I Want to Brave the Entertainment Industry

There is no positive energy, The IQ of the people watching it is worrying, I have read a few pictures that are so disgusting that the harem is so outrageous The writing is wrong. In short, it is garbage.

A few hours after a person dies, the body can still be alive. Even Taishang Laojun's Resurrection Pill can't save you. Three hours later, the body will obviously stink and have spots all over the body. It will take six hours to rot. Summer time is faster. In a criminal case, the body was transported to the hospital before the police arrived. Which hospital would accept the body?

Write in another book. This book is completely different from Ceng Shen. I have read every book and this one is the worst one.

I felt like there was no outline when writing this book. I felt dizzy while reading it. There was a problem with the timeline and the relationships between the characters were messy. I had read the author's Korean entertainment novels in the past which were good. How could this one fall short of the standard?

Impressions of the new book---want them all! Children only make choices, adults want them all! The style change in the new book is so dramatic and the speed is so fast... I just can't stop! Crazy exploration on the edge of indescribability will make new book friends smile knowingly and old book friends exclaim that it is so delicious. Perhaps it is more accurate to use a starting keyword to describe the style of the new book, that is, cool writing, no abuse, no licking, just do it~ Protagonist impression---Mangzha Han The classic soul-traveling whitewashing mode, watching a good person become bad will make people feel sad and angry, and watching a bad person become good will make people feel spiritual healing. Of course, the premise is that the bad person has not reached the level of heinousness. Is Han Wei's predecessor considered a bad person? Let's not talk about whether there is some secret behind it. Maybe this is the hidden clue left by the fat man. When the pieces are pieced together in the following chapters and the clouds disperse, maybe everything has his reasons. But just from the appearance, he was a scumbag who penetrated half of the entertainment industry, was unparalleled in his own harem, and was stabbed to death in the end... At least he died without complaint. Then the advantage of soul travel is reflected. A good person is at least not a bad person. Being brave is ultimately the embodiment of kindness. Such a "white" soul travels into a "black" body, inherits the past and builds on the future, and is willing to shoulder all kinds of love debts. You must know that love debts are the most difficult to repay in the world. Money debts at least have a number that can be measured. How to measure love debts? What to compensate for? Money? Fame and fortune? The protagonist is just an eighteenth-level character. After all, love debts must be repaid, and love goes deep... Naturally, it is also a joy to hear ~ There is no need to compare it with reality, because reality is often more magical than novels. All kinds of irrationality and unreality may just be hidden in the clouds, making it difficult to find out. I have been unable to sleep for a long time. When I read this novel, I am just looking for a moment of relief~

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I really can't stand this character's dialogue.

I just finished reading the end of Love Wars. Fatty has been liberated recently. He has been criticized in various ways. The new book was rejected at the beginning 😃😃

What kind of book is this? It's said to be entertainment, but it's actually royal sex, you know.

I saw it on the shelves. To be honest, it was different from traditional entertainment articles. It was really not fun before it was released. There were more than 80 chapters, all of which were just to wipe the ass of the predecessor. How about the follow-up?

It's wonderful and beautiful. The language is really good, but the characters are a bit short and not readable enough. Please update it! ! !

I support Fatty's entertainment writing, but can the new book be more plot-oriented, not too colorful, and just love one person? I love Reba so much, even if the male protagonist is not in the entertainment industry, that's fine.

This new book hasn't been started yet, and I've read a lot of spoilers and chats in the group. I'm very encouraging of Fatty's change in style, especially now that he's obedient and listens to everyone's opinions. It's like the two extremes of Luizhan immersing himself in writing a book and getting stuck in a dead end without repenting. As for the new book, it will be released as soon as it is ready to be put on the shelves. I don't know if there will be hundreds of updates. The only opinion I have is: everyone knows that fat people write books with a lot of dialogue between characters, and it is easy to get confused. And when describing the dialogue, the adjective prefixes and other things are easy to repeat. I recently re-read a few episodes after finishing Love, and the one that impressed me the most is There are all kinds of "laughing", "curiosity", "surprise", etc. There was a time when I was extremely tired of the male protagonist who always smiled bitterly and touched his nose. Fatty's characters often spoke in the same way, and there were too many dialogue descriptions. Repeated use of these words made it seem very alienating~~ They all looked like actors and couldn't speak well. The character of the male protagonist has always reminded me of Chandler in Friends. When he feels embarrassed or wants to liven up the atmosphere, he will take the initiative to tell jokes and sarcastically mock his friends and even himself. But the terrible thing is that the lines are all thought up by an editorial team with their hair pulled back, and as a web article, it is naturally much more casual. I read the first paragraph of the new book before it was changed. The male protagonist woke up in the hospital, faced with the cheated man and his girlfriend, and yelled and joked about the current situation. I felt embarrassed reading the text through the screen, and then quit. Of course, this is in line with the inferiority complex of a little person. He always subconsciously uses humor to cover up to please others, but if he doesn't scratch him to the point, he will feel embarrassed and even look down on the male protagonist. In the previous books, I will not talk about the glory of Huayu. The other male protagonists have exactly the same character, such as the transparent Han Lu and Yan Huang, who took off after his debut and even became an employer. No matter how strong and manly he appears, I always feel that it is just an illusion. Strength and pride are not just words and words, but others are speechless (in fact, I think the male protagonist is more of a double standard), or makes three-way jokes on women because of his identity as a man.

Are there any charges for these two chapters? Why repeat it so much?

I don't know what kind of mentality the author used to write this book. The writing style is average to above average, and although there is a lot of moisture in it, it's okay to read, and the logic is barely consistent. Although I have only read twenty or thirty chapters, in my opinion it is just a self-pleasure article, and the author has no intention of writing any good results. The reasons are as follows: 1. The three views are incorrect. Although describing it from an alternative perspective is more attractive to niche readers, a niche is a niche after all. Looking at the starting point, there is no book with good results that does not have the protagonist "Wei Guangzheng". Not to mention that the protagonist of this book was a scumbag before she was married to an actress, and she was also a scumbag after marriage (they were still a couple legally before the documents were issued), which is a failure. 2. The branches are messy. This is supposed to be the main character, but when it doesn't appear, it focuses too much on irrelevant supporting characters. I can understand that the author wanted to dig a hole, but you were so eager to read it that you had trouble reading the next part because you didn't read it, and it was a failure. 3. There is no distinction between primary and secondary. Not to mention entertainment articles, most of them write about entertainment works. After reading dozens of chapters, I only copied two songs from Douyin. The works and work-related articles only accounted for one or two hundredth of the total length, which is a failure. 4. Wrong selection of materials. The two copied songs are hard to resonate with, especially the second one, What the Hell, a failure. ... I just read twenty or thirty chapters. I really can't stand it anymore. I'll just say a few words about the author whose writing style is just okay. After all, it's so bad that I just clicked ×. In addition, I was attracted by the overwhelmingly positive reviews. Am I criticizing the reviews? If so, I will probably delete this article...

I haven't watched it for a month, and it's already broken. In the entertainment industry, just write about things in the entertainment industry, TV series, movies and variety shows. Even if you write about capital operations, you always want to mix black and family ethics. How does this help the plot? How many books have you read and you still don't understand this? The dialogue makes no sense compared to the first few books. The more logic is forced, the more blind alleys are taken, and the character development is lost. Concentrate on writing down your strengths, but you are the only one who wants to magnify your weaknesses.

To be honest, if you can clean up this kind of character, it means you have incorrect views. You can't play it like this if you are just pretending.

The second one was unbearable. In today's society, people with cerebral thrombosis would not be able to commit murder within ten years. This kind of case is actually solved in the writing circle!

Maybe the fat man doesn't know that the book circle and the rice circle are not the same. What songs do you like in the book circle? Go and read the entertainment book about Chang Yu Fengshen by yourself. Besides, Stallion may not be palatable to more than half of current readers.

Chen Feng☞Yang Mi Bai Lingwei☞Dilraba Dong Qingrou☞Tong Liya Ou Yao☞Wang Ou Su Lingyun☞Gu Li Nazha Rong Ye☞Liu Tao Song Ying☞Zhao Liying Zheng Bing and Zheng Xue☞Zheng Xiuyan, Zheng Xiujing

Congratulations to Fatty on his new book. The results of such a beautiful new book are not good for the time being. I think Fatty needs to think about the reasons. Tell me about my confusion when reading fat man novels! I don't know how important and meaningful it is that the protagonist of all novels I write must be Fatty yourself. If it's not so important that you can't write novels otherwise, then definitely change it! In order to adhere to this point, the protagonist in the novel has various amnesia and mental breakdown at the beginning. No matter what kind of protagonist is portrayed, he ends up returning to almost the same previous life. How do readers bring it in? How long can you keep on revising the article because you insist on this? In the end, it will go to the other extreme like the previous book, and go against what the readers want to see (telling the woman who likes the protagonist, "You are not worthy of comparing with my sister" and countless other such words. Is it a grudge against the reader or against Dilraba? It has nothing to do with EQ and IQ. I don't believe that someone would say such a thing without a clear purpose). The new dream of love and war has made most of your die-hards autistic! I don't know, Fatty, if you have a misunderstanding of love (or maybe I have a misunderstanding of what you want to express? Did you just want to write about worship and licking?). It gives me the feeling that one must love like he can't live anymore, and the other not only doesn't love but also doesn't care about the other person (commonly known as careerism, what the hell is this word used?). The male god has such a good momentum at the beginning, but he still has to go back to the dog-licking mode! Regardless of tragedy or comedy, the most touching love is mutual. This does not change, just immerse yourself in your own world and lick endlessly. Whether you can get the pleasure of self-abuse or get something strange, the readers can only leave confused. So in view of the content of the previous book, it's better not to include descriptions that easily remind readers of Dilraba, right? One person is pink and the other is black. Fatty, you seem to like to worship female stars too much. Although the book is not perfect, the beginning is still very attractive. I believe that if you stick to the current situation, readers will come back.

What are the benefits of adding precision? Can you let me experience it personally?

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The book should be sent to female channels. I haven't written much about serious plots. I write about entertainment industry dramas every day, nt. Who wants to read this on male channels?

I always felt that this book was well written, but there was something wrong with it. Then I thought that if it wasn't the protagonist, then it would be a proper villain, with evil views, planting seeds everywhere, and being cunning and cunning.

This describes the process of a male dog that keeps biting people and having sex with women. You want to say it's sweet, but I don't see it. One-on-one is called sweetness, sprinkled with sugar. One-to-many is called group sex, called promiscuity, especially when other people are assisting, and other women are very understanding and admire 👍

It was too poisonous. After he was axed, he called the police. During the investigation, someone died, but the police said that the case was closed. This is suspected of insulting the police. This is not a few decades ago. Even if no one is caught, the case will not be closed hastily, it will just remain hanging. Moreover, the protagonist is still a manipulative figure, and the axing is known to the whole world. The author has no common sense at all and underestimates the power of the country. Secondly, he directly spoke obscenely to the nurse in the hospital, and this is not how he came to be eloquent. He has no moral education at all and is thoughtless. He also calls himself a former artist and uses Douyin to make a comeback. He is irritable during the live broadcast. This account is definitely not the previous author. The previous writing was at least logical, and the protagonist is not a fool.

Dong is Yaya, Chen Feng is Big Power, Bai Lingwei is Hot Bar, Bai Bing is Sika, Bai Xue is Little Crystal, Su Lingyun is Nazha, Zhou Ying is Qiao Xin, and the one who gave him a knife is Jing Tian. Are you guys okay?

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I found a treasure. The author of this book must be very handsome. I love it. 😍

Come on, Fatty, I like the characterization and the handling of emotional lines in your book.