Uncle's Huayu

I posted too many suggestions on Fatty, and I know it's not good, but I still want to say that I'm not afraid of being criticized. I quoted Fatty's words, "If you're happy to scold me, it's my contribution." I just don't want the author to sink. After watching Honor's Huayu before, I felt that the author's writing was very similar to a script (I never knew that the author had ever been a screenwriter). Many of the plots were driven by dialogue, so many people found it very long-winded. This thing is very fatal. TV dramas express information faster and have more dialogues as a matter of course. However, novels are completely different. Many things in novels are not expressed through words. They may be expressions, actions, and events written in seconds. More of them should be narratives. All I can say is that if I keep writing screenplays, my novel results will never be better. There are various other small problems. The small problems are not really small, but they appear small compared to the previous problems. The writing is too realistic. The protagonist is always an ordinary person in his heart. His heart is not strong. It sounds like a hanging thread. To be honest If you are weak in your heart, you will not succeed in rebirth Sometimes the plot is very abrupt. For example, Li Ruobai suddenly It's really abrupt to fire Glory and let him go home. Even if you just write a little story about Li Ruobai, say that Li Ruobai has a lot of ideas in his heart, has done some things such as building plank roads openly and secretly hiding in Chencang, and his character is self-sacrifice. The problem is huge. You should really make more friends and exchange more information with the outside world. If you are a homebody, make friends with other authors. Homelessness is not a reason for being autistic. Let's put it this way, if your other author friends read your books, ask them for some advice and exchange these issues with each other. It is obvious and will not lead to writing down subsequent books. Or learn from other books, compare your own problems, and correct them in time. If you have some insights after reading it, it is also my modest contribution Above

After watching You Are My Glory and seeing Dilireba's face, let's just leave her alone.

Fatty, please write well this time. From Lian Zhan to Fat Han, from God-loving to Glory, I have witnessed the peaks and the troughs. I hope this time is a new beginning. Don't forget your original intention. Come on! !

Reba is invincible

After reading Chapter 10, I really can't stand it anymore. Fatty, can't you change the shortcomings of a literary youth like you? Preaching, entanglement, and bullying. Why do you have to have it in every book? Can't we just let the protagonist have a smooth journey? Unexpectedly, the protagonist is despised by everyone and then successfully counterattacks? No matter how many times the crooked truth is told, it is still crooked. It is nothing more than a question of taking sides. The three of them struggled for more than ten chapters. As a film and television creation company, do you care about other agencies? You've been reading this plot logic problem for so many books, haven't you solved it yet?

The author has reached this point, why don't he reflect on it? What the hell kind of plot is this? ? Isn't your problem with this literary youth too serious? The key is that without the talent of the literary youth, it is all the pretentiousness of the literary youth.

The fat man made Han Cuo's character a little tighter. Don't be as extreme as the protagonists in the previous books. Han Cuo is not an orphan in this book. No matter whether Xiao Zhao treats him like that in the end, she should really be pampered as her own woman during the relationship stage. She was so doting on Xiao Di in the early stage, but now Xiao Zhao is talking about people getting divorced and having children. In reality, men and women don't talk about each other all the time. Xiao Zhao, the way you write about her shows her true feelings. Even if he still thinks about Xiaodi, does he feel no guilt at all? Any person with a good outlook on life will feel moved for a moment.

Are all the people reading this book over 30 years old? Most of the comments section are old fans. As a newbie, I said that I can't understand the first few chapters. It's too confusing. The main character is too young. It looks a bit awkward and a bit depressing. Most of the readers now are 18 to 27-8. It doesn't make sense for you to be so old. What should I do next? I feel that the whole writing style is very disappointing.

Fatty, you were seriously ill, so you ended it in a hurry. As a result, not long after I reconciled with Li Ruodi, classmate Xiao Zhao became pregnant. Or open a harem, the single heroine is not like the single heroine, and there is a licking dog Lin Xuan hanging next to you, this book will make you write a piece of shit

Realistic style, I really can't stand it, I'm still in my 30s, it's not cool enough, there's a reason for your poor performance in the plain realistic style, I suggest the author take a look at I really don't want to fight with gods.

Write well, come on! Still standing up to form an alliance

To be honest, you have always written hypocritically, and you have seen too many plots. Every time others praise the protagonist, it is the same. Including the first two books... Regardless of the heroine, other companies also praise the protagonist as much, and the protagonist is also very pretentious 😅😅 I really think it's good. I can't remember the names of the next two books, but the only thing I remember is how others praised the protagonist...

You're still a jerk when you write this book like this

After reading the first chapter, I felt like you had sent this book again. A new story always has to have something to do with the book at the beginning, and then write about yourself. I'm not sure whether old readers will like it or not, but new readers will definitely be confused.

Fatty is still capable, but don't write about protagonists with bad character. After all, people read novels for entertainment, not to feel angry.

There was a dog who was old and sick. He used to be able to run faster and grab food, but someone broke one of his legs. Now he is living a hard life and the food he grabs is getting less and less. One day, the person who broke its leg found it and told him to give you, an old dog, a chance. Remember, just once, to see if you can survive with enough food. The old dog didn't want to die, so he accepted it. There was a person who said to others, "How is it? I have got the dog I am looking for. Even if it takes a long time, if you see if it dares to resist, I will give it to a little girl to play with later." There was a little girl who got an old dog. The old dog could bark twice. She was so happy!

Fatty, what have you been through? Your writing skills have dropped so much. Fatty's Korean entertainment has reached its peak, right?

That's pretty much it. The tag introduction says it's China Entertainment. The question is, does the latest update have anything to do with entertainment? Excluding the background of a screenwriting company, what you are writing now are trivial workplace articles with Zhang Shuo comments, and your writing is not very good. At the beginning, you wrote that you wanted to change Bula Bula. Where did you change it? ? ?

I read Ceng Shen a long time ago, and I thought it was very good, but I haven't read the following books. There were a lot of reviews on the books, which were a bit empty.

There's no need to write about Zhao Liying, right? All have children

Can't the author change the heroine? Can't Tong Liya Nazha do it? Lao Yang and Reba are both bald.

After reading thirty or forty chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. So far, this company is really rubbish. Why do I have to stay here? Neither the system nor the leadership is good, so what are you trying to do? Based on the ability of the protagonist described, is there no way out in other industries? This protagonist is so frustrated to live, and I'm so frustrated to watch.

It makes me sick, really. I got stuck. After reading thirty chapters, I felt that there was something wrong with the protagonist. It was too awkward for a grown man to be so pretentious.

This book is not purely Chinese entertainment, but it is actually well written, much better than Mangchuan or something like that. In the fast-paced modern society, people can't read it at the beginning, and they won't read carefully in the middle and later parts. It's a pity that it's a mess. It's hard to calm down.

Now it's getting worse and worse. Fat Entertainment only started to go downhill after Xiujing ended. But Huayu is on the decline. Let's just stop being so petty and embarrass Northeast China. When I read your book with real friends, they all asked me if you guys in the Northeast are not self-deprecating, you are so petty.

I can't stand it anymore, and I've lost my fandom. Did you hire a writer to write for you? What a joke. Forget it, quit the trap

Someone reported a 404 and then licked it?

Does Bai Geng mean literally?

Old readers may be used to it, but as a new reader, I read a few pictures and a long dialogue, but I didn't get into it. If you have the patience, you can check out what happens next. Personally, I feel a little discouraged. "Everyone said it was good because of the name, and I read dozens of pictures"

Well, who is the heroine? I can't identify her at all. It looks too dramatic and I can't relate to it at all.