Ultra I Am Zero's Twin Brother

Wing? Fantasy started? Does Ultraman still need wings?

If you want to complain, just complain, but don't go too far. When you see the novel after my hard work, you are complaining, just like He You, I highly recommend it~ It's really heartwarming.

After reading some, I will give you a review. 1. The best number of words per chapter is 2000~2500. More than 1,000 words feels a bit too little. 2. The description is a bit sloppy and feels rushed 3. There is no sense of immersion in the character's character. It does not refer to the protagonist's character, but to the character of other people. It doesn't feel like that person. 4. The combat is quite poor, but this is not a big problem. I am getting better as I write. The same is true for me. I was told that the combat was poor many times in the early stage. 5. The description makes me look a little bit. . . It's uncomfortable. I suggest the author take a look at it before posting to see if it can be smoothed out. To sum up, come on, make progress slowly. We are all newbies, so take your time.

It's not that you're complaining too much, it's that what you wrote is so messy and messy that I didn't understand it at all.

I don't want to see the wings anymore, there's too much nonsense

The setting is very interesting. Will it be updated?

Forget it, I don't count on it anymore. It's on the list, and then it falls off. Life is like this, ups and downs, ups and downs. Can't you fall in love with me?

Se~

Can the author charge no fees for this novel?

I suggest that the plot in the following articles is not good, and I hope the author can change it a lot. The fighting should be written in detail instead of going to the next world after the fight, that is, the connection should be written to a world we are familiar with instead of a random world. However, I think the author has worked hard on this issue. For readers, the article should be better written and not too monotonous. If the article is not well written, it will be really hard to read. For example, the author of Ultraman Senki wrote well and I was motivated to read it. The author of Ultra Time Legend also did a good job, but the updates are too slow.

What the hell, all the plot is over in a few sentences

Let me ask a question, how old is the author and has he ever written a paper? You put me off in the first chapter, and it made me feel like you were still a junior high school student.

After reading the first ten chapters, the biggest problem is that the dialogue with the author is too dramatic.

Does the author Great Seth have a heroine?

Is there a female protagonist? If not, just watch~

Did you write it so casually?,,,,,,,