt! Really. The Belt of the Kaijia Warrior! Rape Kep! Gundam! ... These can all be manufactured!

The author's ideas are really good, but the writing style needs to be improved. It reads dry and has no sense of immersion at all.

The Flying Broomstick was very busy. When he first started working on a four-wheel drive, he built a Flying Broomstick and flew up a mountain in front of people at a construction site. . . . . . .

I wonder if you are just flying broomsticks in these 14 chapters, is it really illogical? Put aside this magical creation? ? ? Why don't foreign mercenaries want to come in? I'm afraid that if it weren't for this rhythm, in Chapter 30, foreign countries would have to go to war with China. It would be really outrageous to open the door to outrageous things. It would be outrageous.

The beginning was interesting, but until Broomstick, Digimon became even more outrageous. Forget about Digimon, what is the relationship between Pokémon and technology? They are physical lives, but Digimon is still a life transformed from data. Pokémon itself is life. The overall feeling is like Zihai, but can Zihai also write so much?

I wonder

I don't know if the author has noticed that there are fewer and fewer comments after each chapter, which shows that most readers are no longer interested in commenting. I think the beginning of this book is good, with a sense of immersion, but something obviously goes wrong later on. First of all, when you write a book, you must make the protagonist a human being, so that readers can feel that the protagonist is just like me, also likes money, is lustful, etc. The protagonist now writes that he was an ordinary person in his previous life, but after time travel, he can become a saint and be busy inventing and playing games all day long. You make so much money and you don't enjoy it. As an ordinary person in the previous life, shouldn't you squander the money you have? The author wrote the protagonist as a robot, which I think is not very logical. The golden finger set by the author is very good, but what can I say, it is wasted by letting you write it. Your golden finger can be written in a big way, and it can lead mankind to fly into the universe and become a great man in human history. However, you use it to write games. In fact, your book is similar to a novel I have read, The Best Tokusatsu Era, but that book is much less cheating than yours, and The protagonist of the book is shaped like a human being, and you just feel like an invention machine. If you want to write about games, then to be honest, there is no need to use such a big cheat. If you want to write about black technology, just describe the game less. Sometimes, you have identified a part and written it, and the subscription is indispensable. But according to your current writing method, the result is hard to say.

The idea is great but the writing is useless. The first one is the flying broomstick. I can't imagine the scene of a stick man flying all over the sky. A jetpack is better than your broomstick. The article talks about using anti-gravity. What action would the above take if they knew it was anti-gravity? Then you create it, shoot a video and live broadcast, and there is no follow-up. The second one is Digimon. It is enough to create a virtual digital world with virtual projection. You also want to resurrect Digimon, what would it be like to do it in the real world? You stopped engaging in technology and began to sublimate the world, from a modern technological world to a super-powerful World of Warcraft? What if you want to make an armor belt later and go directly to the world of gods and demons?

. . . . . . . Well, it feels a bit like using a cannon to swat mosquitoes. This book is so big. I am a man of two generations and only make some fancy things. I look forward to the author writing another book with the same theme on other topics.

The idea is really good, but it's a pity that the author wrote it in a mess, and even good suggestions are not listened to. It's so broken that I really can't read it with my brain.

You are putting the cart before the horse a bit. You are writing about black science and technology, not about the advent of the second dimension.

While the author is writing that it's okay to think about it, flying broomsticks and Digimon have come out, he also says that "the rules of physics" must be followed. In fact, the "rules of physics" are also part of the protagonist's thinking, otherwise I'm afraid it wouldn't be if the phone booths came out.

I wonder about the protagonist's ability to hold it in his mouth so well. What other toys are you making? Even if we are short of money, we are not very short. If only I had become the mastermind behind the world so early. First develop a company to promote virtual technology and artificial intelligence technology. Then it is deduced that biotechnology is based on this to create protons. Using protons as a guarantee, it can initially monitor the world and hide itself behind the scenes. You can rest assured initially. And keep your basic base. Then go and deduce the extraordinary. And use the earth as arable land for farming. And learn from the senior farming time travelers how to upgrade the world so that you can win. Extraordinary is not superstition. But unknown. 😏😏😏

Dear author, your idea is actually a very good idea. But your background is a parallel earth world. This kind of world is relatively empty, the upper limit is not high enough, and there is no competitiveness. If this continues, the plot will at most be the protagonist inventing some high-tech toys, which is completely self-pleasure, without interactive conflicts, and relatively streamlined. I suggest using the world view of Marvel or DC as the background, letting the protagonist's toy company compete interactively with the Stark and Osborn companies in Marvel, and letting the protagonist compete with Tony, Parker and other movie characters, so that you can have the pleasure of meeting your opponent. Only in this way can the world be exciting and beautiful.

The idea is really good, but the writing is not very good. I feel like I am just swallowing everything. If one thing is not clearly written, I will move on to the next one. In just a few dozen chapters, you have crammed the plot of three toys into it. I am afraid that I will not be able to continue writing later or it will collapse.

After reading a few chapters, I made a small complaint. The infringement upon opening the box was outrageous. Did I buy something and shoot a video to post it? Or buy it, find it's not good, and then point out the infringement?

It's okay for me to think about the protagonist, and I also think about you, the author. This is nonsense, the book is too torn, and many twists and turns are not foreshadowed. The first photolithography machine didn't pave the way, but I thought it would be 100 million, and the second Digimon didn't pave the way, so I thought it would be possible with him. Please! Reality may not be logical, but novels still have some logic.

It started out interesting but then got more and more boring.

I was confused when the Pokémon came out later.

Isn't the power of my thinking a green-skin-exclusive ability in Warhammer? Will using this bring in all the four vendors in the space?

It's a pity, it's too inconsistent. It would be better if it were a normal scientific article.

It's all about self-pleasure, what parallel world is more awesome? Why are you such a dick? Why don't you just go to parallel worlds where everyone is Einstein? No one plays with your toys. Human beings have long since achieved spiritual immortality.

It's so well written that I don't think I'm worthy.

I think this is what the author should be like.

Don't look at Gezi. You don't have this book. Even Gezi doesn't have this book. How unpopular is this book? ། – _ – །

I think when we start making real treasures, Pokémon starts to fall apart. If you want to know, I think it is still a virtual reality game or making that kind of fantasy top. What a fantasy yo-yo battle. It's better to play games that don't involve reality as much as possible.

What is the protagonist's golden finger? How did he create the chip? There are also various motors. I haven't seen it after reading ten chapters.

I'm thinking, I can see the armor merging, but I don't see it. This doesn't mean that my thinking doesn't work. It seems that it really doesn't work.