When People Are in the Demon Slayer Division, Martial Arts Evolve on Their Own.

After reading dozens of chapters, I discovered a problem: the protagonist is too reckless, the officials are too useless, and they don't have their own intelligence organization. They have to investigate everything by themselves. Big things cannot be found, but there should be information on small things.

It's the same as the introduction. The three views are very upright but not suitable for me. A trash character took a civilian female hostage and threatened the protagonist. In the end, the threat was really successful. The woman committed suicide. After seeing the woman's mother, I felt all kinds of guilt. After that, I came out. Everyone 886

There is a novel in which the exercises have different tempers. The first book is quite interesting at first glance, but it is not good for those who follow the trend. Readers can't bear to be led by the exercises. There is also a novel in which the exercises are automatically cultivated, and then the system automatically arrives, and a certain evil sect saint is given a double holiday~😏 It can be seen that the author is different. The path you choose, the exercises and other things cannot take the spotlight, otherwise people will be gone before it is on the shelves~ In recent chapters, the space for the exercises has been reduced, so keep this trend going. To summarize, the various arrogances and skills in the previous chapters are a bit annoying to watch, but they are getting better and better in the following chapters...

After reading dozens of chapters, almost all the protagonists are similar to Mang. The Demon Slayer Department is like a mercenary association, not like a ZF organization. Many times, it is very simple to notify or pass on a message, but not pass it on. Especially in the protagonist's era, if someone accidentally disappears, at least pass on the clues to avoid the same situation happening next time.

Wherever the protagonist goes, something happens,

There is a bug in the Demon Slayer. They are obviously working for the government, but they still have to exchange their contribution points for it. This is like asking firefighters to put out fires, and then they have to put out fires themselves in exchange for fire extinguishing guides.

The author seems to like the protagonist being groveling. In the end, he deliberately made the protagonist lose all his cultivation and let the protagonist practice again. The strength and rights that the protagonist had finally gained through cultivation were all gone. The protagonist was made to grovel to someone who could slap him to death in the past. It was very good to be lectured.

When I saw the chapter that was mentioned in the comments, the protagonist showed no interest in the hostage and directly injured the hostage. Later, he also said that the man was just sick and sought medical treatment. He didn't know the protagonist's goal. Why was the protagonist so mentally retarded? The man who wanted to take action would have died long ago. The woman committed suicide, and even the warrior could not react. She is indecisive and cannot achieve great things. She should die as soon as possible and be reincarnated (annoyed)

The world is like this, so we should write less about official fights and create conflicts and write more about evil cultivators, otherwise it will look depressing.

Is it me who practices the exercises, or does the exercises cultivate me? It is outrageous to not practice a sword technique that is not advanced but dislikes the master's rubbish sword, and the writing is also incomprehensible. If you don't practice swordsmanship automatically, why don't you practice other things? It's been a few years and I still write in such a frustrating way, I'm a pure slave to Kung Fu.

It's not about adding points, it's not something you can control yourself, so... The author is so glass-hearted that the readers can only speak half a sentence.

Reading it today, I hope it's not a story that suppresses the protagonist.

The last twenty chapters have been simply toxic, and if your cultivation level has fallen off, you have to build it back up again. After returning from cultivation, will the previous strength suddenly be restored and become a heavenly being all of a sudden? This kind of plot makes people feel unmotivated. Even if they want to sort out their own cultivation, why can't they complete it while maintaining the original cultivation level? It's disgusting to see.

Generally speaking, just count the food and grass. You can read it in Shuhuang. One thing that makes people complain the most is that the rewards for completing the missions of the Demon Slayer Division are too few. I don't know how much credit the protagonist has made, and it is a big credit. Except that the protagonist seems to have been given a pill when he was the weakest? Then later on, the higher-ups didn't even mention it, and they didn't get any rewards. I just couldn't understand it. They worked so hard and got no credit, not even the big cake. All the demon slayers just rely on their blood to work, right? It's not like I was brainwashed since childhood. This is probably the biggest poisonous point.

The front part is okay, but the rebuilt part at the back is disgusting and poisonous. I believe many people left there. If you don't have a plot to write, there is no need to be so disgusting, right? Slaying demons has turned into a sect fighting within the sect. Do you feel that there wasn't much written about pretentiousness and slap in the face and you wanted to write more? Really disgusting

Taoist priest Wu Liang

The main character is too anti-intellectual and I have to persuade him to quit because of my strength.

The Nine-Yang Magic Technique is extremely yang. The Nine-Yang Magic Technique is too excessive and pure Yang. How do you describe this kind of technique? Although it is good to deal with ghosts, once you reach the eighth or ninth level of cultivation, you will definitely need pure Yin energy as an aid to break through. To popularize the knowledge of Chinese Taoism to you, nine represents Yang in China, and six represents Yin in China. This is what is said in the Chinese Taoist Book of Changes, and the full name of Nine Yang Divine Art is Yang Yang Zhen Jing, the full name of Nine Yin Zhen Jing is Yin Yang Zhen Jing, and the Shooting Condor In the Legend of Heroes, the Nine Yin Manual is actually incomplete, because only the pure yin practice methods are left. The Nine Yin Manual is divided into three volumes, namely the general volume, the first volume, and the second volume. Among them, the general circle writes the method of combining yin and yang.

If you don't update anymore, won't you just become a eunuch? ? ? ?

The protagonist is saying that ghosts and gods are nothing, they are not worthy of our kneeling down, and then he really does not hesitate when using the power of God. He uses the power of God to say disrespectful words to God. I don't want to say more, the book is still good-looking, and there are many poisonous points.

No matter how nice you say it, there will still be internal fighting among the human race, and countless casualties will be caused by the exorcism department. In exchange for the suppression by the royal family, competition is okay, but if you suppress it and suppress intelligence, I really don't know what to say.

When fighting, it feels almost like a 50-50 split.

This book definitely offends people. There are other books that are 10,000 times more disgusting than this one, but there are not as many trolls as this book. I even saw a lot of people cutting off the content and cutting off the content.

I think ancient charlatan writings are ordinary and a little bit mythical, serious but a little funny, time-traveling and mysterious, imitating the past without being modern is a good idea. Otherwise, modern times are not urban, ancient times are not rigorous, funny and far-fetched. It's really not that good.

Every time I fight, it feels hard to be the same

Just because you wrote 750 chapters with 1.4 Million words, you have no desire to read. How stupid is that?

Why are updates so slow recently?

The author is probably reading a new book. This kind of refreshing writing route is still quite feasible now.

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I can't help but complain, what the hell is written. One second the master is dead and confused, the next second it feels interesting to practice new skills, there is no process at all, and I have to write a bunch of bad stories. "Death Replay" is not well written, there are quite a lot of words, no one can remember it after reading it for a long time, and the background setting is also very problematic. It seems that in the early stage, the whole world has only a few positions with force, there are too many loopholes, and it still starts with the same old task-training-infighting.