Hong Kong Comprehensive Office

What did you write? If you don't pick up girls, you won't get the upper hand? So what's the point of your book?

How should I put it? No one thinks Deep Blue is poisonous, because Deep Blue can only add points and check personal status. Your system is useless except for skin.

The only one who writes paragraph reviews. Both the subordinates and the protagonist have systems, don't force any subsystems, it will be very poisonous.

What system writers are most afraid of is a system that can talk.

I threw up and accepted the mission, but my subordinate actually said that the system would trigger the mission. If you want to write that you must be loyal when accepting subordinates, just sign a contract and tacitly agree that you will be loyal. There is a system that is publicized and everyone knows about it, right?

What's the matter? I don't have a girlfriend. The women belong to others, and there is no sense of involvement at all.

The protagonist's strength is extremely suppressed. When one's kung fu reaches the point of turning one's strength into energy, one's cultivation is also the cultivation of an earth master. But a back and forth fight with a drug dealer? Any gang that comes out is always dark and powerful. I can't even remember how many masters there are after reading Chapter 70.

I can talk to the system and divide the sub-system to bind to others. Can what two people know be called a secret? When I get my golden finger, I will give it to others first. Farewell

The last few sentences in Chapter 12 disgusted me. How could they be pretentious? Do you think I am not suitable for this place? I threw up.

Le Huizhen

Uncle Da

The subsystem is not pleasing to the eye, so it's better to change it.

Zhang Hua

Zhu Wanfang

Forcibly blending the plot together, one person plays several roles. Not interesting to watch

It doesn't matter what the system is, the key is that it's heavily profiled. While there's nothing wrong with stacking good stories together, at least the key points should be highlighted. There is nothing wrong with boiled water, it also needs to have ups and downs

The poisonous point appeared in Chapter 6. I have practiced martial arts to the point of dark strength + practiced Taoism to the level of human master, but I can't defeat 30 stinky gangsters? It was a middle school student who called me.

The author's writing is quite wonderful, but it's a bit unacceptable to write Da Jun to death. It's rare for a novel to write Da Jun as a good guy and still die like this. Alas

The writing is a bit casual, and the plot moves very quickly. The key is that the author probably hasn't watched many movies, so the writing is not up to par.

Do all those who write about Hong Kong dramas have this serious problem? Lok Huizhen, Ya Zi Haitang, I like this one so much, there are a few of them in one visit.

I can't grasp the key points and just write according to the original work, which is not interesting.

This is considered to be finished writing or entering the palace. It has not been updated for so long.

You can slip away after reading Chapter 2

Mediocre

The characterization is very average and has no special characteristics.

You are so cowardly. You have a system and strength. You don't cause trouble. If someone pretends to be cool with you, you don't fight back. You still greet them with a smile. Rubbish.

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I'm looking for a Hong Kong TV series with the heroine Overlord Flower. Can you guys recommend it?