Starting from Liu Bei's Rescue of Xuzhou

This is a personal discussion, not a war-provoking post. It does not comment on Liu Bei's benevolence or hypocrisy, nor does it comment on the hero Cao Cao. To be honest , if you were in the Three Kingdoms, which one do you most resemble, from the emperor to the peasants, including the Southern Barbarians, Qiang people, Huns, etc. For example, I, a farmer, may not be named in history books anyway.

If a hypocrite can pretend for a lifetime, then he is a gentleman.

The surrounding situation map is roughly what it means. If there are any errors or omissions, you can point them out.

They are also fans of Ji Han's idealists. From admiring Cao Cao in his youth to now experiencing society, he admires Liu Bei even more. He has been wandering all his life and is perseverant. He does not massacre cities or kill people at will. He is a true hero. Most of the people in the entire Liu Bei group are romantic idealists and fight to revive the Han Dynasty in their hearts. It is really great. I hope the author can continue to write, come on! There are so many people on the Internet who criticized Liu and Zhuge in the early years, and it's really hard to stand them 😟

After reading ten chapters, I would like to ask if the writing style will still be the same in the following chapters? If yes, forget it. The author may have wanted to write it in a light and humorous way, but I found it awkward and out of place.

In the Eastern Han Dynasty, single names were noble and double names were cheap.

I just want to know if the 2,000-year history of China in the introduction is serious? Did China only exist after the birth of Jesus?

If you want to write a book, just write a book. If you want to be more vivid, just look for a picture book and storybook to write, but the writing is so trivial! Moreover, the author himself should not mix in too much personal information, because you may not have a thorough understanding of this book among readers! A novel is not an argumentative essay, but a complete story. The purpose of quoting from other sources is to better understand the novel, not to show the author's high level!

It's a bit strange to read. It feels like the author is writing prose, not a novel.

This book has a great sense of fragmentation. At the beginning, the author wrote about Liu Bei's journey, which aroused my expectations. However, the author directly discouraged me in the subsequent plot. I thought there would be a famous scene like Long Zhong's pair later, but later it would be a lighthearted and funny scene, but I couldn't appreciate it anyway. The poison resistance is full and I can't bear it any longer, so I'll try again slowly. .

The characters are very unlikeable, including the main character. It's pretentious. It can be seen that the author took reference from the interpretation, but did not write out the romantic and bold character in the interpretation. Instead, it revealed a petty atmosphere. If you don't understand this or that, you'll get angry, and you'll get angry just by looking at it. It can be seen from the choice of words and sentences that the author has a certain cultural background, but it is not clear how old the author is? Have you basically never come into contact with online literature? It can be seen between the lines that I wanted to write something more playful, but it was too deliberate and inappropriate. It is better to have a more serious and atmospheric style in the style of imitating ancient prose. The playful ones are mostly suitable for the light style of vernacular writing. On the contrary, I don't think this book looks at young people, pretentious, and petty. No one is likeable.

A gag? If so, I don't want to read it 😅 The first 5 chapters were quite normal, but when I reviewed the Yellow Turban later, I felt that the writing became more and more outrageous... I don't know if the style will be the same later.

The introduction to the book is poorly written, it would be best to delete it and rewrite the introduction.

I persisted until the fourth chapter and was persuaded to leave by the guard. I fought for the word count and jumped back and forth. It is really not suitable for me.

Come on, come on, author, here I am, you are welcome to come and play at my place (^_^)

I'm the one spelling with you today. I took the time to read your book. It can be seen that the author has a relatively strong writing skills and a lot of ideas that he wants to write, but he probably does not have much experience in writing online articles. Being able to write 200,000 words is pretty good. I briefly read one or two chapters, but didn't read the rest. Let's talk about the issue of names first. During the Three Kingdoms period, it was the same as in the Han Dynasty. Single names were valued and double names were valued. If you look across the entire Three Kingdoms, you won't be able to find a few people with double names. Taishici Ci was resurrected, Sima Yi was resurrected, and there is too little information about Wu Anguo. Some say that the surname was Wu An, while others said that Wu's surname was Anguo. I didn't look carefully later, so I don't know whether the author gave those people double names or pseudonyms. If it's a pseudonym, I think generally when you write, you shouldn't write people's pseudonyms. You should call them by their first names. Only in dialogues with characters do you need to use pseudonyms. Otherwise, it will look a little confusing, or it will feel awkward because you don't know the odd and even characters of basic names of people from the Three Kingdoms. But I can tell that you still have a lot of knowledge. Keep writing, keep at it, think more and more, even if this book doesn't work, you will definitely get results in the future. I'm optimistic about you👍👍👍

Is the protagonist starting a business or working part-time?

If Lu Bu is defeated and Xuzhou does not allow him to surrender, will Yuan Shao of Beitou or Yuan Shu of Nantou

Liu Bei and Cao Cao had known each other since they were students in Luoyang.

If good guys want to defeat bad guys, they have to be smarter than bad guys.

I haven't read it yet, but I think it's good after reading the mixed reviews in the comments section, so I'll bookmark it first. The author really should rewrite the introduction. Forget the title of the book, the introduction is not interesting at all. . .

If you open a new book, kick me

One update a day is not a problem.

What if someone makes a fuss about the Yellow Turban Army later?

The author is wrong to belittle Wang Mang. Wang Mang should be a traveler of future generations in another parallel world. The other world should be the world where our Han family dominates.