Ten Companies! I Drew the Guqin Girl

Child labor…

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Is this my problem or the book's problem

The style of painting changed so fast The rhythm I developed in the early stage was quite good. After a trip to the United States, the style of painting suddenly changed and the rhythm suddenly collapsed.

It's really annoying that the status of the guqin is being belittled in order to highlight how awesome the luthier is.

On the last day of the seven-day holiday I logged into Qidian I came across this book This is fate 🙂 I am chasing this book It is to my taste, don't cut it 🙂 This is the fourth book I have chased Looking forward to it

How can I put it, this exaggeration of the tragic background of the girl is a bit too strong, and the campus beauty still seems to be in a famous university, so it is not that it is not, no matter what, it is not that you deliberately broke your piano, and you are not allowed to compete. At most, you will not be ranked in the competition.

I feel that starting from the painter Liu Qianqian, the plot is a bit unharmonious and coherent. After the protagonist comes back from rescuing people, his style of painting changes suddenly, as if he is a different person. The author should not write too much.

There are so many onomatopoeias, how can you use them properly? Have you never heard Guqin music? Is that a ploy? How would you use an instrument that is difficult to appear at large concerts due to its low volume? You can only play the instrument of a close friend in the mountains and rivers? Even if you use the original lyrics, it will be better than this! I didn't feel much about the old routine I used before, and the poison resistance was really high if I ate too many poisonous weeds. But this is the first time that my blood pressure has soared while listening to a book! I can't fall asleep at all after listening to the book to hypnotize me! You Dangdang Douyin Kuaishou garbage video dubbing has been heard too many times! Since I have written about Guqin, I will not end up with just one character when I finish writing this chapter by listening to some Guqin music! Water is fine, but don't be as uneducated as water! Since you have chosen to be paid to comment, then read more comments. If you can change it, change it as soon as possible. If you can't change it, post a single chapter to explain the situation. At the very least, if you are willing to spend money to complain about it, it must be unacceptable to many people!

I just saw the competition performance there. Are you serious about that onomatopoeia? So many people say it's awkward, and I think it's quite embarrassing. The author should change it. Also, there's no need to describe the trance after the performance, wearing fresh clothes, angry horses, and carefree. I can't deal with the double attack. If you don't know how to describe it, you don't have to write it. The author should pay less attention to that. Entertainment article, this is not entertainment. This kind of description is not the finishing touch, it is superfluous. You are expressing your own opinion on the song. In short, there should be less unnecessary descriptions. And that onomatopoeia, the description of a song is all Dang Dang Dang, and you also wrote the corresponding lyrics? I'll take off directly. Come on, bro. I'll continue to take a look. I hope there won't be any more in the future.

Beautiful or not

I put the poison on the shelf and took it. The well-portrayed girl suddenly became obsessed with love. . .

The protagonist shouldn't always be so sprightly, right? It can be used to adjust the atmosphere, but there is really no need to spend several chapters describing his sexual behavior.

The pattern is getting smaller, it's getting smaller, the whole girl in the other world, what you teach here will become another method on the other side, sonic killing. Then you gradually discover the truth, ask about the cultivation method, and then find that this world has spiritual energy, and you have always been the frog in the well.

I have posted this before. The world view of this book changed drastically after returning to country M, and the supporting characters' combat power increased too much. The author still deleted my review? After a while, I came back and saw that it was really bad. Don't always think that many people are criticizing you. Bad things are bad, and bad reviews are also based on feelings.

The male protagonist used his real body to meet the female protagonist in the United States. Later, when he went to the academy, he didn't recognize her. It was a little weird. I just watched the last scene. If I can't recognize the face, I can't hear the voice either? Looking at it this way, does the heroine really like the hero? Or do you just like his immortal status? But it's really good-looking. At least it makes me willing to spend money to watch it. Come on

The heroine

It's a pity that this setting is quite good, but the style of painting suddenly changed and it suddenly became bloody.

It is estimated that the author has to change his name, otherwise he will prepare for pigeons 😅😅😅😥😥😥

The change in style is too abrupt. The first part is still a farming and cultivation story, but the second part has a sudden change of style into a passionate story. I can't accept it! Hey!

I can't stand it. Either I'm discriminating against Guqin or I'm discriminating against Chinese people. If I don't discriminate, I won't be able to continue writing.

I can't quite understand what's written now.

Isn't this the end? Why does it show investment failure? ? ?

When will the update return to normal?

Is there a bug in this book? Two people are in the same world. The female protagonist has only been practicing piano for a day and slept. The male protagonist has slept for a while and the female protagonist's progress is 20%. It took a few days for the male protagonist to practice the piano well, but the female protagonist only had one day that day. How can it be possible in the same world with such a time difference?

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