Secrets Come to the Dragon Clan

To be honest, the original text accounts for too much, which does not mean that the original text is not good, but that the style of the original text is obviously different from the author's own writing style, which is easy for people to notice. But the idea of ​​the book is very good, and the story has its own development. But also because of this, the sense of detachment from the original text is even stronger.

This bullshit extra is so fucking speechless

The author writes things in a very silly way... It's just so cute. It's really relaxing and reminds me of that daily show. I suggest the author write more cute, warm and cute things (?)

This book is well written, but there are still several shortcomings 1. The ending is written too hastily, and there are other details that could be written. For example, the Black King splits the four dragon kings and corresponds to the ancient sun god and gives birth to Adam and Amon 2. This book is a side story. It was originally said that it would write about the wedding of Ming Fei and Uesugi, but the pigeon fell out.

Is anyone there? Um... Just a bubble...

About Merlin after he exposed his identity as Cowherd: Klein: The old man in the subway looked at his cell phone. Jpd, blushing, he pulled Merlin back and forced him to rebuild. Sherlock: After receiving a client to investigate whether his wife was cheating on him, he saw Merlin's photo. I was so scared that I couldn't hold the secret camera steady. Hermann: For Whom the Bell Tolls. Dawn: I looked at my wallet and thought about whether I should let Merlin take care of me... Oh no... Take care of Merlin. Xiao Ke dressed as a matryoshka doll: trying to get into the team of rich women and keeping a cowherd. Audrey: Why did Mr. Merlin become a cowherd? Is it because he was short of money? Mr. Merlin, there are 100 million here. Although it is not much, Mr. Merlin can use it temporarily. If it doesn't work out, I'll buy Gao Tianyuan. Amon: Awesome! Sharp! Then he summoned a hundred handsome Amon to steal Merlin's business.

Does the new cover look good

I feel like there are some issues with the characters. Whether it's the characters from the dragon clan or the Mystery side, the writing is a bit too thin. For example, Klein's nickname is Kemiao, but it's just a joke, but some people really regard it as a character. Many characters' behaviors are too taken for granted and labelled.

There are not many people who have read Mystery and Dragons at the same time. This book is going to be cool.

Xia Mi and Chu Zihang became a couple, and Su Qian finally became a dog or a loser. So I suddenly wanted to see Su Qian comfort Su Qi, and the fantasy dog ​​came out for a while 😏

Looking at it, I feel like vomiting. Watching it makes me want to vomit. First of all, in the early stage, I thought it was pretty good-looking and quite interesting, but it just felt a bit too idealistic and dramatic to me. I don't know much about the Dragon Clan, but I have seen Mystery. The three-in-one cats and bugs are part of Klein. They should be mostly divine, but why are there so many of them. . . His demeanor is nothing like the old days when divinity was dominant. Secondly, there are some plots that make me feel a little deviated from the original work, the original work of Lord of Mysteries. For example, in the scene where Mr. Mao Mao Chong meets Odin in Jiangnan Building, he actually uses marionette to go up and warn Odin. What the hell? ? ? You've clearly told Teacher Maomaochong that there's nothing he can do against Odin, so why not shake him? In the original work, Klein usually uses two measures when the enemy is strong and we are weak. One is to escape, and the other is to shake people. There is no need to basically not work alone, what about the author? What's going on? When the marionette was destroyed and he screamed Odin, it really got me. Also, when the hybrid set a trap to catch the world, the world actually stepped on the trap single-handedly? ? ? As a crazy adventurer, how cautious are you? Klein would still drag Azik over, but you just jumped on it? Sequence three is just a projection of history as a persona. Is the character's IQ really determined by the plot? Of course, it may be that I don't understand the Dragon Clan anymore, so I'll go back and finish it and then vomit again.

Author, I feel like you have set the strength of the Dragon Tribe too low. Even the incomplete Dragon King is stronger than many Sequence 4s. Sequences 4 and 3, regardless of whether they are in mythical form or not, were killed by the guns of the steam age. The Dragon King is not so fragile. Even the ordinary Dragon King is stronger than most of the Sequences 4 and 3. The complete Dragon King and Angel are feasible. I always feel that you have set the strength too low, as well as the Dragon Tribe. Jun Yan's expressive power is much stronger than that of Arsonist. Arsonist's control flexibility may be better than Jun Yan's, but his destructive power is not as good as Jun Yan's. And speaking of angels, angels can also be killed by guns and cannons. In the Dragon Clan's world view, many high-tech weapons are very powerful and cannot break Audrey's defense. The Seven Deadly Sins are not written in such a crotch-shaped way. The Lord of Mysteries is not good at defense, and the Gou San family are all fragile. You must know that Mystery is in the steam age, and the Dragon Clan is a modern technological society after the Three Industries. As for the power of modern weapons, they are not weaker than the destructive power of Sequence 4 and Sequence 3. To a certain extent, they can also have angel-level lethality.

I just changed the cover. The previous cover was not authorized. I contacted the artist Taojiao for this one and got the authorization 🙂

How can I put it in the last few chapters? Lu Mingze has started to change and makes people feel like a fool. The most ridiculous thing is that a strange Dragon King appears. It is obviously not from their world. I don't know.

I'd like to know what everyone thinks of the Dragon Clan anime. Now I feel like Jiangnan is just whipping corpses over and over again. The orthodoxy of the Dragon Clan is in the fandom🧐

I can't stand it. It's not that this book is not good, but as a fan of dragons and secrets, it feels neither weird nor southern... The work itself is pretty good, but as a fan, it's a problem that it doesn't look like the original...

Not recommended. Whether it is a dragon fan or a mysterious fan, it is completely OOC. None of the characters are written like that character. It is rare to lose all the dragon and mysterious characters that can be written. Recommended for passers-by who have never read either book.

Although it is a fan novel, I have to say that this is the first time I have seen a novel in which the protagonist is reduced to intelligence 😅

A close friend. . . My thoughts miraculously overlapped 😁 When I was watching Mystery, I happened to be watching Dragons fandom, and I had an idea: Thinking about Klein being entangled with Mysterious consciousness and lost in the world of Dragons, Miss Justice took on the mission to go to the Dragon world to find Klein and help Klein find himself.

This book is neither dragon-like nor mysterious, and all the characters feel like they can be called original characters. I can't watch anymore.

I ordered all the orders in the first 30 minutes of the limited exemption... Just follow me, I am a skirmisher 😭😭

The more I look at it, the more I feel that, except for Klein, all the members of the Secret Church are quite arrogant. The difference between them and the Dragon King in the Dragon Clan is that one of them doesn't hide it and the other looks quite approachable but is actually very arrogant.

In fact, I don't think it's necessary to implement no CP. Miss Justice said it very well. When I read the original work, I felt a little regretful. Xiao Ke and Audrey are really suitable.

What's going on here in Tomb Raider Notes? Even if Zhou Mingrui has no memory and currently thinks of himself as an ordinary person, his essence is the Lord of Mysteries! Are you telling me that he will be scared to death by a forbidden woman? ? ? ? ? ? Regardless of his identity as the Lord of Mysteries, Zhou Mingrui himself is also a person with a strong psychological quality. From the first few chapters of the original text, it can be seen how Zhou Mingrui just became Klein. Even if he lost that memory, this should not be the case! ! ! !

I feel that this book can be written in a deeper way, like the Black King splitting the four monarchs, like Yuantai giving birth to Amon and Adam, it can be seen as eliminating interference. The dragon backstabs the Black King, which corresponds to the Redemption Rose backstabbing Farta. Moreover, the Black King also made a cameo appearance as God in the Dragon Clan worldview, which happened to correspond to Yuta. It can also be written that the Black King is a born mythical creature, but because the dragon bloodline is inherently violent, the impact on the soul is reduced by draining the bloodline. The division of power and power between the Dragon King twins is an experiment to explore the impact of bloodline through bloodline distribution. Later, he was reincarnated into Lu Mingfei, just like Yuantai was resurrected in Adam. He used a just right method to maintain his sanity while mastering power.

Lu Mingfei is not worthy of Hui Liyi, even if he can blow up the world Chu Zihang Caesar even has trouble killing chickens, and there is no sense of disobedience with the original cp

The title of this work can be directly changed to "Mystery Comes to the Dragon Clan as a Nanny", riding on the popularity of the Lord of Mysteries, and scolding Xiao Ke through Lu Mingfei's mouth. In the early stage, Xiao Ke was very speechless. Xiao Ke played a few games with Lu Mingfei and chatted. Lu Mingfei also called Xiao Ke a fool every day, and then Xiao Ke treated him as a younger brother. This was outrageous. Normal people would have fallen out with each other long ago. This book also marked Xiao Ke as the protagonist. , The scenes are pitifully small, and Lu Mingfei is treated as if he is supporting his parents in front of him

Name: Faceless Puppet Source: A Japanese evil genius alchemist accidentally obtained a star worm, and he used this mysterious worm to refine this mask Materials: Spirit Worm (Puppet Master), various Deadpool skins, body fluids of an unlucky second generation species, and the maker's soul fragment Function 1: Possessed ghost The wearer can manipulate the threads of the spirit body like a complete 'Puppet Master', change his own appearance, create illusions, draw paper soldiers, paper man substitutes, telescopic bones, underwater breathing, control fire, fire jump, transfer damage, fire air bombs, divination and psychic, intuitive perception, omnipotent hands, funny smiles Function 2: Perception of dragons Dragon blood alchemy gives the mask wearer additional perception of dragon creatures (including but not limited to pure-blood dragons, deadpools, and hybrids). Divination and prophecy can better perceive dragon-blooded creatures. When there are dragon creatures around, intuitive perception will definitely occur Function 3: Cursed blood (3 times a day) If a hybrid wears this mask, it will be able to transform into a deadpool of its bloodline at will, gaining powerful attack and defense and alien organ blessings And can remain sane in its own state, but it will cause great mental and physical pain The essence is the mutation produced by dragon blood alchemy, faceless and the user's dragon blood Function 4: Nightmare Stage (once a day/charge/hybrid exclusive) As a high-level spiritual insect separated, it still retains some special features of higher levels. When these special features are combined with dragon blood alchemy and the user's own bloodline ability The 'Nightmare Stage' was born The user can distort the surrounding things and distort it to the surrounding reality, and the effect changes with the environment and his or her own spirit But they all have the following effects: all life around them is constantly stiff and sluggish, a large illusion surrounds the surroundings (usually the most feared thing in the hearts of those who live in it), large A large amount of flames flash around in disorder, and the hybrids in the field will always face the double test of body and spirit. The dragon blood in the loser's body will mutate (most of them are not so good things such as "turning into a deadpool") The caster's word spirit bonus Rujun Yan user: multiple hot fireball illusions appear on the stage at the same time The feeling is mixed with a real monarch flame, or the flame flashes and brings a bigger fireball Note: When the stage starts to perform, even the user cannot control everything on the stage. All his abilities, including the 'thread to control the spirit body', are displayed in an orderly manner, forming a stage play, which can only barely maintain itself Negative effects: 1. The wearer will be possessed by the soul fragment of the maker (the maker himself has no influence) 2. Deadpool itself that has exceeded the number of uses is not protected by safety measures 3. The user is also affected by the madness contained in its extraordinary characteristics and is at risk of getting lost 4. The mask cannot be taken off

Xianyu also held a Minor Arcana meeting, and the author is a real prophet 🤭

This book is quite novel. It mainly links dragons and mystery, and there is also tomb robbing in the middle (the weird part and the funny part jump between each other), but it feels unfinished.