My Extraordinary Love Experience

Don't accept it. Take a look at how many chapters you have written in a restart time. It is just to pave the way for extraordinary beings. It has become a self-defeating step for the grandmother.

You can feel that the author really wanted to write it well. It's so well written. But forgive me for not being able to appreciate it. It's too slow. What can I say just by looking at it? Just unhappy 😠

The writing is pretty good, I just hope it doesn't collapse later. Speaking of time loops, some people should feel it. Otherwise, why would they protect the world?

Frequently digging holes, the prelude was too long, I couldn't stand it any longer, so I withdrew.

I like to write brain-burning plots, but I haven't thought through the basic logic clearly. The protagonist is like a naive player who keeps trying and making mistakes without any summary or precautionary measures. It's just the same trial and error with nothing new.

I am very curious, Whether space is king in fantasy, time is supreme or Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian in Xianxia can initially grasp the timeline How can a little Nascent Soul garbage like you be able to point fingers and plan for people with the ability to retrace time? Time is an extremely top level in any world view. Big late stuff. This hasn't even revealed the entire worldview. The early mini-boss actually discovered that time can be traced back and he can also plan time? Even if the materialistic worldview is irreversible, this idealistic worldview is outrageous.

The protagonist wanted to save a school girl, but he didn't know when the time loop would end, so he had to save her every day. However, he was killed during the rescue process. He also said that there was no fear in the time loop, so what happened? Aren't you afraid that the time loop will suddenly end now? Just very confused

Yun Xia's time restarts so well, I can't live with the whole world and reset indefinitely? If you look uncomfortable, I won't say anything and return the favor 😅

It's not easy to restart that section after watching the time. Introduction, there are too many explanations, please write more about the main plot. The protagonist's extraordinary and love experiences should be written together to highlight the theme. As for the introduction, it is about a single female protagonist, not a double female protagonist.

As the book goes on, the protagonist's taste has changed. At first, he wanted to save the elementary school girl. In order to find the order manager, he went to the hospital and rescued the order manager. Then he got the magic machine and started the honey operation. People came to ask how the pig's feet knew it would explode. The pig's feet were hidden from others, so they withdrew and couldn't withstand it.

I have read a lot in the previous chapters. . I feel like the protagonist is like a fool... The setting is interesting, but as far as the first volume (time loop) is concerned, there is nothing attractive about this book.

I've been single for a long time, so I'm going to be cautious? I have been single for more than 18 years now, and I dare to go out on rainy days without being struck by lightning. One year, a dazzling lightning flashed in front of my eyes, and I just felt warm. Haha, the author's words puzzled me 😏

I think it's okay, I'll add a post for you.

It's pretty good, but I feel like my combat power is a bit low. Keep up the good work.

I think it's okay, but the plot is too draggy

Why are there so few people? Someone support me and put this book on the recommendation list 🙂

Don't be a swordsman. This road is ruined and the street lights have been built. You need to come up with new ideas. Gunslinging is so interesting. I have the AK in my hand. I have the world.

Starting from Chapter 50, I read a lot of settings and felt numb. I couldn't stand it any more. I'd rather learn about theology and history, right?

Sometimes I think the hero is a fool

I felt that the plot was very slow until it was released. After two chapters, it was still the same. The author wrote a lot, but readers can't know much.

Writing a novel feels like you are trying to make up the word count, procrastinating and grinding. Author, why don't you write down all the steps to go to the toilet and write a few hundred words. I am speechless and slipped away.

Come on, I will always support you!

After reading the first plot at the beginning, I can understand the point that the author wants to express, and I can also feel that the author is very serious about writing this plot, but it is too long. Really, the expression is very dull 😅 Part of the description also seems that the male protagonist is very stiff and grinding The creativity is very good, and the plot can be adjusted to make it popular. If you have the conditions and energy, it is best to redo the beginning and delete some procrastinating parts.

Come on come on! 😁

This Tuzki is written very awkwardly and affects the perception.

How should I put it? There is nothing poisonous about the book, but there is nothing addictive about it. It can attract you to read and pass the time. Overall, it is just mediocre.