Genshin Impact: Start Again from Where the Dream Begins

The writing is a bit immature, but still good, just a little lacking.

The content is good, but the language is a bit immature. It is recommended not to go off-topic in the book, as this can easily distract readers from the book. There is room for improvement, come on, I hope your work will get better😃🙏

The writing style is a bit immature, but it's pretty good for a first-time book writer. I hope you can stick with it, and don't be too eunuch. Many new books with potential are lost like this.

It's not bad, but the setting needs to be a little more detailed and the writing should be more focused, otherwise it would look a bit messy. Come on

Is there a new book in Genshin Impact? Come support

By the way, are you planning this book for a single girl, two girls, or a harem? If you are not sure about it, I do not recommend a harem. I personally recommend two women.

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