My Copy Was so Popular

Regarding the price issue mentioned by book friends, I spent half an hour re-changing the price. I hope everyone will be satisfied. If you find any price contradictions, you can tell me in this chapter. Thanks

Bai Blind is such a good subject, it must be disgusting 😰

The protagonist is a scumbag Over there, he is ambiguous with Mu Wanqing and also has an affair with Kou or something Then the author comes out and lightly says that they are not the heroine Why are you writing if they are not the heroine? When we are blind?

If you can't write the emotional line well, don't write it, it's poisonous! ! !

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I feel that the author has a very upright attitude. At least after reading the comments, he modified the content and did not delete the comments. How to say, whether the writing is good or not is another matter, but the above is still better than many authors, but you are too poisonous. Even if you change it later, you will lose the readers who died due to poisoning. Read your own book, no matter how you read it, you can find a real Internet writer who has been writing for ten years and let him take a look. It is a drug detection tool.

I think too highly of myself. It seems that my poison resistance is not as high as I thought. I can only see that in Chapter 27, I am willing to lose. A good subject was wasted. Thank you, author. Goodbye.

If you can mention it to an NPC in the dungeon, it should still be female. I can't stand it anymore. You either have a harem, or you have a single woman or no heroine. Why do you write a story that doesn't please both parties? You don't have the writing skills of a master.

Dungeon S level, Naruto SS level, Conferred God SSS, Naruto is so awesome

Regarding Lin Qing also being a time traveler, everyone thinks it's poisonous Author's reply: Lin Qing and Lin Yu are not only siblings, but actually have another relationship. Lin Qing traveled with Lin Yu because she traveled through time. As for her true identity, you will surely find out if you are more careful. And she will be the key to breaking the game in the final volume. I hope everyone will bear with me. I will try to delete her time traveler scenes, and more of them will be daily.

Author, when you write and make games, write and make games well, and then give some benefits and so on, which is good. If you write a copy of the game at the end of the game, you can write a story line of your personal ending. But you have to be a referee and a player, so you are destined to be criticized by people on both sides.

It's a pity that I couldn't write about the sense of surprise that aboriginals who don't understand anything (no derogatory meaning) feel when they see zombies and ghosts for the first time. And since it is written as a role-playing game, I might as well watch Mugen Stream based on the original plot. Play horse-fork operation, go for magic modification, for example, when Mr. Zombie went to burn incense, his posture was wrong and offended the ghosts, so he directly played GG; For example, if he did not take corresponding countermeasures, Master Ren would absorb all his blood relatives in one night, become invincible, and then the team would be destroyed; For example, let the players directly play the role of Uncle Nine (no skills or less skill version), without the hell difficulty of being dragged by the boss; In short, directly copying the original plot is the most boring way

To be honest, no matter what type of novel, when I see a second time traveler besides the protagonist, my brain will ache😅

Dungeon s, Zhuxian ss, has the author played dungeons before?

Some suggestions for the author (after all, the author also said that he would reopen the book) First of all, the subject matter is okay, but some places are toxic 1. The price that everyone commented on the most. The author can do two things here. One is to only write the online behind-the-scenes flow, or he can upload a copy and then show off the route in reality. The second is to continue to sell offline, but the price needs to be changed to "normal". Book friends will read the book into "reality" and do not engage in anti-human operations 2 Emotional line. If you don't have the strength, don't touch this thing. You can have no heroine. There are two extremes of bulldozing, just don't write about the details of the two people getting along. Don't step on the thunder (a single heroine is fine, the heroine of the all-round game designer in the first book of the richest man has almost no role) In a word, the setting of the novel can be wild and unrestrained, but it cannot be too far away from reality. After all, the readers will feel that they are substituted when reading the book.

Chapter 48: My sister also came through? I have been reading books for so many years. Although my level may not be high, I have still seen a little more. I dare not say that double penetration will lead to death, but it is definitely a powerful tool to persuade people to retreat. As an author, you may be a newbie, but you have read a lot of books. What do you think? Can you talk about your journey? How many books have you read about double wear and group wear? In fact, including the previous Mu, no matter what kind of character, ability, etc. Characters are needed, you can create new ones. There is no need to take risks. Also, the author reads his works from the perspective of his mind, so he feels that many characters and events are useful and reasonable. But you are not a popular master, or your writing skills are super high. Many readers of online articles do not have much patience. When they see some so-called poisonous points, they will not consider the explanation behind it, whether it is reasonable, or whether they will come back to their senses. I quite like this subject matter. I will say a few more words. My personal understanding is for reference only. I wish the author better and better.

I hope the author can restrain his thoughts. Some things are not that others have not thought of, but that someone who has tried it really cannot write it. This secretary is willful and paranoid, and this double penetration really left me speechless. The emotional scenes are really complicated. I would like to give you some suggestions. You can learn from the "Almighty Game Designer" by Qing Shiqu Zui, which is basically the industry benchmark.

There is a book written in Poisonous Point. The books written 20 years ago would not have been so disgusting. If you can't write well, just go to the city and write pretense and slap in the face.

What can I say? Most of the readers of this type of book do not watch you defeat monsters and upgrade, but watch how you use our diversified content to influence people in the post-travel world to see their shock, humor, differences, etc. If you look at this type of book, there are many books about fighting monsters and upgrades, cultivating immortals, virtual online games, and fighting in other worlds.

When I saw Chapter 4, I just wanted to run away. For no reason, just three words, Long Aotian directly persuaded him to quit. I couldn't stand it. Now Long Aotian is more poisonous than any other poisonous spot. Maybe it can be said that almost all the people named Long Aotian in the starting point have gone to the street, or maybe it doesn't matter if they mention Long Aotian in other websites.

Reply to the poisonous points, 1. I originally wanted to write a funny plot about Qiu Wenjun, but the result seems not to be reflected. I will adjust her part in the near future. My positioning of her is that of a somewhat willful and paranoid personal secretary who is responsible for handling the male protagonist's future career. 2. I have thought about the origin of the system from the beginning. It has its own story and identity, and self-awareness is a must. But please rest assured that it is not a BOSS, and there is no problem of the system controlling the character growth of the protagonist. 3. The emotional drama will only be practiced occasionally, and it will be brushed off. 4. Regarding issues such as the price level of the dungeon, there will be a major update after the Tianlong dungeon ends. At that time, there will be epic changes, and the protagonist's business will also change accordingly.

Bit off more than you can chew! The author is too greedy and wants to get his hands on everything, so what he writes is just a mess of words.

It feels more and more wrong the more I look at it, it feels a bit disgusting and childish.

The main reason is that the main line is not clear, and the wife in the dungeon is not strange, and there is no need to write it if it can't express emotions. Then, the dungeon is used as a selling point, so the focus is on the communication between the dungeon participants and the designer. The subject matter is not bad. There have been similar themes in the past. There was a novel about two Cai Yan fighting. So the author still hasn't figured out how to write it.

It's so messy, even if I can see it, I still don't understand what's going on.

I was forced to join the Play Management Bureau and was persuaded to quit. It's really disgusting over there, but I'm still thinking about joining here, tsk

I think the writing style is okay, and I also like the subject matter, but I just find it disgusting. Especially the plot of the protagonist in real life and the plot of Mu Wanqing that I have seen so far. The protagonist does not have a harem. A drug-free and a husband?

The subject matter is good and the writing skills made me want to fast forward and then flip through the pages to find the good ideas. I flipped it to the shelf in 2 hours.

Creativity can choose themes and skills that are described bluntly. Spring and Autumn Calligraphy

I don't understand the setting (maybe I missed it), how does the protagonist obtain the key, and are there any consumption or restrictions?