My Disciples and Grandsons Are so Filial

Not bad, I invested 10,000, come on

I would like to give you some advice, some parts of the internet language are a bit too confusing. . . Especially if it is used on some male characters, it would be very inconsistent.

I actually finished the book. Alas, I hope I can continue to work hard.

It's a medium opening. It's good in the early stage, but it becomes uncomfortable to read in the middle. It's forced to use gags, and I think your book should be divided into upper, middle and lower realms. Each realm has a certain upper limit for cultivation level. Shattered Void is the strongest. Because of your start, if you don't write this way, it will be difficult for you in the later stage.

The character of Xia Lin is well portrayed, but Zou Weixue is not that likable. Also, cheers for the author

Come on, your writing is much better than mine.