Super Divine Martial Taoist of Xinghai

Come on, author, I'll help you promote it in the book club of Super Mechanic.

Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I can already rate it. There were a lot of problems in the early stages of this article. For example, the author was not familiar with the fragmented background. As a result, although the protagonist's background in this life could be sorted out in the chapter Maple Moon Recall, the impression was very ordinary. And doing so doesn't bring much satisfaction, because the protagonist's previous performance makes this a matter of course. If it is explained clearly at the beginning, it can actually endorse the protagonist's early confidence. In addition, we will not go into details about the plot rhythm, sentence segmentation and other issues that affect the perception. After the protagonist is promoted to B level, the plot arrangement gradually becomes better. It is worth watching for readers who like super gods but do not reject the pseudo-invincible style. As for the author's self-pleasure from time to time, that is a small problem and the overall impact is not big. Due to the lack of clarity in the writing of the mid-to-late Star Relic copies, there is a certain threshold for readers who have not understood it. In summary, this book is the debut work of a new author after all, and some problems are unavoidable. However, as an online fanfic, it is passable even in the larger environment of online fanfiction. The main reason why I couldn't even get a contract was that I missed the last train of Super God's popularity. If I could publish an article in 20 years, or when the animation starts airing next year, it shouldn't be difficult to get it on the shelves. Another fanfic about Infinite World, one of the early original volumes was able to be put on the shelves, relying on the gimmick of Super God's first fanfic. Therefore, because the rhythm of this article was not well controlled in the early stage, it is not necessarily a bad thing to suddenly become a pseudo-invincible flow. It is purely a practice.

I wanted to play Super God three times, but I came here after reading the comments. Don't jump on it, brother. Leather armor! Come on!!!

A super mechanic is here. Come on, author~ Describe the star sea world from another angle

Since you are a martial arts master, you should first get through the early stage with good air control skills, gain some advanced advanced knowledge, then add some mental resistance, directly step on the left foot with the right foot and spiral up to the sky. Is the mage the nemesis of martial arts? Hammer him! Leather armor! Charge me!!!

Is it because of the title of the book? I couldn't find this fanfic when I searched for Super Mechanic, but I found it in the comments of the original book.

Brothers, do you have any recommendations for other second creations from Super Mechanic? I feel that Xinghai is really a world that is particularly suitable for second creation. I don't know why no one seems to be writing about it. 😟

Come on, author, vote for recommendation

The author's writing is very good, but I feel that the upgrade is a bit fast. I hope it doesn't crash.

What type of book does the author plan to write next?

The protagonist's plug-in is very invincible. The total level is only level 2, which is the natural disaster level 🤓

Should we change it to say that the heavens start from the sea of ​​stars? Super God is almost over, right?

I'm also a super mechanic. Come on.

Keep writing, the ending is wrong

What the hell is a dancer like you that has super powers? . .

Recommended by a book friend, it's okay, there are too few mechanics fans.

By the way, super gods can live forever, right? It seems that the original work did not introduce it. . .

I would like to ask if there are any other Super Mechanic fan fiction books being updated.

I also wanted to write a fanfic, but I felt that the writing was not good enough. I wrote a lot of settings, but never started writing.

I'm a big-game maggot. I need a wheelchair.

Restores physical strength and causes the same amount of fixed damage

From Tieba, my evaluation is: not as good as Mo Shen

Don't follow the example of leather armor, one update or two updates (๑ŐдŐ)b